【正文】 表示希望他能來中國。，尺寸很合適，你非常喜歡。請你給他寫一封回信（100個詞左右）表示感謝。（2）根據(jù)提示和要求完成下面短文假如你（Li Lei）在去年夏令營認識的一個朋友Jim從英國給你寄來一件禮物—— 一件紅色的襯衫，并附有一封信。注意：1．字數(shù)：80詞左右。2．乘汽車去大約要花1個小時；也可以乘火車去。假設外國友人到你校參觀后，準備去旅游。寫全文： Dear Bob, I got your letter ’m very glad to be your pen name is Zhang ’m fifteen years old, live in ’m a middle school student, like English and physics very also like sports, but I’m good at know a little about you tell me something more about your country in your next letter? I hope we’ll meet in China some ’m sure we’ll have a good time write(to)me , Zhang Qiang 6改病句：認真復查一邊，如有錯誤，加以改正。：根據(jù)來信判斷，寫回信必須包括以下要點：收到對方的來信；愿意和對方交朋友；自己的姓名、年齡和住址；自己的身份、特長和愛好；自己的希望。Hello！I’m your new name is ’m ’m live in New I am a middle school ’m good at is very favourite sport is I am not only a basketball fan but also a good like pop friends and I often sing pop songsAfter school, I am interested in getting have known a lot about China from the I’m learning hope I will visit your country one write to me and tell me something about your ’m looking forward to hearing from Dear Bob, _________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ Yours，Zhang Qiang 【解析】根據(jù)前面提到第六個步驟，我們來寫一下這篇書面表達。回信的開頭、結尾已給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)。要求：，從中獲得你需要的信息?！局锌挤独浚ü?題，計10分）假如你叫張強。每年閱卷老師在十來天的時間里要看十幾萬考生的作文，工作量之大，時間之緊，可想而知。6）人稱是否用錯。4）時態(tài)、語態(tài)錯誤。2）拼寫有無錯誤。因此，中考時花幾分鐘時間用來檢查錯誤顯得尤為重要。因此，改錯這一環(huán)節(jié)必不可少。(6)改病句：認真檢查，改正錯誤。如遇到個別要點表達不出來或難以表達，可采用變通的辦法，化難為易，化繁為簡。中考作文給分是以要點和語言準確度而定，不以文采打分。上下文的連貫性也是評分的一條原則，因此同學們應把寫好的句子，根據(jù)故事情節(jié)，事情發(fā)生的先后次序（時間或空間），使用一些表示并列、遞進等過渡詞進行加工整理，使文章連貫、自然、流暢。5）動作描寫：e, go, get, have, take, bring, fetch 等。3）內心境界：glad, happy, sad, excited, anxious, interested 等。(4)描寫人物時，要生動具體，例如：1）外表特征：tall, short, fat, thin, strong, weak, ordinarylooking 等。4）注意冠詞用法，例如： He is an honest 。2）主謂語要一致，主語的人稱和數(shù)要和謂語一致。(3)注意語法、句法知識的靈活運用。可適當多使用陳述句、一般疑問句、祈使句和感嘆句。幾種句型可交替使用，以避免重復和呆板。：定出時態(tài)、人稱、順序、開頭、結尾。：為寫作做好準備。要點是給分的一個重要因素。審題要審格式、體裁、人物關系、故事情節(jié)、主體時態(tài)、活動時間、地點等。怎樣才能切中題意？就是要認真審題，看到考題后，先不要急于動筆，要仔細看清題目要求的內容。：要切中題意。要求自己在20分鐘內寫出100個詞的短文，并且質量高、1 內容全、形式正確。從根據(jù)提示詞寫單句開始，到寫單句，然后到寫幾句話，最后到寫流利的文段。每練一篇書面表達題，都要真正學到一點東西，不可貪多而邊學邊忘。大量的背誦和閱讀是提高寫作能力的有效辦法，同學們若有大量的現(xiàn)成語言積累在腦海里，自己寫起文段來，就可以做到脫口而出，或是模仿、套用，甚至發(fā)揮。同樣，要使自己具有較強的寫作能力，首先應該熟讀和背誦一些句型和短文。認真系統(tǒng)復習和背誦基礎知識和優(yōu)美的句子、句型。無論是那一種書面表達形式，考生所寫的短文都要緊扣主題、文理通順，要素完整，語言準確、得當、格式正確、無大、小寫和拼寫錯誤，標點符號正確，能達到交際目的。farthest /furthest rude ： 第二篇：書面表達中考英語書面表達的考點集匯、講解和訓練【考點掃描】書面表達是每年中考必考題型，是考查學生交際能力的一個重要組成部分。least 。best 。either… or… 要么……要么…… neither…nor… 既不……也不……whether…or… 是/不論……還是…… not only…, but(also)… 不但……而且…… when it es to… 當涉及到…… from… to … 從…….到……on the one hand ….on the other hand … 一方面……另一方面…… not…but…不是…而是…...…was / were doing … 正在做某事，突然…… be about to do sth when… 正要做某事，突然…… be on the point of doing … 正要/即將做某事，突然 ……h(huán)ardly …when = no sooner…than 一…就 There was a time when… 有一段時間；曾經 take it for granted that… 認為……理所當然 make it a rule that… 把……作為規(guī)定 make it clear that… 聲明 make it + do …… find / think / consider it+ do …… make oneself +過去分詞 使自己被…… judging from / by 由……判斷 all things considered 全盤考慮；整體看來 only to see/ find/ discover 結果卻看見/發(fā)現(xiàn) to make things worse 更糟糕的是 。in a mess 亂七八糟 in a hurry 匆匆忙忙 in a …condition 處于……狀態(tài) as a matter of fact 事實上 the other day 幾天前 e to an end 結束 have a gift for 在……有天賦 at a loss 不知所措 all of a sudden 突然 once in a while 偶爾 once upon a time 從前 go on a diet 節(jié)食 keep a diary 寫日記 do favor 幫某人一個忙 give lift 給某人提供順風車 as a result 結果 keep an eye on 照看 have a word with 和某人談話 a waste of 浪費 a series of 一系列 make the most / best of 充分利用 on the spot / scene 在現(xiàn)場 at the moment 此時此刻 take the place of 取代；替代 in the daytime 在白天 in the distance 在遠方 in the end 最終 on the whole 總體上 on the left / right 在左/右邊 at the same time 同時 in the air / sky 在空中 for the time being 暫時 in a word 總之 in the 1980s 二十世紀八十年代 all over the world 全世界 in the beginning 起初 by the way 順便說一下 at noon 在中午 at night 在晚上 at dawn 在黎明 at dusk 在黃昏 in public 當眾 by bus 坐公共汽車make great progress 取得很大的進步Yours, (以with為例)be angry with be filled with 裝滿；充滿 be strict with ……對某人嚴格 be crowded with 擁擠 be connected with 連接 be flooded with 充斥；涌入 be familiar with 對……熟悉/ 不熟悉 be pared with 比較 be popular with 流行；受歡迎 be covered with 覆蓋 be patient with 對……有耐心 be faced with 面臨 be concerned with 關于；與..有關 be concerned about 擔心。結尾段：希望對方接受建議+盼望回復 hope you will take my advice into :（長郡中學月考3+2008全國卷2）Dear Li Mei, Your letter came as a surprise to me didn’t know you were suffering so much should have written to you earlier!We must admit that life sometimes is not so is part of life, especially when we are growing up, right? Your classmate laughed at your failure? Forget it!It is probable that he or she didn’t mean to hurt possible, have a chat with him or her, telling him or her what you are feeling say you want to drop out of school, because it is not a good way to solve the you should do right now is to calm yourself and try to think of the things that make you cheer up whenever you face 、告知信 / 介紹信開頭段: 問候+寫作背景+寫作目的1．Thank you for your letter asking about ….Here I’ like to tell you something about it./ I’d like to tell you some information about it./ I’ m writing to tell you some details about it./ I’ d like to tell you some detailed information about ：告訴對方的具體要點。中間段：活動安排 are some details about this activity./ The following are some details about this activity./ Some details about this activity are as begin with, we will… Besides, there will be a lot of activities such as… which will… ’m sure you will have a good time/ have fun/ enjoy yourself together with ：希望對方接受邀請+盼望回復 would appreciate it if you could accept my hope that you will accept our invitation if it is convenient for :（長郡中學二模 +2012全國卷2+2015全國卷2）Dear , New Year’s Day is school will hold some activities to enrich our afterschool will be a singing petition, a handwriting petition and book sales for days we are devoted to the preparation work for a book sale and I think we are sure to learn a lot from the boo