【正文】 important in our ：I think we get much when we help the people around the saying goes, “Giving is much better than receiving.”最后，有了積累，有了欣賞之后，我們得練筆。當(dāng)然，出乎意料的結(jié)尾如果有助于深化主題也是可取的，有時(shí)簡短的一句話也可以結(jié)束全文。結(jié)尾段的寫法要取決于開頭段以及中間部分的展開情況。因此，作為畢業(yè)班的考生，要想使自己的文章也寫得像行家那么漂亮，我們要做的功課是，平時(shí)多積累詞匯、短語、句型，多看好的范文，多學(xué)習(xí)別人的優(yōu)點(diǎn)，這樣我們的文章才能越寫越好?！痉段男蕾p】Dear ,Wow, so quickly!The summer holiday is ing!I feel so glad to tell you something about this summer classmates seem crazy when they talk about what they will do on of them plan to go out for a trip to relax some want to read a lot of books at want to prepare for the future are also some students hoping to take part in sport their minds, sport exercise is very important to our for me, I will go to the one hand, I want to refresh my spirit and prepare a good mood for the next the other hand, I can experience some country culture and get close to a word, I will try my best to make my holiday wishes!Yours,Monica【亮點(diǎn)點(diǎn)評】這封信按照要求將每條都寫全了，行文流暢，思路很清晰，并將自己的暑期安排以及理由寫出來了，用到了短語On one hand，On the other hand，使文章條理很清楚。⒊ 比較對比概念：the way, just as, while ,however, on the other spite of, instead.⒋ 表結(jié)果：as a result, therefore, in this way.⒌ 表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)： generally speaking, in my view, in my believeTo my knowledgefrom my point of viewI meanthat is to sayin other wordsit seems to me that⒍ 舉例：for examplefor instanceas an exampleas another examplesuch as⒎ 表讓步：although(though)no matter how(who)howeverin spite ofanyhowanyway⒏ 表強(qiáng)調(diào)：certainlyclearlysurelyto be sureafter allindeedabove allwithout doubtno doubtmost importantin factas a matter of fact 例如：As a matter of fact , he didn’t know it ,either.⒐ 總結(jié)：all in allto sum up in a word(一言以蔽之)in a wordin short請看一篇范文：暑假將至，同學(xué)們就自己的暑假生活安排進(jìn)行了交流。以下是一些常見的副詞性連接詞：⒈表示增加的事實(shí)：also, besides, as well as, in addition.⒉表順序：(1).First, second, .(2).the first, the second, the third, the last.(3).To begin with, then , finally.(4).first and foremost, besides, last but not least.(5).Most important of all, what’s more, finally.(6).On the one hand, on the otherhand(適用于兩點(diǎn)的情況)。使用副詞性連接詞，在寫作中一定要注意發(fā)掘要點(diǎn)或句子間的邏輯聯(lián)系，從而找到并運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞，使不同的句子間建立起有機(jī)的聯(lián)系。㈠.簡潔。有時(shí)諺語可以稍加改變引申使用。誤：China has taken place great changes in the last ten years．正：Great changes have taken place in China in the last ten years．分析：例1中的take place為不及物動(dòng)詞，不能帶賓語。誤：My watch is bad正：①There is something wrong with my watch．②My watch has something wrong．③My watch doesn’t （2）：我買這本書花了50元。每種語言都有自己的習(xí)慣表達(dá)方式，英語也不例外。四． 地道。Please let me know what you think.(在詞句中，名詞what從句代替了想法這一名詞)。①Over thirty professors spent several years on the dictionary．②It took over thirty professors several years to finish this dictionary．分析：此句的難點(diǎn)是“耗費(fèi)”和“編成”，表達(dá)的意思是教授們花了幾年時(shí)間在這本辭典上，或花了幾年時(shí)間才完成這本辭典。一旦碰到較難表達(dá)的漢語句子時(shí)，應(yīng)在所學(xué)句型和詞匯范圍內(nèi)快速選擇一種最有把握的方式表達(dá)。3.）I hope to see all of you there.(歡迎大家屆時(shí)蒞臨。: 1）.Mon stayed with me in the hospital.(媽媽在醫(yī)院里陪著我，英語例句中避開了陪著一詞)2.）He went to Shenzhen and tried his luck there.(他到深圳打工去了)。，殊途同歸。在平時(shí)的練習(xí)及閱讀中，要注重同一意義的