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rning their own money allow them中,主語(yǔ)為動(dòng)名詞形式的earning,與謂語(yǔ)allow的一致性出現(xiàn)問(wèn)題,應(yīng)改為allows; 第6)小題,to spend on anything as if they ,從句引導(dǎo)詞錯(cuò)誤,導(dǎo)致含義混亂,應(yīng)將as if改為as; 第7)小題,They would have to ask their parents for中,如上文中的解釋,改為should not; 第8)小題,money or for permission to do things by中,介詞使用有誤,這主要還是一個(gè)語(yǔ)法問(wèn)題。 第1)小題,There are advantage for students to work while中,系動(dòng)詞are和主語(yǔ)advantage的單復(fù)數(shù)一致性出現(xiàn)了問(wèn)題,但此時(shí)還不能貿(mào)然判斷究竟是哪一個(gè)出現(xiàn)了問(wèn)題。 文章是作者站在第三方對(duì)一個(gè)一般現(xiàn)象進(jìn)行的評(píng)論,主體敘事角度與“我”、“我們”無(wú)關(guān)。因此,第7)小題雖然沒(méi)有任何語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤,但其邏輯和全文的整體邏輯恰好背道而馳?! ≈黧w時(shí)態(tài)是現(xiàn)在時(shí)。 1)There are advantage for students to work while 2)studying at school. One of them was that 3)they can earn money. For the most part, 4)students working to earn money for their own 5)use. Earning their own money allow them 6)to spend on anything as if they please. 7)They would have to ask their parents for 8)money or for permission to do things by 9)the money. Some students may also to save 10)up for our college or future use. 通過(guò)閱讀全文,我們發(fā)現(xiàn): 我們希望考生能夠參考我們所總結(jié)的常見(jiàn)錯(cuò)誤類型,在練習(xí)改錯(cuò)題的時(shí)候?qū)W會(huì)對(duì)應(yīng)和歸納,這樣才能夠提高對(duì)錯(cuò)誤的嗅覺(jué)力和敏感度。而且,沒(méi)有單詞拼寫(xiě)、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)或詞序錯(cuò)誤,只涉及語(yǔ)法、習(xí)慣表達(dá)和語(yǔ)義邏輯層面。我們認(rèn)為,經(jīng)過(guò)合理的指導(dǎo)和科學(xué)的訓(xùn)練,學(xué)生們完全可以熟悉其核心的命題思路和解題技巧,從而取得理想的成績(jī)。 以往,短文改錯(cuò)題是高考英語(yǔ)全國(guó)試卷和絕大多數(shù)單獨(dú)命題省市試卷的基本題型。They did not want me to do my work at family .family 側(cè)重指“家庭這個(gè)結(jié)構(gòu)或家里人”,而home 則側(cè)重指“家庭的所在地”。We may be one family and live under a same roof .same 意為“同樣的”,前面應(yīng)加定冠詞the ,而不是a。I live in Beijing, where is the capital of ,應(yīng)用關(guān)系代詞which作主語(yǔ)。本句話意思為“看起來(lái)我的父母親把我當(dāng)成了visitor或gust 了。連詞誤用。非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞誤用。短文改錯(cuò)中錯(cuò)詞的誤用名詞單復(fù)數(shù)誤用。句法:各類從句的連接;主謂一致;省略與替代;否定句型;強(qiáng)調(diào)句型;句子結(jié)構(gòu)的連貫性、完整性等。它主要檢測(cè)考生對(duì)詞法、句法和語(yǔ)篇中的行為邏輯等的把握。如:Anyone may borrow books ,and it cost nothing to borrow them (costcosts) 如:Books may be keep for two weeks (keep kept )如果該動(dòng)詞不作謂語(yǔ),可試著改成非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞形式。如;The box is too heavy for the little boy to carry it .該句型中不定式to carry 邏輯上的賓語(yǔ)就是句子中的主語(yǔ),所以句中的it是多余,應(yīng)去掉。make 。 hear。 notice。 look at 。如:Playing football not only makes us grow tall and strong but also give us a sense of fair play and team spirit .but also 后面的分句的主語(yǔ)也是playing football,其謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞應(yīng)當(dāng)用單數(shù),故give應(yīng)改為gives .發(fā)現(xiàn)有特殊動(dòng)詞結(jié)構(gòu)時(shí),就要檢查其特殊用法是否正確。發(fā)現(xiàn)有固定短語(yǔ)時(shí),就要檢查副詞、介詞、冠詞是否使用錯(cuò)誤?;卮饡r(shí)常用high price low price .所以應(yīng)把句子中的How many 改為What ,把答句中cheap 改為low.發(fā)現(xiàn)有名詞和代詞時(shí),就要檢查是否有數(shù)、所有格或指代不一致的錯(cuò)誤。如:He wrote to me immediately as soon as he got there .該句犯了連詞重復(fù)使用的錯(cuò)誤,應(yīng)去掉immediately.發(fā)現(xiàn)有特殊疑問(wèn)句結(jié)構(gòu),就要檢查是否有疑問(wèn)詞使用不當(dāng)?shù)腻e(cuò)誤。故以上兩個(gè)分句之間要加上連詞while 表示對(duì)比。發(fā)現(xiàn)有轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、對(duì)比等結(jié)構(gòu)時(shí),就要檢查是否有行文邏輯方面的錯(cuò)誤。如:She was eating her sandwich and drank her milk at the table when I arrived .此句中并列的平行結(jié)構(gòu)是兩個(gè)語(yǔ)法上相同的謂語(yǔ),故應(yīng)把drank改drinking.發(fā)現(xiàn)有比較結(jié)構(gòu),就要檢查是否有形容詞、副詞的比較級(jí),比較的對(duì)象等方面的錯(cuò)誤。再根據(jù)基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)進(jìn)行擴(kuò)散性思考,從而快速找到答案。嚴(yán)格按照試題要求答題,萬(wàn)萬(wàn)不能隨心所欲解題。有些行文邏輯錯(cuò)誤,從詞法、句法的角度看是正確的,但是通過(guò)上下文的邏輯分析就會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)是錯(cuò)誤的。十行之中有一行是正確的。先易后難,逐類排查。依據(jù)句意和語(yǔ)法逐句判斷。What your favorite sport ?本句缺謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞,應(yīng)在What后面加is .短文改錯(cuò)的解題步驟通讀短文,把握文意。②缺動(dòng)詞不定式符號(hào)to. I’d like very much e but I have an examination on Monday morning .would like 后面不能直接加動(dòng)詞,需to,構(gòu)成固定搭配would like to do something,意為“想做某事”。缺詞①名詞前缺限定詞。故去all.⑥出現(xiàn)冗言現(xiàn)象。First,let me tell you something more about myself .由first可知是剛剛開(kāi)始向別人講述自己的事情,故只能說(shuō)something ,而不要加more.⑤詞義重復(fù)。即“過(guò)去常常”之意。I was used to watch it 。We practice for three times every week。故應(yīng)去掉a。I caught a sigh of my English in the crowd。短文改錯(cuò)中涉及到固定搭配、習(xí)慣用法常常多用、少用或誤用其中的介詞,有時(shí)也涉及到其中的動(dòng)詞、冠詞的錯(cuò)誤搭配。這類錯(cuò)誤大多由于學(xué)生受漢語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣的影響,或?qū)τ⒄Z(yǔ)詞義的理解不夠準(zhǔn)確造成的。多或少的詞語(yǔ),常見(jiàn)于冠詞、介詞、不定式標(biāo)記to等,不過(guò)有時(shí)也可能是實(shí)義詞。在平行結(jié)構(gòu)中常用的并列連詞 有and,but,or,than等。平行結(jié)構(gòu)是指用一連串作用和結(jié)構(gòu)相同的或相似的成份表達(dá)同一范疇或同一性質(zhì)、密切關(guān)聯(lián)的內(nèi)容。短文改錯(cuò)題慣用的命題手法是:①and,but,or,so等之間的混用;②because與so并用;③although與but并用;④why 與because并用;⑤e與go混用;⑥here與there混用。關(guān)聯(lián)詞分并列連詞 and,but,or,so,when等,從屬連詞——各種從句的引導(dǎo)詞。形容詞和副詞比較等級(jí)的誤用現(xiàn)象:①省略不當(dāng);②自身比較;③修飾語(yǔ)的誤用;④than連接的兩個(gè)比較對(duì)象不一致或不平行。形容詞、副詞的混用及其比較等級(jí)的誤用。非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的誤用。動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)和語(yǔ)氣的誤用。代詞的指代一致性包括人稱、數(shù)、格和性四方面的統(tǒng)一。學(xué)生往往容易忽視定語(yǔ)從句中強(qiáng)調(diào)句型中的主謂一致性。名詞 的數(shù)與格的誤用。一旦考生認(rèn)清了高考英語(yǔ)改錯(cuò)題的特點(diǎn)、解題方法以及錯(cuò)誤類型,解題時(shí)就不會(huì)盲目從事,而能做到有的放矢。易混淆詞或詞組的辨析也是高考改錯(cuò)題中不容忽視的部分。這兩點(diǎn)是解答連詞及其相關(guān)問(wèn)題的關(guān)鍵所在。 (1)(2004 浙江卷)And every year more and more people start a stamp collection of your own ... 78. their (指代對(duì)象應(yīng)一致) (2)(2004湖北卷)You have to be friends with your pupils and take good care of him. 83. them (pupils 是復(fù)數(shù),后應(yīng)該用替代復(fù)數(shù)名詞的代詞。 (1)(2003全國(guó)卷81)Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was ... 81. talking (enjoy doing為固定短語(yǔ)) (2)(2004 全國(guó)卷Ⅰ)I am sure they will laugh to me and see me as a fool. 79. at (laugh at sb. 固定短語(yǔ)) (3)(2004 浙江卷)from friends can all provide you for stamps from all over the world. 82. with (provide ... with為固定短語(yǔ)) (4)(2005全國(guó)卷Ⅱ)I am writing to thank you with your kind help. 76. for (thank sb for sth) (5)(2005全國(guó)卷Ⅰ) or for permission to do things by money. 83. with (with money) 6. 冠詞 英語(yǔ)中冠詞只有三個(gè),從高考英語(yǔ)改錯(cuò)題的角度來(lái)看,只能從以下幾個(gè)方向出題:1)不定冠詞a和an互改;2)不定冠詞a或an和定冠詞the互改;3)根據(jù)需要增刪冠詞。 (1)(2003全國(guó)卷80)I followed her advice and should put down 100 words or so each day. 80. should (并列謂語(yǔ),should多余) (2)(2004 全國(guó)卷)Can you tell me about what I should do? 85. about (tell sb about/of sth或tell sb接從句) (3)(2004重慶卷)I had to look up to the same word many times, ... 78. to (look up a word查字典) (4)(2005全國(guó)卷Ⅰ)Some students may also to save up for their college or future use. 84. to (情態(tài)動(dòng)詞may后接動(dòng)詞原形) (5)(2005江蘇卷) But for the most wonderful thing about Jack was his musical ability. 83. for (but是連詞for是介詞,不能并列) 5. 固定結(jié)構(gòu)(固定句型、固定短語(yǔ)、固定搭配) 所謂固定結(jié)構(gòu)是指英語(yǔ)中一些不能隨意更改的習(xí)慣表達(dá)。) (2)(2004江蘇)that was a dinner we had waited for several month. 85. months (several修飾復(fù)數(shù)名詞) (3)(2004全國(guó)卷Ⅰ) a few minute on the Internet. 77. minutes (a few修飾復(fù)數(shù)名詞) (4)(2005全國(guó)卷Ⅱ)But one and a half year later. 79. years (one and a half意思為一年半,故判斷此處year應(yīng)為復(fù)數(shù)形式) (5)(2005全國(guó)卷Ⅰ)There are advantage for students to work... 76. advantages (從there are 判斷應(yīng)該用名詞復(fù)數(shù)) 3. 句子結(jié)構(gòu) 句子結(jié)構(gòu)方面的錯(cuò)誤范圍龐大,解答高考英語(yǔ)改錯(cuò)題主要可以從以下幾方面來(lái)思考:1)句子結(jié)構(gòu)是否完整,成份是否冗缺;2)單詞的詞性與其在句中的功能是否相符;3)主謂一致;4)復(fù)合句中連接主句和從句的關(guān)系詞或引導(dǎo)詞的運(yùn)用是否得當(dāng)?shù)取? (1)(2003全國(guó)卷)She liked it very much and reads it to the class. All said the story was... 84. read (and連接并列謂語(yǔ)) (2)(2004江蘇卷)At once I apologize and controlled myself... 83. apologized (and連接并列謂語(yǔ)) (3)(2004全國(guó)卷) Sometimes, we talked to ea