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rawing?It goes without saying that (=There is no denying the fact that 毋庸置疑)what the painter virtually aims to convey is profound. Primarily ,we can learn that such cases are far from being (=not) rare and upsetting (令人心痛的) parallels (類似的事情) can be found any there from our neighborhood and around the world. What’s more,there has been a growing (=more and more) society would be like years later if this pervasive trend (肆虐的趨勢) goes unchallenged (放任下去)。不能寫author顯得俗氣Really:可去掉,但不豐滿第二段Simple as the image is the implications(啟示)mirrored(反映)are apprantly farreaching(深遠(yuǎn)的)。前一句寫漂亮,后一句子轉(zhuǎn)折寫穿中國服裝。Compelling and thoughtprovking 兩個ing 押尾韻,俗稱絕句Interesting and instructive 兩個押頭韻in contrast 路標(biāo)性詞匯,前后形成對比。小作文頂多120字,要在第一頁寫完,不要拖到頁面2,切忌!頁面2用于寫大作文,220字左右,相當(dāng)于B5紙的一半,一定要認(rèn)真練習(xí)適應(yīng)!大作文單號版:What a pelling and thoughtprovking drawing it is! As is vividly presented in the interesting and instructive cartoon above, ……(句1),in contrast,……(句2)。翻譯一定要寫滿,而不要在乎句子是否完整通順。當(dāng)然別忘了標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號,最后別忘了句號。What on earth does the drawer really attempt to convey?注釋:thoughtprovking 中間的是連字符,不能去掉,不管它是位于同一行還是兩個不同的行。句1一般用來簡單描述漫畫內(nèi)容,句2和句1形成對比例如:06年的一個小男孩。另一個小男孩(兩個矛盾方面描述)04年起點(diǎn)也是終點(diǎn)穿中國服裝的美國女孩。00年世界捕魚(以前怎么樣,現(xiàn)在怎么樣)溫室花朵(溫室里面花朵怎么樣,外面花朵怎么樣)On earth:究竟 加強(qiáng)語氣Drawer=作者。Initially such a phenomenon as revealed in the picture has aroused widespread social concern(關(guān)注)。Additionally ,to reverse (扭轉(zhuǎn)) the grim situation,effective measures should be entailed (定制)by al parties concerned .Enhancing people’s awareness of such practices (行為) and setting up relevant rules and regulations ought to be top priorities (首要任務(wù)) of the agenda. (議事日程)注釋:在第二段中幾乎沒寫東西(指考生完全用的板子,沒添加任何東西就可以用),希望考生能夠自己根據(jù)能力修改,刪除,增加一些東西。因為一般人多多少少都是會修改的。所以呢各位牛人高手可以在這個基礎(chǔ)上采取各種方法對其進(jìn)行修改(替換詞語,換句型,被動,主動,強(qiáng)調(diào)句,定語從句如此種種,添加一些自己的寶貝)。講述可能出現(xiàn)的一些新情況:3個萬一:萬一大作文漫畫是2幅而不是1幅萬一作文時非諷刺類的呢萬一作文時“圖表類”呢(如97,99)柱狀,曲線,餅狀下面我們針對單雙號分別展開單號1. 雙漫畫所有的單數(shù)改復(fù)數(shù),當(dāng)然有一些地方時不能修改的哦2. 諷刺“Additionally到末尾”刪除,我們將其修改為舉