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活。 Dear friend, I’m writing the letter in response to your advertisement .I am a girl of the same age with you ,and I e from a happy and warm family, which includes my father,my mother and I . I study in a key school from my hometown, but I have never regretted for my own choice, for the life here is very colorful and challenging. I am interested in stamp collecting and I have collected a lot of stamps. I also like swimming. I wish I can get in touch with you and hope to be friends with you . Yours truly, Li Hua Dear friend , I can’t wait to write to you. Having known that you are looking for a penfriend, I am very eager to be friends with you. I just graduated from a middle school. I am 18 years old. There are four people in my family. My mother is a worker. My father is a doctor. My sister is a student. My school is beautiful. I also want to look for a penfriend. I am interested in stamp collecting. I am waiting for your answer . Best wishes ! Yours truly, Li Hua 詞匯 ,句型 (高級)和語法多樣化(較復(fù)雜) 要點(diǎn) 2. 應(yīng)用了較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯 3. 有效地使用了語句間的連接成分,使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊 要點(diǎn)全 連接詞 如何算是一篇好文章? 1 一、 避免句式單一 Rewrite the sentences 1. They arrived at the school. They felt the happy atmosphere. 2. I will be given another chance. I will succeed. 3. He wants to improve his English. He studies hard. 方法一 . 使用非謂語動詞使句子簡潔高檔 When they arrived at the school, they felt the happy atmosphere. Arriving at the school, they felt the happy atmosphere. If I am given anothe