【正文】 pet, take a walk, and is supposed to feed the pet. FTime spent on these activities is much more worthwhile and meaningful than on idling.Conclusion 總結(jié)段FIn conclusion, I would regard pet as the best gift to a child for his growth. Few children can resist loving a pet. 自選論述型FIf you could make one important change in a school that you attended, what change would you make? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.問題分析型FIn general, people are living longer now. Discuss the causes of this phenomenon. Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay. OutlineF豐富營養(yǎng) rich nutrition F先進醫(yī)療 advanced medicineF體育鍛煉 physical training Introduction 總起段FBackground 背景 FStatement 觀點Background 背景FAccording to a recent survey, the average lifespan extends rapidly, and this issue has aroused great public attention.FIt is reported that longevity prevails among the elderly, which attracts great public concern. Statement 觀點FIt is the goal of this essay to explore some possible causes to the problem / phenomenon.Conclusion 總結(jié)段FStatement 觀點 rewrite, not copyFAll in all / To conclude / In conclusion / In general / To sum up, many factors contribute to the dramatic expansion of lifespan. FIt is estimated that longer life is not a dream as long as medicine keeps developing, and the importance of health is highly emphasized.豐富營養(yǎng) rich nutritionFLongevity partly es from rich nutrition.FIt is widely accepted that nutrition plays an essential role in maintaining healthy.FIn the past, starvation was the main threat to life, and adequate food was the mon wish, so nutrition was always ignored.FCurrently, it is known vitamin, minerals, protein and fiber all have their contribution to healthy diet and longevity. FThese ingredients strengthen the figure, and help the longterm operation of some ans. 先進醫(yī)療 advanced medicineFThe advance of medicine results in longer lifespan.FMany breakthroughs over the decades are now simply taken for granted, and have prevented many diseases which, in bygone days, led to early deaths, such as small pox. FEven though no certain cure has yet been discovered for heart attack and cancer, the latest technologies used in various treatments and operations as well as the use of new medications have greatly increased the chances of survival for patients. FDoctors are able to control the spread of viruses or cells, preventing the worsening of disease. 體育鍛煉 physical trainingFPhysical training can not be ignored as well.FIn early days, when the living standard was low, everyone was busy working to make a living, and no recreation was available at that time.FNowadays, technology develops so dramatically that work is simplified and burden is relived. Thus, one has his free time to do physical training.FIt is said there is a positive link between amount of exercise and lifespan.FThere is no doubt those elderly who do exercises every day in early morning usually have longer lifespan. 問題分析型FMany students have to live with roommates while going to school or university. What are some of the important qualities of a good roommate? 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