【正文】 rner on my way home. I tried my best to make her stop crying. When I knew she was lost, I helped her make a call to her dad and stayed with her until he arrived. I found it pleasant to give others a hand.In my opinion, we are supposed to help each other and be thankful for others’ help. I strongly believe helping others will fill our society with positive energy. As the saying goes, “The rose’s in her hand, the flavor in mine.”（113w）【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，描述對節(jié)目中挺身而出的顧客的看法、發(fā)生在你身上正能量的事件以及鼓勵大家相互幫助，并讓世界充滿正能量。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。同時還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。通常書面表達給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀觥⒚鞔_的關(guān)鍵。構(gòu)思提綱。審好題是寫好書面表達的關(guān)鍵。增強邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。【考點定位】 考查提綱類作文。寫作亮點：短文開頭直奔主題：我想要談?wù)勎业臒兰霸鯓犹幚硭麄?；后面三段分別從外貌上的煩惱、與父母交流上的障礙、學(xué)習(xí)上的壓力幾方面分別談?wù)撟约旱臒兰疤幚淼姆绞剑鷦泳唧w，條理分明。要包含表格中所有的信息，并作適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮。3．H解析：Hello everyone,I am Li Hua. I’d like to talk about my problems and how I deal with them.I am not very tall and very mon. But I don’t care and I believe in myself.My parents don’t understand me and I have very few friends. I encourage myself to be kind to others and learn to municate with others very well.I often feel stressed because of my study and I don’t have many chances to join the afterclass activities. I will plan my time very carefully and improve my study in a very good way. Try to join as many activities as possible and achieve a balance between study and hobbies.That’s all. Thank you!【解析】試題分析：本題是一篇給材料作文，要求用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿，在班會上談?wù)勀阌龅降臒酪约澳阕约旱淖龇?。高分句型：That’s why I want to choose paper cutting中why引導(dǎo)的表語從句。前三段分別講述他所喜歡的學(xué)科（體育、剪紙和廚藝），并解釋愿意以及收獲，最后一段講述這些學(xué)科對他的生活的意義。：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的文章，很好地完成了試題中所規(guī)定的內(nèi)容。注意時態(tài)的運用，靈活運用所學(xué)單詞、短語和句型。2．A解析：例文Of all the courses, I like sports best because I am interested in playing basketball. I can make a lot of friends when I play basketball. And I will learn the spirit of teamwork. So I want to choose sports.I also like paper cutting because it is very interesting and I can learn more about traditional Chinese culture. That’s why I want to choose paper cutting.I often help my parents with housework when I am free. So I want to learn how to cook delicious food. I think it is very useful course because I’d like to cook something different for my parents.I believe these courses will make my life more colorful.【解析】【詳解】。高分亮點：短語：protect the environment；pick up the rubbish；behave well；be kind to sb；more and more beautiful。Dear editor,I am very happy to have the chance to show my plan for the graduation party.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes,Yours Lihua【參考答案】***試卷處理標(biāo)記，請不要刪除一、英語書面表達1．A解析：例文As a middle student, I can do a lot to learn from our role models. First, we can protect the environment. For example, we can pick up the rubbish, recycle things in our daily life, and so on. Second, we shall respect people around us. Respect others to start from small things. Third, behave well. We should be kind to others, warmhearted to everyone, and generous to our friends. By doing so, our world will bee more and more beautiful.【解析】【詳解】題干解讀：該題目屬于應(yīng)用文寫作，但寫作時要按照應(yīng)用文格式寫，寫作時承接短文開頭，具體寫出怎樣做以及這樣做的意義。 ，開頭結(jié)尾己給出，不計入總詞數(shù)?；顒赢厴I(yè)晚會時間6月28日晚上七點地點學(xué)校禮堂school hall參與者全體初三學(xué)生和老師活動內(nèi)容1.邀請校長作演講；2.互贈禮物送祝福；3.各班表演精彩節(jié)目4. 要求：，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使句子通順，連貫。m glad you would like to be a volunteer. Now let me answer your questions.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I hope you love volunteering and do well in it. Looking forward to your good news.Best wishesDavid20．書面表達初中就要畢業(yè)了，校報“英語角”欄目向同學(xué)們征集畢業(yè)晚會的計劃。、校名等相關(guān)信息。To: davidwoodlandschoolFrom: limingsunshineschoolSubject: VolunteeringDear David， I’m writing to ask you for advice. I know you often do volunteer work in your free time. I’m interested in it very much. I’m going to do some this summer vacation. But I know little about it. Could you help me answer the following questions? ●Why do you want to be a volunteer? ●What kind of vo1unteer work is suitable for us students? ●Do you have any problems with volunteering? ●If my parents don’t allow me to do so, what should I do? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon. Best wishes， Li Ming注意：。Dear Sara，I’m glad to hear from you Love，Amy19．假定你是David，來自美國，你的好友Li Ming想要在今年的暑假去做志愿者，他來信向你了解有關(guān)這方面的情況。（3）要點齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮?，F(xiàn) 狀大約70%學(xué)生眼睛近視主要原因1. 睡眠不足2. 長時間看書、做作業(yè)、用電腦等預(yù)防方法1. 做眼睛保健操，多進行體育活動2. 養(yǎng)成正確的用眼習(xí)慣你的觀點… ….（至少一條）參考詞匯：近視的 shortsighted要求：（1）詞數(shù)：80～100個。Zhang Yang is a student in Sunshine Middle School.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________17． 最近一份學(xué)生體質(zhì)健康調(diào)查結(jié)果顯示，學(xué)生近視率仍維持在高位水平，且越來越低齡化。優(yōu)秀事跡上個月把零花錢捐給了希望工程未來夢想1. 希望成為連接家鄉(xiāng)到上海路段的高鐵總工程師2. 每個人為保護環(huán)境都可以做一些