【正文】 s helpful./ He hopes everyone can make some changes to protect the ，豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。Zhang Yang is a student in Sunshine Middle School.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Zhang Yang is a student in Sunshine Middle School. He is in Class 2,Grade 9. He likes reading. He spends more than seven hours a week reading all kinds of books because he thinks reading is helpful. He enjoys watching birds. He counts the number of birds twice a year to study changes in the number of birds. He donated his pocket money to the Hope Project last month. His dream is to be the chief engineer of highspeed railway connecting my hometown to Shanghai. He hopes everyone can make some changes to protect the environment. We mustn’t throw rubbish everywhere.【解析】【詳解】亮點(diǎn)說明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。優(yōu)秀事跡上個(gè)月把零花錢捐給了希望工程未來夢(mèng)想1. 希望成為連接家鄉(xiāng)到上海路段的高鐵總工程師2. 每個(gè)人為保護(hù)環(huán)境都可以做一些改變。每周花七個(gè)多小時(shí)閱讀各種類型的書，因?yàn)椤?．書面表達(dá)根據(jù)以下提示，寫一篇介紹我的朋友張陽的短文。開頭介紹了今年端午節(jié)慶祝時(shí)間，接下來介紹端午節(jié)的由來以及慶?；顒?dòng)，最后歡迎大家一起體驗(yàn)這個(gè)傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：People celebrate……，People hold……，We can watch……，We wele to……等句式的應(yīng)用。3．書面表達(dá)李華所在的國際學(xué)校正在開展“My Favourite Traditional Festival”交流活動(dòng)，假定你是李華，請(qǐng)你向來自不同國家的同學(xué)介紹中國傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日——端午節(jié)，內(nèi)容包括：1. 今年慶祝時(shí)間（6月18日）2. 節(jié)日由來：紀(jì)念（be in memory of）屈原3. 吃粽子，賽龍舟，掛菖蒲和艾草（calamus and Ay Tsao）……4. 歡迎大家一起體驗(yàn)這個(gè)傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日注意：1. 詞數(shù)80~100；，以使行文連貫；；，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。s all. Thank you!【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如In order to，look back at，be going to，have a class meeting，say goodbye to，talk about，the dreams of，take some photos，in the end，each other，be late等。Boys and girls,The wonderful middle school life will go to the 【答案】Boys and girls,The wonderful middle school life will go to the end. In the past three years, we have studied and stayed together. Looking back at the days we spend together, how sweet we feel. In order to keep the happy times in our hearts for ever, we are going to have a class meeting on the afternoon of June 26 next week. The theme of the class meeting is saying goodbye to our middle school life. It will be held in Conference Room on the Sixth Floor.We are going to have some meaningful activities. To express thanks to our teachers, we each should say a thankful word to our dear teachers. We can chat freely with our classmates and teachers about our plans of the summer vacation. We can even talk about the dreams of our future. Then, we are going to take some photos with our teachers and classmates. In the end, we may give our wishes to each other.Don39。要點(diǎn)如下：1. 時(shí)間：6月26日下午3:00.2. 地點(diǎn):六樓會(huì)議室3. 活動(dòng)內(nèi)容：1） 對(duì)老師用話語表達(dá)謝意；2）與同學(xué)交流自己的將來的夢(mèng)想；3）師生合影，互贈(zèng)留言等等。你們班計(jì)劃舉行“告別初中生活”的主題班會(huì)。這里Protecting the environment 做主語，用的是動(dòng)詞的ing形式。這里had better表示最好，后面跟動(dòng)詞原形，take a bus表示乘公共汽車。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達(dá)具有條理性。寫作時(shí)，避免使用漢語式的英語，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語。時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。s more, we had better walk or take a bus. Protecting the environment is our duty. Everyone should play a part in saving the earth.【解析】【詳解】