【正文】 ，又至畢業(yè)季，師生們忙著互致臨別贈(zèng)言。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，句子通順，行文連貫。全文可分兩大部分，第一部分寫中秋節(jié)的時(shí)間、傳統(tǒng)習(xí)俗及慶祝方式，第二部分寫我最期待的活動(dòng)。m glad to hear from you. Now let me introduce the MidAutumn Festival to Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jessica,I39。要求：〔開頭和結(jié)尾已給出, 不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；, 意思連貫, 書寫工整。假如你是李華, 請(qǐng)你給Jessica寫一封信, 介紹該節(jié)日。短文里還使用了一些較好的短語和句型，如In the past, my hometown was very poor and the streets were very narrow.、Now the government takes measures to improve the pollution and the city bees cleaner and cleaner、More and more people have their own cars and live a fortable life、There are thousands of tourists from all over the country every 。整篇文章內(nèi)容充實(shí)、完整，敘述清晰、條理，結(jié)構(gòu)合理。然后是家鄉(xiāng)現(xiàn)在的樣子，這里主要以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者按照題目要求，介紹了自己的家鄉(xiāng)這些年來的變化。注意句式的多變，長短句結(jié)合、簡單句、并列句或復(fù)合句穿插使用，提升文章的檔次。這兩個(gè)地方需要學(xué)生們展開想象，合理發(fā)揮，注意要與文章的其他部分能夠很好的結(jié)合起來，內(nèi)容也要統(tǒng)一，符合題目要求，合情合理。題目中用表格的形式，給我們對(duì)比的家鄉(xiāng)的過去和現(xiàn)在，我們應(yīng)用正確的英語將這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來，并對(duì)將來提出兩點(diǎn)希望。將來希望……（兩點(diǎn)）要求：1. 短文的開頭已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2. 短文必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫通順；3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名、地名等相關(guān)信息。交通：新的飛機(jī)場(chǎng)已投入使用多年。生活：住房寬敞明亮；許多人搬進(jìn)了新公寓。污染嚴(yán)重，垃圾遍地。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表提示，以“The Changes in My Hometown”為題，用英語寫一篇100詞左右的短文，不必逐字逐句翻譯。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，句子通順，行文連貫。（多數(shù)學(xué)生的觀點(diǎn)、男生的觀點(diǎn)、女生的觀點(diǎn)）。It is+形容詞 for sb to do sth做某事對(duì)某人來說是…的?！军c(diǎn)睛】高分句型：I think it is helpful for students to use mobile phones in a right way．我認(rèn)為正確的方式使用手機(jī)對(duì)學(xué)生是有幫助的。如but, so, then等。 eyes. In my opinion, I think it is helpful for students to use mobile phones in a right way. Firstly，students can learn more knowledge using mobile phones. At the same time, parents and teachers should do something to help students. Only in this way can mobile phones be of help to their studies.【解析】【詳解】本篇寫作需注意要求中所提供的要點(diǎn)，不可遺漏。t control themselves and often play games. What39。 觀點(diǎn)理由一些學(xué)生贊成擁有方便與家長聯(lián)系；一些老師反對(duì)擁有有學(xué)生用手機(jī)玩游戲；有學(xué)生用手機(jī)作弊；你的觀點(diǎn)1. 2.要求：1. 表達(dá)清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫；`2. 必須包含表格所給的提示信息，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3. 詞數(shù)：80100詞左右（征文的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。但中學(xué)生在學(xué)校是否應(yīng)該持有手機(jī)，一些學(xué)生和老師有不同的觀點(diǎn)。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。【點(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。s body./ I think that ebooks are beneficial if we read correctly and properly instead of reading ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。s an useful product. I think that ebooks are beneficial if we read correctly and properly instead of reading over.All the best!Betty【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如in recent years，as a product of，live in，more and more，so…that，for example，do harm to，be harmful to，in my opinion，take the place of，instead of等。Dear Lucy,I’m sorry to know that you aren’t allowed to read eBooks._______________________________________All the best!Betty【答案】Dear Lucy,I’m sorry to know that you aren’t allowed to read eBooks.In recent years, electronic books, as a product of information technology, have gained more and more popularity. It is no doubt electronic books bring many benefits. For one thing, they are so convenient that we can read them anywhere and anytime. For another, their appearance will make paperwaste less.However, as every coin has two sides, electronic books also have some disadvantages. For example, long time of reading ebooks does harm to our eyes. And there are more radiation which is harmful to people39。她在信中訴說了她的煩惱，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)Lucy的來信，用英語寫一封90詞左右的回信。when you read是由when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句?！靖叻志湫鸵弧縎o it is important for everyone to keep good eyesight. 所以保持良好的視力對(duì)每個(gè)人都很重要。語法要正確，表達(dá)要符合英語習(xí)慣，注意時(shí)態(tài)、時(shí)間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。注意作文中必須包含表格上的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。主要從原因和建議兩個(gè)方面去介紹。t read in bed or in a moving bus. And when you read you should keep the book away from your eyes for about a foot. And thirdly, do