【正文】 ll with children. Besides, the school39。請(qǐng)認(rèn)真閱讀下面的郵件, 根據(jù)信中的內(nèi)容和你的實(shí)際情況給他寫封回信。7．（文章必須包括要點(diǎn)中所給的信息，但不要逐句翻譯，并補(bǔ)充兩條個(gè)人的觀點(diǎn)。短文用第一人稱和第三人稱，還會(huì)用到被動(dòng)語態(tài)的句子。m Li Hua from Sunshine Middle School. Our school held a Chinese Poetry Reciting Competition on the afternoon of May 23rd. It was held in the school hall. The petition is held every tram. This year it was a big success again. All the teachers and students thought highly of the students39。免費(fèi)的freeI39。朗誦recite。表現(xiàn) performance。每位獲勝者贏得一張免費(fèi)書展的票。八年級(jí)的王麗獲一等獎(jiǎng)。今年又大獲成功。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：時(shí)間地點(diǎn)5月23號(hào)下午；學(xué)校禮堂。6．（短文中使用了一些較好的句型和短語，如But the person who inspired me most, I think, is my friend Wang Peng.、Wang Peng is a small thin boy with two big black eyes.、He doesn39。其次短文中使用了正確的人稱和時(shí)態(tài)，文章以第三人稱和第一人稱為主來敘述，主要使用了一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)，動(dòng)詞形式變化準(zhǔn)確，注意了第三人稱單數(shù)形式以及過去式形式的變化，語法規(guī)范。短文有以下幾個(gè)優(yōu)點(diǎn)：首先文章內(nèi)容完整，層次清晰，短文分三段，第一段先介紹了這個(gè)人是誰，第二段描寫了這個(gè)人身上的品質(zhì)以及對(duì)自己的應(yīng)選；最后一段結(jié)尾。同時(shí)語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分使文意連貫、自然?？梢院?jiǎn)單句結(jié)構(gòu)為主，輔以并列句、復(fù)合句。其次應(yīng)注意英語表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語的不同，不要按照漢語思維逐詞翻譯。短文應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)為主來敘述，人稱是第三人稱和第一人稱，注意謂語動(dòng)詞形式的變化。題目中用問題的形式給予了提示，審題可知，短文應(yīng)包括兩個(gè)部分的內(nèi)容：首先介紹這個(gè)激勵(lì)過你的人是誰，他是怎樣的一個(gè)人；然后介紹他是如何激勵(lì)你的。t talk too much, but always keeps a smile on his face. He is warmhearted and ready to help others. If I need any help for my math exercises, he is always the one that can help me out. As a good student, he studies very hard. In the early morning, you can see him stand near a tree and read English intensively. Few students can arrive at school as early as he is. He also does well in many sports, such as badminton and pingpang. He got the first prize in last year39。2. 語言流暢，字跡清楚。請(qǐng)以 “The person who inspired me”為題寫一篇不少于 80 詞的短文，向校報(bào)的英語園地投稿。5．（在寫作時(shí)，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，這樣才可以更好的駕馭。Hi, Jack! I am Tim. Today I will tell you something about the project “Renovation of the old munities” in Nanjing. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Hi, Jack! I am Tim. Today I will tell you something about the project “Renovation of the old munities” in Nanjing. This project is aim to improve the environment. After this project, there will be more beautiful buildings, some parks and a big shopping store. Our life will be more convenient. But there are some problems which influence our life. For example, lots of noise is around us all day long, and we can see the building rubbish anywhere. In my opinion, the project team only work in daytime and the building rubbish can be put at a fixed place. Of course, everyone in the old munities can do what they can do to renovate our munities.【解析】【分析】這篇書面表達(dá)是描述老社區(qū)改造工程，話題較新。假設(shè)你是 Tim，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面表格內(nèi)容的提示，用英文向你的外國筆友 Jack 做簡(jiǎn)單的介紹。4．（它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。s all. Thank you!【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如In order to，look back at，be going to，have a class meeting，say goodbye to，talk about，the dreams of，take some photos，in the end，each other，be late等。Boys and girls,The wonderful middle school life will go to the 【答案】Boys and girls,The wonderful middle school life will go to the end. In the past three years, we have studied and stayed together. Looking back at the days we spend together, how sweet we feel. In order to keep the happy times in our hearts for ever, we are going to have a class meeting on the afternoon of June 26 next week. The theme of the class meeting is saying goodbye to our middle school life. It will be held in Conference Room on the Sixth Floor.We are going to have some meaningful activities. To express thanks to our teachers, we each should say a thankful word to our dear teachers. We can chat freely with our classmates and teachers about our plans of the summer vacation. We can even talk about the dreams of our future. Then, we are going to take some photos with our teachers and classmates. In the end, we may give our wishes to each other.Don39。要點(diǎn)如下：1. 時(shí)間：6月26日下午3:00.2. 地點(diǎn):六樓會(huì)議室3. 活動(dòng)內(nèi)容：1） 對(duì)老師用話語表達(dá)謝意；2）與同學(xué)交流自己的將來的夢(mèng)想；3）師生合影，互贈(zèng)留言等等。你們班計(jì)劃舉行“告別初中生活”的主題班會(huì)?！军c(diǎn)睛】3．（最后用I’m sure our city will bee more and more beautiful and cleaner as long as we all try our best to do something for it!總結(jié)全文，表達(dá)每個(gè)人都出一份力，我們的城市會(huì)越來越美。Don39。we ought to be honest, never tell lies or say bad words。While we are travelling, we should pay attention to our own behavior。所以用得特別多的句式是we should| ought to do sth ……。 要求：，字跡工整：可圍繞主題適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；、校名、地名成其他真實(shí)信息；As a member of the city, I think we should__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________