【正文】 the snow was very deep. Yangshi was like a snowman standing at the gate. Finally, the teacher was moved deeply.After reading the story, I think we should respect our teacher. We should study hard.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇材料作文，主要介紹中國(guó)的經(jīng)典故事, “程門(mén)立雪（Stand in the snow to wait for Master Cheng respectfully）”。內(nèi)容提示：1. 楊時(shí)去拜見(jiàn)老師程頤一老師在睡覺(jué)一楊時(shí)在雪地等一老師醒來(lái)發(fā)現(xiàn)楊時(shí)在門(mén)口2. 通過(guò)介紹這個(gè)故事, 發(fā)表你的看法或者觀點(diǎn)。7．為了宣傳和弘揚(yáng)中華優(yōu)秀傳統(tǒng)文化, 某雙語(yǔ)雜志將舉辦征文活動(dòng)來(lái)介紹中國(guó)的經(jīng)典故事, “程門(mén)立雪（Stand in the snow to wait for Master Cheng respectfully）”是其中一個(gè)選題。在描述得到的經(jīng)歷的時(shí)候不落俗套，講到了自己的家庭那時(shí)比較困難，父親是通過(guò)努力工作為我賺錢(qián)買(mǎi)槍的，寫(xiě)作是富有感情的，也通過(guò)這段經(jīng)歷為這把玩具槍賦予了一定的意義。寫(xiě)作的難度是逐漸加深的，在討論其如何獲得的時(shí)候要注意正確使用時(shí)態(tài)，在談?wù)撘饬x的時(shí)候要注意表達(dá)的準(zhǔn)確性，避免不熟悉的表達(dá)。3. 語(yǔ)言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，短文連貫通順，80詞左右。6．書(shū)面表達(dá)每個(gè)人都有自己心愛(ài)的物品，相信你也擁有一個(gè)自己心愛(ài)的物品吧！請(qǐng)以“A（n） _____ I have”為題，描述一個(gè)或一件你心愛(ài)的物品，并談?wù)勀闶侨绾蔚玫剿?，以及它存在的意義。恰當(dāng)?shù)闹V語(yǔ)也為文章增色不少，例如用到了“Practice makes perfect”熟能生巧這個(gè)諺語(yǔ)。寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：首先用一個(gè)自然段來(lái)闡明寫(xiě)作的主題，表達(dá)出自己的觀點(diǎn)（認(rèn)為作業(yè)是很必要的），可以借助it is necessary for sb to do…這樣的句型。首先需要陳述正反兩方面的觀點(diǎn)，其次結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際經(jīng)驗(yàn)，發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)。t be too much. It can improve our skills. Daily homework should be different and colorful. It might be some extensive reading, a paper or even just a game. We should be left enough free time so that we can do things we really like to do.That39。m glad to give a report about my ideas on daily homework. I think it39。2．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名。在你班的主題班會(huì)上，同學(xué)們進(jìn)行了“Is daily homework necessary？”的討論，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)提示和要求，并結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際經(jīng)驗(yàn)，發(fā)表你的觀點(diǎn)。5． 書(shū)面表達(dá)請(qǐng)將短文寫(xiě)在答題卡相應(yīng)的位置上。語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確、得體，表達(dá)自然、流暢。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，語(yǔ)法規(guī)范，用詞準(zhǔn)確，注意了動(dòng)詞正確形式的變化。短文分三段，第一段基本是題目中給出的開(kāi)頭，作者使用一句話引出下文；第二段是主體，介紹了過(guò)去美好的回憶以及不開(kāi)心的事情；最后一段對(duì)未來(lái)進(jìn)行了展望?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，回憶了自己的初中生活，并展望了未來(lái)。句式結(jié)構(gòu)可以簡(jiǎn)單句為基礎(chǔ)，穿插并列句、復(fù)合句以及其他復(fù)雜句式的使用，提升作文檔次。寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)注意：文章中應(yīng)包括表格中的所有信息，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)；第三部分的內(nèi)容中還需要自己發(fā)揮想象力進(jìn)行補(bǔ)充，注意應(yīng)合情合理，與上文很好地銜接。內(nèi)容應(yīng)主要包括三部分：首先是初中三年里的美好回憶；然后是不開(kāi)心的事情；最后展望自己未來(lái)的高中生活。題目中利用表格的形式，展示了文章的具體內(nèi)容，學(xué)生們可以此為提綱進(jìn)行寫(xiě)作。s unbelievable that I39。不開(kāi)心的事情； 。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，寫(xiě)一篇發(fā)言稿。4．馬上要初中畢業(yè)了，大家都是依依不舍的。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。而Thank you for attending our robot show./ I invented the new robot mainly to help the elderly at home. / I think in the future people will live a more fortable life with the help of new ，豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。要求：1. 意思連貫，語(yǔ)句通順；2. 詞數(shù)80詞左右；短文的開(kāi)頭已給出（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)） 3. 參考詞匯： at a fixed time 定時(shí)emergency 緊急情況 cpany sb. 陪伴某人Ladies and gentlemen,Thank you for attending our robot show. Now I’d like to introduce my new invention to all of you. 【答案】Ladies and gentlemen,Thank you for attending our robot show. Now I’d like to introduce my new invention to all of you.I invented the new robot mainly to help the elderly at home. It can cook meals and do some washing at a fixed time. When old people feel alone, it can also acpany them by having a chat, playing chess or doing exercise. What’s more, it can deal with some emergencies. For example, if an old man falls ill suddenly, the robot will call doctors immediately for help.I’m sure my new invention will be a great help to the elderly. I think in the future people will live a more fortable life with the help of new robots.【解析】亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)?！军c(diǎn)睛】書(shū)面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。而復(fù)雜并列結(jié)構(gòu)In China, unlike in the West, plates are placed on the table and shared by you feel unfortable with this, you can just say a polite thank you and leave the food there./ I hope you can take care of yourself and your family by doing housework./ if you like, I will teach you how to cook delicious ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的亮點(diǎn)。Dear Sara，I’m glad to hear from you Love，Amy【答案】Dear Sara，I’m glad to hear from you yesterday. Wele to my family next week.I have a small family. There are three people in my family, my parents and me. In China, unlike in the West, plates are placed on the table and shared by everyone. And so