【正文】 ng the language points in class. We students just listened and took some notes. So we didn’t have enough time to think about problems by ourselves /independently. We had to do much homework after class. But now teachers show the problems to us first, then we discuss them for a while in pairs or groups. We try to find out the ways of solving problems, through which we’ve learnt how to work/ study/ cooperate with others. After class, we can have different activities. For example, we can read books we like, go to the library or surf the Internet for useful information and so on.In a word, now we are the owners of our study and we’re happy.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇材料作文。課后做大量的作業(yè)。過去現(xiàn)在課堂老師講解知識點，學(xué)生聽講，記筆記，沒有足夠的時間獨立思考問題。注意：1. 短文應(yīng)包括表格提示的所有內(nèi)容，可適當發(fā)揮；2. 詞數(shù)：100詞左右。10．（【亮點說明】這是一篇比較優(yōu)秀的作文，本文很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。寫作中適當使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。動筆前要認真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點，要用上提示詞，并適當發(fā)揮，要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來更充實，最后寫出你的觀點。The Civilized City, the Healthy LifeAs a citizen of Lishui, it’s our duty to____________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】The Civilized City, the Healthy LifeAs a citizen of Lishui, it’s our duty to help build a civilized city so that we can live a healthy life. We can reduce air pollution by riding bicycles. It’s better for us to put rubbish into the rubbish bin. In this way, we can keep our city clean. And we’d better plant more trees to protect the natural environment.In my opinion, I’ll try my best to make our city cleaner and more beautiful. Firstly, I can save water by taking shorter showers. Secondly, I can save energy by turning off the lights when I leave the room. In a word, everyone can do something to make a difference.【解析】試題分析：這是一篇話題作文。請你以“The Civilized City, the Healthy Life”為題，根據(jù)表格中的圖片及文字提示，簡要描述并適當發(fā)表自己的觀點，寫一篇英語短文。9．（要求語句通順、意思連貫。時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。通讀材料可知，這是一篇向父親表達情感的寫作。s Day, and I sincerely wish you good health. I know that you are busy working all day and often stay up late to work. The next day you often go to work without having breakfast. You smoke a lot to relieve the pressure of work, but it’s really bad for your health. Long hours of work and little exercise make you unhealthy, I am worried about your body.Health is more important to you. I hope you can take care of your body and don’t stay up late at night. Smoking is harmful to health, so give up smoking as soon as possible. I hope you can exercise in your spare time. I wish you have a strong and healthy body. Happy Father’s Day, Dad!Yours,Tom【解析】【詳解】考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示，確定文章的中心。3. 詞數(shù):80詞左右，開頭和結(jié)尾部分已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。要求:1. 意思連貫，語言流暢，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范。海南中考模擬）假如你是Tom, 你的父親工作很忙，經(jīng)常熬夜，吸煙，很少吃早餐，也沒有時間鍛煉，所以身體不太好。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分數(shù)。【點睛】書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。而復(fù)雜并列結(jié)構(gòu)My father is a great father, and he always gives me what I is my father’s birthday, which is such a special day for me, so I want to give him a surprise./ I told my mother that I wanted to make a dish for my father. / With the help of my mother, I am confident that I can make a good meal. /When my father returned home, he was very happy and praised me a ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達多樣化，是本文的亮點。請將短文寫在答題卡上，寫在試題卷上無效。要求：語言流暢、書寫規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于60個。云南中考模擬）書面表達A Special Day提示：在每個人的生活中，總會有些特別的日子。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。修改潤色。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。初寫短文。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點，詞數(shù)符合要求?！军c睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認真審題。亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達符合英語習(xí)慣，準確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如be good for, help with, instead of, besides, make a difference, as long as possible, had better do, it is my duty to。d better not spend much money on expensiveclothes.If everyone does something for the environment,I believe the earth will be a better place【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，針對“低碳生活”你的做法、感受以及建議。提示詞語：be good for,everyone,ride a bike,think,make a difference,environment,suggest,reuse_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Lowcarbon life is good for help with the environment,I always walk or ride a bike to school instead of taking a ,I will try to use things that can be recycled and I never forget to turn off the lights when I leave the think it39。低碳生活對我們大家都有好處，請你寫一篇短文向一家英文報社投稿。6．（本篇文章寫的好的句子有：Chinese civilization is one of the oldest and longest civilizations in the world．中華文明是世界上最古老、最悠久的文明之一。如but, so, then等。以圖表展示的作文要以“讀”為主，首先要認真讀懂圖表中的要求，對所給信息加以分析、推斷、篩選、概括，去粗取精；在寫作時目的要明確，要注意內(nèi)容的準確性和嚴肅性。平時注意多多積累句型、短語?！驹斀狻课恼滦枰榻B下中國的文化。3. 文中不得提及真實的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。要點內(nèi)容歷史文化歷史悠久，文化各異；傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日，多彩習(xí)俗（舉一例）文明行為相互尊重，以禮相待；互學(xué)共鑒，共同成長（或自擬）身邊文明校園文明（自擬一點）注意：1. 詞數(shù)90詞左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。如皋市實驗初中中考模擬） 亞洲文明對話大會近期在北京召開，你的印度朋友Danny收看了大會相關(guān)報道，對華夏文明產(chǎn)生了濃厚的興趣，來信向你了解中國文化。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分數(shù)?！军c睛】書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。而非謂語動詞結(jié)構(gòu)The students have their own plans about how to spend a meaningful summer vacation./ Reading books can make people smart and develop believe that reading can increase ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達多樣化，是本文的亮點。m writing to tell you something about our discussion today.