【正文】 少其發(fā)生；3. 你在日常生活中打算為此做些什么。8．書(shū)面表達(dá)假如你是李明，你的英國(guó)筆友Jack來(lái)信詢問(wèn)你的家鄉(xiāng)是否有霧霾天氣，情況如何。短文中使用了一些較好的句型和短語(yǔ)，如But the person who inspired me most, I think, is my friend Wang Peng.、Wang Peng is a small thin boy with two big black eyes.、He doesn39。其次短文中使用了正確的人稱和時(shí)態(tài)，文章以第三人稱和第一人稱為主來(lái)敘述，主要使用了一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)，動(dòng)詞形式變化準(zhǔn)確，注意了第三人稱單數(shù)形式以及過(guò)去式形式的變化，語(yǔ)法規(guī)范。短文有以下幾個(gè)優(yōu)點(diǎn)：首先文章內(nèi)容完整，層次清晰，短文分三段，第一段先介紹了這個(gè)人是誰(shuí)，第二段描寫(xiě)了這個(gè)人身上的品質(zhì)以及對(duì)自己的應(yīng)選；最后一段結(jié)尾。同時(shí)語(yǔ)句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分使文意連貫、自然?？梢院?jiǎn)單句結(jié)構(gòu)為主，輔以并列句、復(fù)合句。其次應(yīng)注意英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)的不同，不要按照漢語(yǔ)思維逐詞翻譯。短文應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)為主來(lái)敘述，人稱是第三人稱和第一人稱，注意謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞形式的變化。題目中用問(wèn)題的形式給予了提示，審題可知，短文應(yīng)包括兩個(gè)部分的內(nèi)容：首先介紹這個(gè)激勵(lì)過(guò)你的人是誰(shuí)，他是怎樣的一個(gè)人；然后介紹他是如何激勵(lì)你的。t talk too much, but always keeps a smile on his face. He is warmhearted and ready to help others. If I need any help for my math exercises, he is always the one that can help me out. As a good student, he studies very hard. In the early morning, you can see him stand near a tree and read English intensively. Few students can arrive at school as early as he is. He also does well in many sports, such as badminton and pingpang. He got the first prize in last year39。2. 語(yǔ)言流暢，字跡清楚。請(qǐng)以 “The person who inspired me”為題寫(xiě)一篇不少于 80 詞的短文，向校報(bào)的英語(yǔ)園地投稿。短文中使用了豐富的句型和短語(yǔ)，如The teachers are very friendly and they are ready to help me. The most unforgettable thing is that I got a chance of being an exchange students and spent two months in , we kept in touch with each other through s. Besides, I was not good at Chinese also wish I can do better in all subjects when I am in high school and can go to a good 。句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整，符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。各部分內(nèi)容安排合理，有層次、有條理。短文有以下幾個(gè)特點(diǎn)：首先文章內(nèi)容完整，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰。同時(shí)語(yǔ)句之間使用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫、自然。另外注意句式結(jié)構(gòu)要符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣，用完整的句子表達(dá)。表格中有非常具體的提示，但不能逐詞翻譯表格中的短語(yǔ)，應(yīng)把他們變成自己的話，并用英語(yǔ)表達(dá)出來(lái)。審題可知，這篇短文應(yīng)主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)，注意根據(jù)表達(dá)需要使用正確時(shí)態(tài)，并注意謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的正確形式。m going to graduate from my beloved school. 【答案】My Life At SchoolHow time flies! It’s unbelievable that I’m going to graduate from my beloved school. There are many things to remember. In the junior school, I got along well with my classmates. The teachers are very friendly and they are ready to help me. The most unforgettable thing is that I got a chance of being an exchange students and spent two months in Australia. I learned a lot from the experience. I also remember I served as volunteer to help others. Certainly, there were also unhappy things. My good friend Li Hua went to another school. I was very sad. Luckily, we kept in touch with each other through s. Besides, I was not good at Chinese writing. I hope I can go to a dream school and make more new friends. I also wish I can do better in all subjects when I am in high school and can go to a good college.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以My Life At School為題，寫(xiě)一篇發(fā)言稿。未來(lái)展望1. 升上理想的學(xué)校；2. 能結(jié)識(shí)更多朋友；3. 請(qǐng)你補(bǔ)充（至少兩點(diǎn)）My Life At SchoolHow time flies! It39。美好的回憶； ；； 。班主任決定在下周舉辦一場(chǎng)“My Life At School” 主題 班會(huì) , 邀請(qǐng)全班同學(xué)參加。除此之外，中間也使用了一些連接詞，例如but，so，because of等，使文章更加通順?！军c(diǎn)睛】文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，符合邏輯，先表明自己觀點(diǎn)，然后闡述事情，提出自己的觀點(diǎn)和建議。然后仔細(xì)闡述了事情發(fā)生的經(jīng)過(guò)。信守承諾是中華民族的傳統(tǒng)美德，在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中，注意文章結(jié)構(gòu)，先寫(xiě)出大明和玲玲之間的事情，然后再說(shuō)自己對(duì)此的看法。注意：詞數(shù)80—100；行文連貫，邏輯合理；文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和人名； 文章的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。因此，Lingling很生氣，并且不愿接受Daming的道歉。而你的朋友Daming最近卻被誠(chéng)信危機(jī)所困擾。此處fall in love in, at all, buy sb sth, begin to do sth, love doing sth, feel like, talk with, continue to do sth等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少?！军c(diǎn)睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。要點(diǎn)包括: 1. 變化是什么?2. 變化是如何發(fā)生的?3. 變化后有什么感受?___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】The biggest personal change I’ve ever made is fal