【正文】 s to show.I am sure we will have an unforgettable time at the Hope House.I am looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本文是一篇邀請信，注意邀請信的格式，開頭問候，中間部分說正事，最后詢問他的回答。北京初三）題目1： 假如你是李華，你們班打算去“希望之家（Hope House）”孤兒院做志愿服務(wù)，你打算邀請你們學(xué)校的留學(xué)生Peter參加這次活動(dòng)。覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)；要點(diǎn)全面，結(jié)構(gòu)連貫；語言規(guī)范，敘事清楚，詞匯及時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用正確，能夠把提示的內(nèi)容敘述清楚，語句通順，意思連貫，沒有單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤，字?jǐn)?shù)符合題目要求。注意單詞拼寫，不要犯單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤，字?jǐn)?shù)要符合要求。注意主謂一致問題。話題是“The Civilized City, the Healthy Life”；并給了一些提示和注意事項(xiàng)：（1）詞數(shù)80100左右，短文開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；（2）文中不得提及考生所在學(xué)校及自己的姓名。Subject The Civilized City, the Healthy LifeWays of doing ride bikes, reduce air pollution, throw rubbish into the bins, keep the city clean, plant more trees,…Your opinion……（至少2條）注意：（1）詞數(shù)80100左右，短文開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；（2）文中不得提及考生所在學(xué)校及自己的姓名。浙江中考模擬） 為響應(yīng)我市全面創(chuàng)建國家文明城市的號召，麗水市中小學(xué)開展“文明城市，健康生活”為主題的英語征文活動(dòng)。除此之外，中間也使用了一些連接詞，例如but，so，because of等，使文章更加通順。【點(diǎn)睛】文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，符合邏輯，先表明自己觀點(diǎn)，然后闡述事情，提出自己的觀點(diǎn)和建議。然后仔細(xì)闡述了事情發(fā)生的經(jīng)過。信守承諾是中華民族的傳統(tǒng)美德，在寫作過程中，注意文章結(jié)構(gòu)，先寫出大明和玲玲之間的事情，然后再說自己對此的看法。注意：詞數(shù)80—100；行文連貫，邏輯合理；文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和人名； 文章的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。因此，Lingling很生氣，并且不愿接受Daming的道歉。而你的朋友Daming最近卻被誠信危機(jī)所困擾。8．（最后向Bill提出問題，結(jié)束全文。然后解釋為什么喜歡該工作，因?yàn)榭梢园炎约旱闹R分享給孩子們，并且喜歡學(xué)校的環(huán)境。s environment appeals to me and staying with students helps to keep me young and alive. To realize my dream, I have to make full use of spare time to acquire the essential knowledge and enter a good university. What efforts are you making for your dream?Tell me about your ideal job!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本題通過描寫夢想中的職業(yè)，讓學(xué)生對未來有憧憬，給一部分提示詞，讓學(xué)生有話可說。To: lihua china. From: bill006 america. Subject: Your dream jobDear Li Hua,Our teacher told us China is developing fast. You are lucky enough to live in China.Would you please tell me about your dream job in the future?◆What is your dream job?◆ Why do you like the job?◆ Do you think your personality is suitable for the job? Why or why not?◆ What do you need to do for your dream job?Drop a few lines if you have time.Best wishes,Bill要求:1. 參考提示語, 可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2. 語句通順, 意思連貫, 書寫工整；3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)你的任何真實(shí)信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；: 不少于70詞（開頭已給出, 但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。陜西中考模擬） 假如你是李華, 你的美國筆友Bill給你發(fā)了一封電子郵件, 想了解你的夢想職業(yè)。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)?！军c(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。而復(fù)雜并列結(jié)構(gòu)It was a wonderful and unforgettable experience and I’ve learned a lot from the activity./ We felt nervous at first, then our teachers came to join I was in Grade Eight, our school planned to hold a charity sale to help the children in poor areas./ They encouraged us and gave us some help, so we became happy and excited./ If everyone gives a helping hand to those in need, the world will be much ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的亮點(diǎn)。、校名等相關(guān)信息。要點(diǎn)如下：1. What’s the event? 2. When and where did it happen? 3. How did you feel at that moment?4. How has the event changed your life? 注意：，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。江蘇中考模擬）三年的初中生活即將結(jié)束，你一定對初中生活留下了很多美好的回憶。文中用到了一些好的句型：However, I try my best to understand them. Although they don’t allow me to make my own decisions and give me too much pressure,這里給文章增色不少。注意文中用第一人稱書寫；；，可稍加評論；，發(fā)表你對壓力的看法；。How to keep a good relationship with parentsIn my opinion, I have too many rules at home. My parents never allow me... 【答案】How to keep a good relationship with parents　　In my opinion, I have too many rules at home. My parents never allow me to go out with my friends at night. They don’t allow me to choose my own clothes, either. And they pay too much attention to my exam results. I think my parents don’t quite understand me.　　However, I try my best to understand them. Although they don’t allow me to make my own decisions and give me too much pressure, I know that it is because they really love me and want me to have a bright future.　　In order to keep a good relationship with my parents, I study hard, listen to them, talk to them as friends, tell them my troubles, and help them do more housework.【解析】【詳解】某英文報(bào)社正就青少年與父母關(guān)系這一話題開展題為“How to keep a good relationship with parents”的征文活動(dòng)。（3）詞數(shù)：80～100個(gè)。要求：（1）要點(diǎn)齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。（3）你與父母保持良好關(guān)系的做法：努力學(xué)習(xí)，聽父母話。（1）父母規(guī)矩太多，不允許晚上出去，過于強(qiáng)調(diào)學(xué)習(xí)成績，不理解自己。天津中考模擬）書面表達(dá)“How to keep a good relationship with parents”的征文活動(dòng)。短文中需要作者自己補(bǔ)充的內(nèi)容完成得也不錯(cuò)這些內(nèi)容都比較貼合文章的需要，意思也很連貫?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇比較不錯(cuò)的作文。根據(jù)內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)和將來時(shí)態(tài)，寫作中注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯(cuò)誤。m sorry to hear that you are having problems with your parents because of using I believe things will get better, Yours Li Hua【答案】Dear Wang PingI‘m sorry to hear that you are having problems with your parents because of using Wechat. In fact, your problem is very mon . Cheer up and let’s find a good way to solve it.You may be tricked or get into trouble when you use Wechat. Also, using it for a long time is bad for your health, especially for your eyes. Maybe your parents worry about these things. In my opinion, munication is very important. Why not have a good talk with your parents about how to use Wechat properly? Try telling them you won’t use it for too long and won’t use it when you are studying. What more. tell them you’ll never add strangers without their permission.I believe things will get better.YoursLi Hu【解析】【詳解】這是一篇應(yīng)用文寫作，寫一封回信。s worse, they have changed my password（密碼） so that I can’t use it. There has been a cold war between us for over a week. What should I do?Yours,Wang Ping要求：1．語言表達(dá)要準(zhǔn)確，語意要通順、連貫；2．詞數(shù)80100左右，電子郵件的格式、開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear Li Hua,I39。最近你收到一名叫王平的中學(xué)生發(fā)來的電子郵件，向你們欄目組求助。4．（開頭介紹了我的理想職業(yè)是當(dāng)一名教師，接下來介紹我選擇當(dāng)老師的原因以及我現(xiàn)階段的準(zhǔn)備，最后表示只要我有機(jī)會(huì)，我將會(huì)選擇做一名老師。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。【詳解】結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：Everybody has……，my ideal career is……，When I was……，So I must……等句式的應(yīng)用。參考要點(diǎn)：1. 職業(yè)選擇及原因；2. 現(xiàn)階段的準(zhǔn)備（學(xué)習(xí)、興趣發(fā)展等）；3. ……My Career Planning_________________________________________________________________________