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think you should learn to smile .First, learn to smile at yourself when something unpleasant happens in your life. If you fail an exam or you are misunderstood by your friends, don’t be sad. Just smile at yourself . Smiling at yourself brings back your confidence . Sometimes the one who beats you is not others, but yourself. And smile can also keep you healthy. Second, learn to smile at others. It will make you municate better with people. Smiling at others makes yourself happy as well. In a word, smile is a kind of language belonging to everyone. It passes love and friendship and helps shorten the distance between you and other people. Living with a smile ,every day will be shiny.【解析】這是一篇表格式的作文,要點是一表格的形式出現(xiàn),首先要研究表格,找出需要表達的要點,然后加以整合,也可以適當增加使意思更連貫,但要點一定要全,不能漏掉。微笑是一種語言人人都能懂,傳遞友誼,拉近距離。學會對他人微笑便于與他人之間的交流。使你自信,擊敗你的人有時就是你自己。 6.Life is just like a mirror, you smile at it, and it smiles at you, too. 請你以“Learn to Smile”為題,根據(jù)下表所列的要點寫一篇100詞左右的文章(文章開頭已給出)。短文注意到了長短句的結(jié)合,并恰當?shù)氖褂昧艘恍┻B詞,使文章表達的連貫。表達準確,注意了被動形式的使用,如He was rewarded by our school this year.?!玖咙c說明】這是一篇比較優(yōu)秀的范文。在最后要給Tommy提一些建議,這一部分應該用第一人稱。表格中涉及的內(nèi)容較多,寫作時要注意表達的條理性。點建議)…要求:表達清楚、語法正確、上下文連貫;要點必須包括所有相關信息,并作適當發(fā)揮;詞數(shù):100 詞左右;不得使用真實姓名、校名和地名等Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight.【答案】Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight. He is clever and he is good at all his lessons. He is so generous that he shares everything with his likes reading because he thinks he can get much knowledge and learn more about the world by reading. And reading has a good effect on children’s growth. At home, he can help his parents do some housework. At school, he gets on well with his classmates. On the way to school, he obeys the traffic rules. He crosses the road when the light is green. Our school presented him with Award for Best Student this year. However, Tommy is stressed when the exam es. And he doesn’t have enough sleep. I think he should go over what he has learned before exams. It’s better for him to manage his time wisely so that he can have enough time to rest.【解析】這篇作文要求我們按照表格里的內(nèi)容介紹一下Tommy的情況,為Tommy寫一篇綜合素質(zhì)的評價報告。今年,學校授予了他優(yōu)秀學生獎(Award for Best Student)Problems面臨考試,遭受壓力痛苦,他沒有充足的睡眠.Your suggestions(根據(jù)實際情況提上學途中遵守交通規(guī)則(舉個好處)Honour他在家?guī)椭黾覄铡?.臨近畢業(yè),學校在學習小組內(nèi)開展了初中階段自評和組評活動,假設你是 Moonlight 小組 的組長,請根據(jù)下面表格中的信息和提示,為你的組員 Tommy 進行綜合素質(zhì)的評價,寫一 份素質(zhì)報告.NameTommyCharacteristics聰明、大方(各舉一例)Hobbies喜歡看書,認為看書有很多好處(請列舉I think+賓語從句??梢赃m當使用高分句型。需在平時積累相關的詞匯,寫作中注意語義通順,符合邏輯關系,上下文之間可以適當使用連接詞。s worse, some students cheat in exams by using mobile phones. Besides, using mobile phones too much does great harm to students39。 Mobile phones have been used widely in our daily life 【答案】Mobile phones have been used widely in our daily life today. With the development of economy, mobile phones are more and more widely used in our daily life. However, some parents and teachers have different ideas about whether the students should use mobile phones at school. Some students are for it. They think that it is convenient to contact with parents. Mobile phones will make them more interested in learning so that they can learn more quickly and easily. Some teachers are against it.They think that some students can39。你們學校的??⑽陌嬲诰痛伺e行征文活動,請根據(jù)下列表格提示的內(nèi)容,用英語寫一篇征文。4.今天手機在我們?nèi)粘I钪幸褟V泛使用。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維,考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。而It is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student./ But the more carefully we plan our day, the more colorful our school life will ,豐富了習作內(nèi)容,使表達多樣化,是本文的最大亮點。t afford time for our hobbies any more. I feel a bit stressed actually, so I try to spare some time to play basketball or turn on my favorite TV program to get relaxed.No pains, no gains. But the more carefully we plan our day, the more colorful our school life will be.【解析】亮點說明:這篇習作的層次清晰,內(nèi)容飽滿,表達流暢。在校老師工作認真負責,充滿愛心學生……