【正文】 文中使用了較豐富的句型，如About 75% of them think it is a popular form of entertainment, bring them more fun.、Grabbing red packets has been part of people’s lives、About 25% of them say some people spend too much time grabbing red packets、Personally, there39。其次短文中語言得體，句式準確，符合英語的表達習慣。文章分為三段，第一段是題目中已經(jīng)給出的，因此了文章的話題。點睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。為提升文章檔次，還應注意使用高級句型和較復雜的句式。因此文章的內(nèi)容應主要包括三部分：支持的人們的理由；反對者們的理由；自己的看法，可以分成兩段或者三段來敘述，這樣可以使文章結構清楚，有層次。題目中給出了一個表格，里面包括了支持搶紅包這個游戲的人們的觀點以及反對這個游戲的人們的觀點和理由，只給了一些短語，我們需要組織語言，將這些要點用正確的英語表達出來，并使文章內(nèi)容更加豐富、完整。t grab the red packets, people may feel sad or illtempered ,even break their cell phones. What39。s no doubt that not only does it bring people happiness, but also send blessings to people in a special form. Also, it39。Grabbing red packets on lineAgreement（75%） popular form of entertainment, bring more fun people closer, make more friendsDisagreement（25%）spend too much time.not have enough munication with family members, feel lonelyYour opinion1.2.提示詞：We chat 微信Grabbing red packets on line搶紅包注意：（1）詞數(shù)80左右，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；（2）文章應包括題中所提的所有要點，可適當發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫；（3）文中請勿提及你的真實姓名、校名和其他真實信息。6．書面表達（原創(chuàng)）今年春節(jié)，很多人加入了搶紅包的游戲，但也有人表示擔憂。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。s still important to remember the past/It tells that we should cherish the present ，豐富了習作內(nèi)容，使表達多樣，是本文的最大亮點。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如take place，in our hometown，in the past，used to be，go to do，on foot，by bike，better and better，more and more等。5．書面表達根據(jù)下列表格的提示，寫一篇題為Changes in Our Hometown的英語短文．（80詞左右）文章內(nèi)容必須包含所給的所有信息．開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．內(nèi)容要點：過去現(xiàn)在1舊房1高樓2河水骯臟2河水清澈（clean and clear）．3步行、騎自行車上班3乘公交車、小汽車上班4道路狹窄（narrow）．4街道寬闊（wide），干凈整潔5居住條件（living開頭介紹了今年端午節(jié)慶祝時間，接下來介紹端午節(jié)的由來以及慶?；顒樱詈髿g迎大家一起體驗這個傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關系。結合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結構主要為系表結構和動賓結構，注意一些常見句式的應用，比如：People celebrate……，People hold……，We can watch……，We wele to……等句式的應用。4．書面表達李華所在的國際學校正在開展“My Favourite Traditional Festival”交流活動，假定你是李華，請你向來自不同國家的同學介紹中國傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日——端午節(jié)，內(nèi)容包括：1. 今年慶祝時間（6月18日）2. 節(jié)日由來：紀念（be in memory of）屈原3. 吃粽子，賽龍舟，掛菖蒲和艾草（calamus and Ay Tsao）……4. 歡迎大家一起體驗這個傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日注意：1. 詞數(shù)80~100；，以使行文連貫；；，不計入總詞數(shù)。開頭為你想要成為一名志愿者而感到高興，接下來介紹我們可以從事的志愿者工作以及志愿者工作帶來的一些問題，最后我希望你喜歡志愿者工作。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關系。m glad……，we can……，It’s OK to……，If your parents don’t allow you to…….，you should……，I hope……等句式的應用。m glad you would like to be a volunteer. Now let me answer yourquestions.I volunteer because I enjoy helping others and can learn a lot from others. As students, we can take part in some interesting activities, such as looking after animals and working for sports matches. Also, we can join charity organizations to help protect the environment and so on.It’s OK to have problems, because volunteering takes much time and energy. Sometimes I can’t balance my study and work. If your parents don’t allow you to volunteer, you should have a good talk with them. Try to let them understand you.I hope you love volunteering and do well in it. Looking forward to your good news.Best wishesDavid【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，給好友Li Ming回信，介紹暑假做志愿者的情況。Dear Li Ming,Thanks for your letter. I39。回復信的開頭和結尾己經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。請認真閱讀下面的郵件，并根據(jù)信中的內(nèi)容和實際用英語回復，可以有適當?shù)陌l(fā)揮。此處go by, e to an end, tell sb about sth, all kinds of, behave oneself, encourage sb to do sth, get on with, learn from, make progress等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少?！军c睛】本文結構緊湊，語言簡練。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用?！敬鸢浮縈y junior high school lifeMy name is Tony. I am studying in Grade time goes by, my colorful junior middle school life is ing to an end. I’m glad to tell you something about my school life. Our campus is clean and beautiful, and there are all kinds of activities. Our teachers teach us rich knowledge and how to behave ourselves. They also encourage us to work hard. We all get on well with our classmates. Besides, we learn from each other and make progress together. I thanks for my school, my teachers and my classmates. Wish them better.【解析】【分析】這是一篇給材料作文，介紹我的初中生活。要求：1. 文章包含以上提示內(nèi)容，適當發(fā)揮。提示：（校園干凈而美麗，活動非富多彩）；老師（傳授知識，教會做人,經(jīng)常鼓勵）；同學（和睦相處，互相學習