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“綠色生活美麗家園”(Live Green, Live Better)? 請以此為題,參考以下要點(可適當發(fā)揮), 為校刊”英語角”寫一篇100詞左右的英文稿件。句型:被動句型。:例文采用三段式;用第一人稱來敘述講成語故事活動;因為活動已經(jīng)舉辦,所以時態(tài)采用一般過去時;對參加活動的過程描寫完整且條理清晰。提示詞語: Chinese idioms, story, collect, share, learn from, acient提示問題: ● What did you do during the activity of Telling Chinese idioms story?● What did you learn from the activity?● What do you think of it?【答案】The activity of “Telling Chinese idioms story” was held in our school last week.In order to take part in this activity, I collected lots of Chinese idiom stories in advance. Many students, including me, actively shared the Chinese idiom stories in the activity. After each story, the teacher explained the meaning of idioms and how to use it correctly. We learned a lot from our teacher. I did lots of reading in the process of preparation. My reading ability has improved greatly. What’s more, I realized the richness of Chinese acient culture. I really had a good time on the activity.【解析】【詳解】:這是一篇提綱類書面表達,只給了一些要點提示,但都不很明確。近期各校都在開展學習中國傳統(tǒng)文化活動。此處want to do sth, invite sb to, let sb do sth, at the gate of等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。點睛:本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,語言簡練。寫作中注意運用代詞,注意多種句式交替運用。提示詞語:Laoshe Teahouse, drink tea, Peking Opera, magic shows, gate提示問題:Where are you going?What will you do there?When and where will you meet?【答案】Hi, Lucy! I know you like Chinese traditional culture. I want to invite you to Laoshe Teahouse this Saturday morning. We are going to drink tea, watch magic shows, enjoy Peking Opera, and eat Chinese traditional food in Laoshe Teahouse. We can experience Chinese traditional culture there. Let’s meet at the gate of Laoshe Teahouse at 8:30, OK? See you.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文,我通過微信告訴Lucy要去哪,在那里要做什么以及何時何地見面。周末你和父母商議后,打算邀請她去老舍茶館。所以,考生不能遺漏要點,要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式,盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分數(shù)?!军c睛】書面表達題既不是漢譯英,也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。而I think it39。conditions)差5生活越來越好,環(huán)境(environment)越來越舒適.6你的感想…(寫兩到三句)Changes in Our HometownIn the past ten years,great changes have taken place in our hometown. 【答案】Changes in Our HometownIn the past ten years, great changes have taken place in our hometown. In the past, there used to be old houses. The river was very dirty. The roads were narrow and the living conditions were terrible. People were not rich. They went to work on foot or by bike. But now, there are many tall buildings in our hometown. We can see the clean river and the clear water . Even we can see fish in the water. There are many wide and clean roads. Our life is better and better The environment around us is more and more fortable. People usually go to work by bus or by car.I am glad to see these great changes in my hometown. But I think it’s still important to remember the past. It tells that we should cherish the present life.【解析】【詳解】亮點說明:這篇習作的層次清晰,內(nèi)容飽滿,表達流暢。【點睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,語言簡練文中運用了一些好的句型:We can study and think by ourselves .We can discuss in groups and show ourselves. We can get more knowledge in this 。 結(jié)合所給材料,可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時,人稱為單數(shù)第一人稱,注意主謂一致問題,句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu),注意一些常見句式的應用,寫作中注意運用代詞,注意多種句式交替運用。 要求:、條理清晰、段落分明、書寫工整;、校名和地名等信息;,并作適當發(fā)揮。所以,考生不能遺漏要點,要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式,盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分數(shù)。點睛:書面表達題既不是漢譯英,也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。d like to choose several good books and read them carefully./ Second, health is the most important./Third, it39。d like to do,help me open my mind,at least,be interested in,during the holiday,plan to do,j