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a member of my team called Moonlight.【答案】Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight. He is clever and he is good at all his lessons. He is so generous that he shares everything with his likes reading because he thinks he can get much knowledge and learn more about the world by reading. And reading has a good effect on children’s growth. At home, he can help his parents do some housework. At school, he gets on well with his classmates. On the way to school, he obeys the traffic rules. He crosses the road when the light is green. Our school presented him with Award for Best Student this year. However, Tommy is stressed when the exam es. And he doesn’t have enough sleep. I think he should go over what he has learned before exams. It’s better for him to manage his time wisely so that he can have enough time to rest.【解析】這篇作文要求我們按照表格里的內(nèi)容介紹一下Tommy的情況,為T(mén)ommy寫(xiě)一篇綜合素質(zhì)的評(píng)價(jià)報(bào)告。今年,學(xué)校授予了他優(yōu)秀學(xué)生獎(jiǎng)(Award for Best Student)Problems面臨考試,遭受壓力痛苦,他沒(méi)有充足的睡眠.Your suggestions(根據(jù)實(shí)際情況提上學(xué)途中遵守交通規(guī)則(舉個(gè)好處)Honour他在家?guī)椭黾覄?wù)。江蘇中考模擬)臨近畢業(yè),學(xué)校在學(xué)習(xí)小組內(nèi)開(kāi)展了初中階段自評(píng)和組評(píng)活動(dòng),假設(shè)你是 Moonlight 小組 的組長(zhǎng),請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面表格中的信息和提示,為你的組員 Tommy 進(jìn)行綜合素質(zhì)的評(píng)價(jià),寫(xiě)一 份素質(zhì)報(bào)告.NameTommyCharacteristics聰明、大方(各舉一例)Hobbies喜歡看書(shū),認(rèn)為看書(shū)有很多好處(請(qǐng)列舉【點(diǎn)睛】點(diǎn)睛:首先認(rèn)真審題,看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn);然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容,列出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá);然后緊扣要點(diǎn),動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作,在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中,要注意句與句、段與段之間的過(guò)渡,要仔細(xì)檢查有無(wú)單詞拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)誤用等,還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理,有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言,大小寫(xiě)是否正確,詞數(shù)是否符合要求。同時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu),造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣;盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,最好不要寫(xiě)太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句;盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫(xiě)的單詞,確保正確率;詞匯、句式要豐富多樣,可以為文章增色添彩。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料,不可遺漏要點(diǎn),并可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。文章時(shí)態(tài)用一般過(guò)去式時(shí),人稱(chēng)主要為第一人稱(chēng)?!敬鸢浮縀veryone has an unforgettable thing in his life. So do I.when I was a middle student, I celebrated my mother’s birthday for her. I cleaned the room, mopped the floor and also bought a present for her. I waited for mum at home after doing all these things. When mum came back, I jumped to her and gave her the present and said happy birthday to her. Mum was so happy and surprised that she hugged me for a long time. This is an unforgettable thing in my life because this was the first time I did the housework and felt how tired to do the job and this was also the first time I noticed mum was so happy that she even cried. Though I was tired, I felt happy.【解析】【詳解】本文是一篇話題作文。要求:1. 請(qǐng)先將題目補(bǔ)充完整后再作答;2. 語(yǔ)言流暢、書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范、卷面整潔,詞數(shù)不少于60個(gè);3. 文中不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名,否則以零分計(jì);4. 將短文寫(xiě)在答題卡上。云南中考模擬)書(shū)面表達(dá)提示:轉(zhuǎn)眼間三年的初中生活即將結(jié)束,在這三年的學(xué)習(xí)與生活中一定有些讓你難忘的人或事物?!军c(diǎn)睛】點(diǎn)睛:首先認(rèn)真審題,看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn);然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容,列出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá);然后緊扣要點(diǎn),動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作,在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中,要注意句與句、段與段之間的過(guò)渡,必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞,使文章過(guò)渡平穩(wěn),自然流暢;最后,要仔細(xì)檢查有無(wú)單詞拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)誤用等,還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理,有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言,大小寫(xiě)是否正確,詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。同時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu),造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣;盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,最好不要寫(xiě)太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句;盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫(xiě)的單詞,確保正確率;詞匯、句式要豐富多樣,可以為文章增色添彩。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料,不可遺漏要點(diǎn),并可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。文章時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),人稱(chēng)主要為第一人稱(chēng)。It’s good to get up earlyGetting up early is a good habit. It’s good for us in many ways.______________________________________________________________________________【答案】It’s good to get up earlyGetting up early is a good habit. It’s good for us in many ways. Firstly ,we can have enough time to plan a day better .Secondly,doing exercise is good for our health .Also, breathing the fresh air is good to our bodies and our moods, and it can help remember important things easily. Thirdly, having breakfast can help protect our stomachs ,make us have good health ,and have more energy to do all kinds of things better. In a word, the morning is the key of a day. Everyone should get up early every day.【解析】【詳解】本文是一篇話題作文。3. 詞數(shù)90詞左右。要求:1. 包含所給信息,并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。同學(xué)們,沐浴在晨光中,行走在上學(xué)路上,當(dāng)我們有充足的時(shí)間安排一天的學(xué)習(xí)生活時(shí),你會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)每天早起一點(diǎn)點(diǎn)會(huì)給我們帶來(lái)許多好處。9.(t use plastic bags.Also,we must plant more trees and stop people cutting them.We hope our world is more and more beautiful.【解析】【詳解】寫(xiě)作思路:先仔細(xì)審題,這是寫(xiě)好文章的前提.按照要求把所要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容一一呈現(xiàn)出來(lái),一定要確定好文章的重點(diǎn),做到主次分明.短文可用一些短語(yǔ)和句式,增加文章的色彩.本篇文章首先以The environmental pollution is more and more serious ,指出環(huán)境問(wèn)題變得越來(lái)越嚴(yán)重,然后按照題目要求逐一列出現(xiàn)在所存在的問(wèn)題。s time for us to protect our world. Firstly,we shouldn39。【答案】The environmental pollution is more and more serious today. We have no clean water to drink because of water pollution.And when trees are cut down,some animals disappear.There is more and more dirty smoke in the air.People39。丹江口市習(xí)家店中學(xué)中考模擬)初級(jí)寫(xiě)作今天環(huán)境變得越來(lái)越糟糕,環(huán)境問(wèn)題影響著人們的工作、學(xué)習(xí)、生活等,而我們的工作、生活、生產(chǎn)等又使環(huán)境污染越來(lái)越嚴(yán)重……如何保護(hù)我們的環(huán)境呢?請(qǐng)以“How to protect / save our environment / world?”為題寫(xiě)一篇短文。第三部分:總結(jié)全文——做合格的市民。第二部分:文章主體——呼吁大家保護(hù)環(huán)境。注意這一部分用用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。英語(yǔ)作文一般分為三個(gè)部分:第一部分:開(kāi)篇點(diǎn)題——描述圖片內(nèi)容。”可知,文章用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】I can see a boy and a girl in the picture. They are ing back from school. On their way home, they find so much rubbish outside the dustbin and decide to put it into the dustbin. The boy also es up with an idea. He puts up a sign on the dustbin to remind people of protecting the environment. The city is our home. We should protect it. Therefore, when we see someone litter, we should stop them and pick up the rubbish. The environment should be protected by everybody. We should be civilized citizens.【解析】【分析】本文是一篇看圖作文。內(nèi)容包括:; 。7.(【點(diǎn)睛】首先認(rèn)真審題,看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn);然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容,列出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá),例如save energy;brush our teeth;put it into different bins;take action;make a big difference。高分亮點(diǎn):短語(yǔ):save energy;brush our teeth;put it into different bins;take action;make a big difference。提示詞語(yǔ): pollution, protect, save, recycle, take action提示問(wèn)題:● What are the main environmental problems we have?● What can we do in our daily life? ● What’s your wish?Now there are many environmental 【答案】例文Now there are many environmental problems. Such as air pollution, water pollution and so on.I believe that there are many things we can do in our daily life, we can save energy by go to school by bike or on foot. We can use less water by turning off the tap while we brush our teeth, and taking shorter showers. When we see litter on the ground, we must pick it up and put it into different bins. I hope everyone can take action. Althoug