【正文】 】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少，如be going to，graduate from，to begin with，both…and，get along well with others，be active in，as important as，as well等。100 詞左右。你馬上就要畢業(yè)了，在初中的學(xué)習(xí)和生活中你一定有很多收獲，請(qǐng)給學(xué)弟學(xué)妹們提幾點(diǎn)建議吧！要求：1. 內(nèi)容完整，語(yǔ)言流暢，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范清晰。13．（句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整，以簡(jiǎn)單句為主，敘述清楚、簡(jiǎn)潔。層次清晰，結(jié)構(gòu)合理。短文有以下幾個(gè)優(yōu)點(diǎn)：首先文章內(nèi)容完整，包括了題目中要求的所有信息，且敘述完整，內(nèi)容充實(shí)。同時(shí)注意語(yǔ)句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫。寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)注意英語(yǔ)句式結(jié)構(gòu)和漢語(yǔ)是不同的，不能按照漢語(yǔ)思維逐詞翻譯，應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)考慮，寫(xiě)完整的句子，并注意使用適當(dāng)?shù)木湫腿ケ磉_(dá)，變化單詞的正確形式。寫(xiě)作時(shí)，學(xué)生們可以根據(jù)提示詞，或聯(lián)想自己的實(shí)際生活，列舉身邊的不文明現(xiàn)象，然后對(duì)創(chuàng)建文化城市提出自己的看法。題目中只給出了話題和一些提示詞，具體的寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容應(yīng)由學(xué)生們自己發(fā)揮想象力，進(jìn)行補(bǔ)充，這是寫(xiě)作中的一個(gè)難點(diǎn)。 an environmental project….要求：1. 不少于70詞（開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和校名；3. 語(yǔ)言流暢、書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范、卷面整潔。 plant trees。 volunteer。提示詞：spit 吐痰； respect。西安作為一座古老的城市在創(chuàng)建國(guó)際化大都市的過(guò)程中，離不開(kāi)精神文明建設(shè)。12．（它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。而He spends more than seven hours a week reading all kinds of books because he thinks reading is helpful./ He hopes everyone can make some changes to protect the ，豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。Zhang Yang is a student in Sunshine Middle School.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Zhang Yang is a student in Sunshine Middle School. He is in Class 2,Grade 9. He likes reading. He spends more than seven hours a week reading all kinds of books because he thinks reading is helpful. He enjoys watching birds. He counts the number of birds twice a year to study changes in the number of birds. He donated his pocket money to the Hope Project last month. His dream is to be the chief engineer of highspeed railway connecting my hometown to Shanghai. He hopes everyone can make some changes to protect the environment. We mustn’t throw rubbish everywhere.【解析】【詳解】亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。優(yōu)秀事跡上個(gè)月把零花錢捐給了希望工程未來(lái)夢(mèng)想1. 希望成為連接家鄉(xiāng)到上海路段的高鐵總工程師2. 每個(gè)人為保護(hù)環(huán)境都可以做一些改變。每周花七個(gè)多小時(shí)閱讀各種類型的書(shū)，因?yàn)椤?。靖江外?guó)語(yǔ)學(xué)校中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)根據(jù)以下提示，寫(xiě)一篇介紹我的朋友張陽(yáng)的短文。文章結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊、行文連貫、表達(dá)清楚。要根據(jù)短文提示，把父親身體不好的原因?qū)懬宄?，并提出中肯的建議，表達(dá)出對(duì)父親的體貼與關(guān)愛(ài)，同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。因?yàn)槭菍?xiě)給父親的一封書(shū)信，因此人稱為第二人稱。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。Dear Dad,This letter is a gift for the Father’s Day.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Happy Father’s Day, Dad!Yours,Tom【答案】Dear Dad,This letter is a gift for the Father’s Day. June 17 is Father39。2. 文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱等信息。6月17日是父親節(jié)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)你父親的情況，給他寫(xiě)一封信，談?wù)勀愕目捶ú⒔o他提一些具體的建議。10．（理由一：because Chinese paintings have a long history. What’s more, they are quite different from the ones in the US. 理由二：Silk is a symbol of our great culture and popular among Chinese people. It feels very soft and believe the exchange students will like the two gifts and always remember the moments with us總結(jié)全篇。例如：I would like to remend Chinese paintings as a gift because Chinese paintings have a long history. 以及The second gift I want to remend is silk 第一句話點(diǎn)題，隨后引出文章的兩個(gè)主題，一2. 要求語(yǔ)句通順、意思連貫、符合情境；3. 詞數(shù)在90個(gè)左右，感謝信的首尾已在答題卡上給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；4. 文中不得提及有關(guān)考生個(gè)人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。 remend two traditional Chinese things216。江蘇中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá) 以下是你校?？痀OUTH中YOUR VOICE欄目的征稿內(nèi)容，請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文，表達(dá)你的想法。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫(xiě)是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。修改潤(rùn)色。使用的詞語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。初寫(xiě)短文。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫(xiě)作材料。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求?！军c(diǎn)睛】寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如as we know, develop healthy habit, keep a balanced diet, instead of, had better do, at least, as long as, it is adj for sb to do, first of all, moreover以及l(fā)ast but not least。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Healthy habitI think healthy habits are important for us. As we all know, healthy life habits will bring us good health. How can we develop healthy habit?First of all, we must keep a balanced diet. Eating too much or too little, or choosing wrong food may cause many illness. Moreover, we should take exercise every day. We can walk to school instead of taking a bus. Doing sports for an hour every day is also a way to keep us strong. Last but not least, we’d better go to bed early and get up early. The body needs enough sleep to work well. Children at our age should have at least eight hours’ sleep every night.As long as we have good healthy habits, it will be easy for us to keep healthy and enjoy the health.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，闡述你認(rèn)為健康的生活習(xí)慣是什么樣的。內(nèi)容：健康飲食；早睡早起，不熬夜；參加運(yùn)動(dòng)，強(qiáng)身健體。長(zhǎng)沙市開(kāi)福區(qū)青竹湖湘一外國(guó)語(yǔ)學(xué)校中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)健康的生活習(xí)慣是非常重要的。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫(xiě)是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。修改潤(rùn)色。使用的詞語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。初寫(xiě)短文。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫(xiě)作材料。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求?！军c(diǎn)睛】寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如spare time, be fond of, strongly believe, make sb adj, as far as one’s concerned, keep healthy, have chances to do以及“主將從現(xiàn)”原則。 Dear Diary, Today is less than 100 days from the Senior High Entrance Exam. _________________【答案】Dear Diary,Today is less than 100 days from the Senior High Entrance Exam. Now we are studying for the senior high school entrance examination. Today we had a discussion about what do you like during the spare time.40% of the students are fond of listening to music. They strongly believe that it is a good way to make them relaxed. 30% of the students prefer playing puter games. As far as they’re concerned, playing puter games makes them more energetic.As for some students and me, we like doing exercise. Doing exerci