美國(guó)中學(xué)申請(qǐng)文書應(yīng)該怎么寫(參考版)
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【正文】 if I am prepared andact with confidence, I will be perceived as are the littlelessons that I’m grateful to have learned as a woman to Notice About This Essay author tells an interesting story about her experiences as sense of her personality—determination, flexibility, good humor—esthrough in the like “Do you have a hot date tonight, ref?” make the narrationmemorable(we’d love to hear more of these kinds of details). essay needs a faster first paragraph(three sentences)says the same thing in both the first and third sentences—and gives away theessay’s surprise in the second!A good revision would delete all of paragraphone and start at paragraph ’s too much frame here and not enough essay needsfurther development, especially about the difficulties ofbeing and being aref, to keep it author should “dwell” in the meaning of the experience a little moreat the end—“I wonder about…I also think…Sometimes I believe….” Significantexperiences like this one, woven through many years of the author’s life, don’tmean just one thing—there are more insights and lessons to explore here.。little did I know that I wasbeginning an activity that would influence my character and who I am began, I would only work with my dad and was friendly andaccepting because I had just soon realized though that to get betterI needed to start refereeing with people I wasn’t related to, and that’s when myexperience drastically apologetic smile and an “I’m sorry” wasn’tgoing toget me through games I began officiating higherlevel games anddealing with more arrogant coaches, I suddenly entered a new maledominatedworld, a world I had never experienced confidence was shot, and all Iwanted to do was get through each game and be able to I waseven too scared to skate along the teams’ benches because I would get upset bywhat the coaches would yell to me.“Do you have a hot date tonight, ref?” was atypical ment that coaches would spit at me during the course of a eyes, I did not belong on that ice, and they were going to do whateverthey could do to make sure no women wanted to officiate their wasdetermined not to let them chase me off the made the decision to stand up for never responded rudely to thecoaches, but I did not let them walk all over me and destroy my started to act and feel more like the 4year certified AtlanticDistrict Official that I were still a few situations that scared time I called a penalty in a championship game during the third overtime andthe team I penalized ended up losing because they got scored knew I hadmade the right call, even though I was unnerved when I saw the losing teams’parents waiting for me at my locker room。有一些名校中的部分專業(yè)也不一定要求提交 GRE 或者 GMAT 的成績(jī)，不過拿到好一點(diǎn)的 GRE 和 GMAT 成績(jī)會(huì)更多一些學(xué)校的選擇機(jī)會(huì)，自然是有很多好處的。語言成績(jī)：赴美國(guó)讀研必須提供的語言考試成績(jī)是 TOEFL 成績(jī)，美國(guó)大學(xué)對(duì)申請(qǐng)入學(xué)者并無統(tǒng)一TOEFL 錄取分?jǐn)?shù)線，一般都要求分?jǐn)?shù)達(dá)到 80 分以上，另外工科類的普遍要求申請(qǐng)者要有 GRE 成績(jī)，一般要求達(dá)到 1100 分以上，商科類的一般都要求有 GMAT500 分以上。審核者會(huì)決定系上是否能協(xié)助申請(qǐng)者
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