【正文】 第五篇：短文改錯(cuò)2441 neighbor has two sweet dogs which seems fell in love with the at the moment I saw several days, I had been able to ask them to e near me by offer ‘doggie treats’.Today all of them took treats from my was happy that I was able to final gain their occurs to me that there are people of my acquaintance also seem fearful, and distant for promise today that I will not judge them, and will simply extend my hope that they will trust their attempts at was sitting on the train muting to work in this notice a lady who was , no one offered him a seat, even those who were sitting in the disabled was really enjoying sit down as I suffered vertigo and struggled bear it on the , I eventual offered my seat and stood for my be honesty, my feet hurt I did feel such good because I let someone who needed a seat much more than me have what she someone needs help in the future, I can’t still lend a have to share this wonderful story sharing by my cousin is in her first petition and went into a panic when another one swimmer swam over felt very frightened and call out to the life a 17yearold young man jumped in and came near him and talked to said “I can’t touch you and you won’t be , if you like, I will swim a rest of the way with you”.And he did that, and my precious cousin was able finish her ’t that absolute wonderful?Yesterday, I got an opportunity help an injured right leg was injuring with some major , he was seemed very worried, for no one else was at I took her to hospital at we arrived there, I discuss his treatment with a doctor advised him to receive proper treatment or to rest for a long time, that I thought was quite either bought some medicines for hours passed quickly before I had everything I drove home, tried but help children living in poor mountainous areas, the Students’ Union organize an activity of donating took place in our school hall in the afternoon of last present were very pleasing to be able to help those some of it wrote encouraging words on the donated , they expected the Students’ Union organize this activity as often as last, we received about five hundred activity turns out to be the of not only does it help those children in poor mountainous areas but also lets us treasure which we have was so a peaceful go to see my friend and her boyfriend earlier in the is getting her kidney stone remove later this wanted to spend some times with her before the boyfriend is recovering from her own surgery from 2 weeks brought her some sweet food or a pair of the return she sent me home with a had a small piece and it was plan share the cake with others was laying on my bed relaxing after a long was playing and I was taking the time to reading a as I turned on the page an old song started playing who always reminded me of put the book down but had been died for 23 years, but sometimes I still felt like it was only closed my eye and allowed the flood of memories to wash over my heart ached as I thought of how I still missed wiped the tears from my cheeks as song I looked out of my window at the night sky, and send an “I love you, Mom” from my lips to Heaven’s I was having a rough morning, feeling rather I went to our school coffee’s shop to calm was in my own world, and then saw the woman in front of me in tells the cashier that she was going to pay for whichever I wanted to was grateful and rather a result, I asked him my surprise, she said, “You are a student, right? This is my way helping students.” I was touched and what she had said really made me I went to a supermarket nearby to buy few were two lady collecting food for a winter food drive for a had bought a few cans of food and two chocolate bars, where I handed to thanked them for spend time at their weekends collecting for those in all smiled and thanked said it was just that they spoken, their kind action really touched this experience I wouldn’t have done that, but now I’m brave enough for personally greetings and eye contactToday I got stick behind a mini bus on the narrow street of my I sat there angrily, I had looked up and saw a was wearing an uniform ing out of a could tell that the bus block my way was for turned around and waved goodbye to his very elderly mother whom was watching him from the , as he was about board the bus, he turned, smiled, and waved at anger left and tear were rolling as I smiled and waved was late for work but I had the good day ever!I smiled to everyone I In July 21, I, together with some people gathered at Youth Square at 5 we boarded a bus, where took us to Wuling Mountain, taking us two and a half tell the truth, Wuling Mountain is a really attractive spot, where the scene was beautiful first climbing mountain, I felt excited, and walked fast, only take some pictures now and was a large number of tourists that day, making the path noon, I had a simply lunch, for I took some food with had returned at four o’clock, laughing and but happy, we arrived home safely and I like many swimming is my favorite I am six years old, my parents often took