【正文】 s what admissions staff wants to your essay with an attentiongrabbing leadan anecdote, quote, question, or engaging description of your essay with a conclusion that refers back to lead and restates your your essay at。Ten Do39。應(yīng)詳讀學(xué)校的介紹,了解其要求,再對(duì)自己的學(xué)業(yè)背景、計(jì)劃加以考慮,寫出自己的風(fēng)格。重要的是給學(xué)校一個(gè)專業(yè),認(rèn)真的印象。（六）態(tài)度誠懇認(rèn)真,不卑不亢。（四）避免用深?yuàn)W的字匯,盡量以簡單容易的字來表達(dá)。（三）不要用語意模糊的句子,如 ”Your esteemed school“應(yīng)代以學(xué)校的名字。4．”I am attracted to your department by its brilliant faculty.“應(yīng)說明對(duì)於教授的認(rèn)知是從何而來,如在何處讀到某教授的文章而愿受教于他,或某位教授正在從事一項(xiàng)重要研究,與自己欲攻讀的研究領(lǐng)域相同等。2．”I received extensive training in physics“ 這句話不夠詳細(xì),”My training was in the area of particle physics“就具體多了。（二）寫作時(shí)應(yīng)清楚明確。例如學(xué)校要求五百字內(nèi)完成(In 500 words or less discuss...),則全文最好不要超過五百字。不要像列清單,也不要重覆申請(qǐng)表格已有的資料。這不僅僅對(duì)中國人如此,以英語為母語的人在此類寫作時(shí)也會(huì)感到十分的頭疼,但是我們中國人還需克服語言的障礙。一篇好的申請(qǐng)文書要求申請(qǐng)人能夠用一種與其他申請(qǐng)人完全不同方式,巧妙地展現(xiàn)自己的獨(dú)特個(gè)性和經(jīng)驗(yàn)。當(dāng)你通過申請(qǐng)文書來介紹你自己時(shí),你會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)所面臨的機(jī)遇和挑戰(zhàn)同樣之大。而西方的大學(xué)并不單是通過傳統(tǒng)的考試來考評(píng)其申請(qǐng)者的資格,這并不是說他們的錄取標(biāo)準(zhǔn)不嚴(yán)格。這對(duì)申請(qǐng)者來說是一個(gè)絕好的機(jī)會(huì)。個(gè)人陳述應(yīng)當(dāng)包含以下內(nèi)容：（一）申請(qǐng)者的學(xué)術(shù)或?qū)I(yè)興趣及背景；（二）欲研究的方向；（三）未來的職業(yè)目標(biāo)。幾乎所有學(xué)校都要求提交個(gè)人陳述。the second was to keep valuta long , I pointed out RMB globalization was the necessity choice of our national economy persisting development and the benefit of currency globalization according to the impersonality requirement of economical globalization development, and RMB globalization would more enlarge the degree for opening to the same time I thought that stable, quickly developmental national economy and larger economical scope made RMB of our country globalization strengthens and higher ability against risk, the last part emphasized the process of RMB globalization and the research on keeping away from process of RMB internationalization was: first implement RMB regional strategy on the basis of East Asia currency cooperation and East Asian free trade, then implement RMB globalization stratagem under many perfect factors during this process, it was very difficult for me to research nonsubstantiality economy in present familiar to us, it was the stock market, while in China the stock market system did not very perfect and exist some problems on efficiency, security and example, I consulted many materials and knew several stages of Chinese stock issue, international paper department how to issue stock and the relative policy and system of stock market, then I asked my advisor how to ment on it and collected some ments of experts on the I logged in MARKET WATCH and bought several stocks to do experiment to find out the conclusion that China it was more perfect, so Chinese stock market needed to be is very important in all fields and no other field can exist with breaking away from finance, so the requirements for financer should be improved in the all, in the future society, the requirement for financer was higher than before, the talent only mastered profession will unfit the future in China there are limit resources for me and I am impressed by your esteemed university, so I decided to go abroad for my future education第三篇：留學(xué)申請(qǐng)個(gè)人陳述范例Applicant for Finance Program from Renmin University of ChinaPersonal StatementMy interest in finance can be initially traced back to the bestseller entitled Rich Dad, Poor Dad written by Kiyosaki Robert Lechter Sharon L..Though a tenyearold boy at that time, I was much fascinated with the economic knowledge conveyed in simple expressions of the book which I read for several times and shared the cases in it with my motivation to explore the financial world also benefits from my parents both of whom have achieved higher education in finance and engaged in the relevant received a rigorous academic training for my past undergraduate study in Renmin University of China, I’m eager to educate myself on an international appeals to me by its extensive and profound far as I’m concerned, the relationship between finance and economy is akin to that between blood and as the physical conditions can be reflected from the circulation of blood according to the Chinese medicine, the economic operation of a country can be judged from its financial status, funds flow, exposures to the professional courses of Money and Banking, Corporate Financing, Macro/Micro Economics, Econometrics, International Finance, and Insurance as well as the mathematical courses such as Mathematical Analysis, Advanced Algebra, Probability Theory and Mathematical Statistics have enabled me to lay a solid academic foundation of , bearing in mind sound interpersonal skills and handson ability are the basic personal qualities required of a successful financial person, I availed myself of various opportunities to undertake began to invest in the stock market in face of the frustrations at the outset, I audited all the courses of security analysis and investment on campus, read a lot of financial magazines and newspapers and consulted some professors and my was uplifted during such a process, not only in money making, but also in grasping the principles and regulations behind the stock value my experiences in conducting research programs which acted as bridges linking my theoretical knowledge with the larger world where it would be importantly, I got much enlightenment and inspiration from making presentations, like my presentations regarding the parison and analysis of appreciations of Yuan and Yen along with the cases of these presentations, I tried to arrive at flexible and prehensive mand of plicated , I derived selfconfidence and sense of joy in immersing myself in the fields where my interests genuinely other unique assets are attributed to my internships in different units where finance invariably plays an important I worked in China Foreign Exchange and Trade Centre, I gained a full understanding of the trading systems of mercial banks and raised my own proposals which were soon adopted about their function , I found a trader’s work busy but interesting, which allowed me to see my own strength and weakness gauged with the had my professional skills and teamwork spirit honed during my in