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Dear David,I’ve learned it from the Internet that you want to make a Chinese friend so as to learn the Chinese language and ’m glad that you show such great interest in China and I world like to be your will try my best to write to you as often as possible to introduce you the Chinese you have an opportunity to e to China, I’ll teach you how to speak Chinese and show you around some famous historical places of , I am going to help you as much as I do you think?I’m looking forward to your sincerely,Li Hua。xx??芶mp。請你以李華的名義用英文給David發(fā)一封電子郵件,主要內(nèi)容包括:(1)你怎樣得知David的愿望;(2)你愿意成為他的朋友;(3)你打算如何幫助他;(4)你盼望他的回復(fù)。要求他臥床休息兩、三天,多喝開水。從昨晚開始就這樣,看了醫(yī)生。A Letter of ApplicationDear ,I’m Wang ’ll graduate from Dongfang Vocational school this majoris Computer Science and I like I entered for a CAD petition and I was awardedthe first year, in spare time, I took a parttime job in a pany, where I learnedquite a , I’m writing to apply for a post in your pany with the hope that I can dosomething for my experience and my knowledge, I’m sure I’ll be qualified for myfuture sincerely hope will take my request into consideration, and I wouldappreciate an early faithfully,Wang Hong假如你是李華,請根據(jù)提示的要點寫一份60~80詞的請假條給張老師。我曾獲得計算機輔助設(shè)計(CAD)一等獎。求職信必須包括如下要點:,我將于東方職業(yè)學(xué)校畢業(yè)。請以第一人稱給某公司林先生寫一封80100字的英文求職信。但總有一天,我們會相互理解的。我們要發(fā)展自己的個性。同時,我們必須和父母親進行交流和溝通。演講稿的主要內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括:有些同學(xué)覺得父母不尊重我們,沒有給我們足夠的空間。其中之一就是我們的父母親經(jīng)常翻看我們的書包和日記。人們彼此祝?!靶履昕鞓贰?,并希望來年有好運。而且,他們還能得到許多壓歲錢。,孩子們會很開心。作文必須包括以下要點:,人們從四面八方回到家。(平衡:balance)In the world today, pollution has bee a serious problem facing man and his air, seas, rivers and soil have been seriously polluted by all kinds of waste and poisonous does great harm not only to human beings but also to aninmls and can’t have fresh died front polluted is reported that strange diseases havc appeared in many placesbecause of hope that all the people in the world will take necessary steps and effectivemeasures to solve this serious arc looking forward to the ing of the day when wesee pollution effectively controlled and air is indeed our urgent task to do everythingpossible to protect our ecological environment and to keep nature in good (2012高考題)春節(jié)是中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日。2.列舉23種產(chǎn)生污染的原輛以及由此造成的嚴(yán)重后果。1.污染現(xiàn)已成為全球問題。It is said that there are about half of people in China are young boys and girls have the habit of smoking, though they are middle school we all know, smoking does great harm to human and more people have e to realize how serious this problem they are never bored with causes many lot of people always cough because of most serious illness caused by smoking is lung smoking is a waste of , careless smokers may cause dangerous order to keep healthy, we should get rid of the bad habit of stop smoking at :What is happiness in my mind?Happiness means different things to different example, some students, believe that if they have much money, they will be believe that they will be able to do anything they want to if they have much students think that they should be in good health, and enjoy whatever they students wish to have much wealth from their this way they don’t have to work hard, and they can own don’t quite agree with the above don’t think money means can’t buy many of the things with money, such as health and knowledge, I value knowledge, which makes me happy, for I can do much for mankind with different people value happiness differently, my happiness es from my :進入2l世紀(jì),環(huán)保是引起世界各國重視的大問題。為了保證人們的身體健康,我們應(yīng)當(dāng)改掉吸煙的壞習(xí)慣。同時,吸煙很浪費金錢。由于吸煙,一些人一直在咳嗽。越來越多的人們認(rèn)識到這個問題的嚴(yán)重性,但他們?nèi)匀粯反瞬黄?。許多男孩和女孩都有吸煙的習(xí)慣,盡管他們還是中學(xué)生??傊?,了解、掌握、運用好以上五個方面,就容易得高分。整潔文章寫好后,應(yīng)認(rèn)真修改,不忙于提前交卷,避免大小寫及標(biāo)點符號錯誤,謄寫應(yīng)盡可能書寫工整,布局美觀。如寫通知結(jié)尾可用“Don’t forget the time and address.”,“I’m sure you’ll have a pleasant time/a lot of fun.”或“That’s all, thank you.”;寫參觀歡迎詞開頭可用“You’re wele to visit our city.”,“Now, let me tell you something about our school.”或“Let me introduce something about our school to you.”,結(jié)尾可用“Now, I’d like to introduce something about our school/LI ping to you.”,介紹結(jié)束也可用“That’s all, thank you.”;寫信結(jié)尾可用“please give my best regards/love /wishes to your parents.”或“Remember me to your parents!”,“I hope to hear from you soon.”或“Waiting for your early reply.”必須注意原則:不多不少。常識性。正文。格式。有些需要標(biāo)題,卻粗心漏掉不寫,造成失分。t know what to do and how to do it.(正)另外,考試是根據(jù)內(nèi)容和表達(dá)給分的,要點齊全,是直接因素。t know what and how to do.(錯)→He doesn39。如:1)He studies very hard and kind.(錯)→He studies very hard and he is very kind.(正)2)He doesn39。用全初學(xué)寫作要簡單完整清楚地表達(dá),就要把握兩個關(guān)系:一味追求新、奇、特、難,容易出錯。簡明扼要,表達(dá)清楚,是關(guān)鍵所在。he has many good ways to use to teach us.(錯)→ is good at teaching, and he has many methods of teaching us English.(正)英語作文,受漢語影響,雖語法正確,卻不符英語表達(dá)習(xí)慣。如:1)Study hard, are because they know is the Hope project give their chance to go to school.(錯)→They study hard because they know it is the Hope project that gives them a chance to go to school.(正)2)Wele you e back to our school to visit.(錯)→You’re wele back to visit our school.(正)另外,不重視掌握單詞,寫作時碰到生詞難句就委婉地去解釋,用模糊定義,語言生澀難懂,文意混亂,表達(dá)不清。1)How do you spell the puter?(劃線處去掉the)2)We should treasure the time because the time is money.(劃線處去掉the)用準(zhǔn)用準(zhǔn)確地道的語言,不能生澀難懂,不合英語表達(dá)習(xí)慣。39。如:1)He remembered his wallet had ∧ lost in the bus.(遺漏處加been)2)The matter was happened two years ago.(劃線處去掉was)還有喜歡在動詞前面加be動詞。(4)語態(tài)錯誤。如人事物現(xiàn)狀的介紹,應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主;過去的介紹,應(yīng)以一般過去時為主;日記應(yīng)以一般過去時為主;通知應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主。1)He wouldn’t ∧ able to work out the math problem.(遺漏處加be)2)It isn’t said that they ∧ often careless in class.(遺漏處加are)(3)時態(tài)錯誤。通常錯處出在:(1)多用。m afraid, I think等表示過度及連接的詞匯,使之有較強的感情色彩。s more, I39。為此,應(yīng)注意使用and, so, then, at the same time, on the one hand, on the other hand, first, second,at last, what39。前后不連貫,層次不清晰,邏輯性不強。用順審準(zhǔn)題義,明確情景,看清要求。一般原則是:不多寫、不少寫和不錯寫?,F(xiàn)在,不少學(xué)生對英語書面表達(dá)不予或不夠重視。一般,要文理通暢,非單純地翻譯。學(xué)生作文主要從內(nèi)容要點、語言使用效果、結(jié)構(gòu)和連貫性、格式和語域及與目標(biāo)讀者的交流五個方面進行評價?!镀胀ǜ咧杏⒄Z課程標(biāo)準(zhǔn)》,對九級語言技能目標(biāo)英語寫作有6點明確的要求??忌峡释丫玫那迦A大學(xué)。不得不回絕親戚朋友的邀請,只在除夕時打電話問