【正文】 s we stare at a digital book all the time, our eyes will be tired or even for a long period may do enormous harms to people39。s is the responsibility of the government to help government must give people help no matter how powerful they a word, the statement that people today do not need help from the government because they can solve many important problems is reasons above can firmly support my idea.(260w)獨立1包含should, important, necessary的簡單話題P75 Younger school children(aged between five and ten)should be required to study art and music in addition to math, science, history and order to broaden the horizon of younger school children, it is suggested that they should study art and music as well as other mon agree with it because of the following of all, art and music can help students to life is stressful even for younger children who aged between five and ten, with all kinds of homework and , by having music and art classes, students can get a muchneeded escape from the heavy can help them to relax their mind and study more efficiently in other , music and art classes help improve students39。 teaching levels are greatly improved by municating with other educators from all over the technology bees more developed than in the past, so it is easier now to , people have equal rights to receive we all know, people in the past were in terrible discrimination because of their sex and race(many people such as women and the black people were denied the right to education because they were discriminated against in the society because of their sex and )For example, women and black people were used to be considered as people in lower classes or even slaves and weren39。 Little or no detail, or irrelevant specifics, or questionable responsiveness to the task 252。 An accumulation of errors in sentence structure and/or usage 1分252。 Inappropriate or insufficient exemplifications, explanations, or details to support or illustrate generalizations in response to the task252。 Limited development in response to the topic and task 252。 May demonstrate inconsistent facility in sentence formation and word choice that may result in lack of clarity and occasionally obscure meaning252。 Addresses the topic and task using somewhat developed explanations, exemplifications, and or details 252。 Displays unity, progression, and coherence, though it may contain occasional redundancy, digression, or unclear connections252。 Addresses the topic and task well, though some points may not be fully elaborated 252。 Displays unity, progression, and coherence 252。 Effectively addresses the topic and task 252。s world, it39。第一篇：托福 TPO31獨立寫作[本站推薦]托福 TPO31獨立寫作題目Question: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the specific reasons and examples to support your TPO31 獨立寫作范文 ：In modern society, there is no denying that our paces speed small proportion of people who cannot keep up with this trend or resist the world for the fittest, may hold a viewpoint that a mutable society leads people to less satisfaction and mitigation of sense of happiness since such a world might cause the alienation between good fellows and contamination of our environment。however, in my view, it is not the a matter of fact, in a world changing more rapidly, people tend to bee satisfied much more illustration which can demonstrate my opinion can be the trail of technological the past five decades, millions of new inventions had appeared, entering our daily life, making it much more name a good example, in 1896,Benz assembled the first threewheel car in the it brought accidents and mortality to the world, we cannot deny the enjoyment of ferocious speed brought by cars, which made our jaunt can simply drop by a old friend 100 miles, a distance taking at least half day before, away in one good instance is the invention of smart 1972, Martin, the chief engineer in Moto devised the first portable , this innovation revolutionized out simply imagine what