【正文】 The length of time people spend at school in industrialized was more 6 years than that in developing countries ( VS ).。? 變化1：The numbers fell markedly from 1930 to 1940.? 變化2：Since then they have increased gradually，since then(the year 1940)將這句和上面那句聯(lián)系起來? 變化3：apart from in 1980 when the numbers fell from the 1970 total. 一個apart from引出了第三階段變化，而且這個是先說終點（in 1980），再說起點 from the 1970 totalC3T3題目The charts below show the levels of participation in education and science in developing and industrialized countries in 1980 and 1990.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.These data shows the differences between developing country and industrialized countries’ participation in education and science.In terms of the number of years of schooling received, we see that the length of time people spent at school industrialize countries was much greater at years in 1980, pared to years in developing countries. The gap was increased further in 1980 when the figures rose to years and years respectively.We can see a similar pattern in the second graph, which shows that number of people working as scientists and technicians in industrialized countries increased from 55 to 1,000 people between 1980 and 1980, while the number in developing countries went from 12 to 20.Finally, the figures for spending on research and development show that industrialized countries more than doubled the spending, from $200bn to $400bn, whereas developing countries actually decreased theirs, from $75bn down to $25bn.Overall we can see that not only are there very large difference between the two economies but that these gaps are widening.分析：題目The charts below show the levels of participation in education and science in developing and industrialized countries in 1980 and 1990.? 雖然是多個圖，但都是圍繞著education and science進行的開頭段These data shows the differences between developing country and industrialized countries’ participation in education and science.? 典型的改寫，當然還可以將題目的名詞性短語改寫成句子，如開頭也可以寫成 These data shows how the developing and industrialized countries participated in science and education. 這種改寫的關(guān)鍵是將核心名詞participation改用成謂語動詞participated.主體一段In terms of the number of years of schooling received, we see that the length of time people spent at school in industrialize countries was much greater at years in 1980, pared to years in developing countries.? 說明了1980年developing and industrialized countries的情形? 用pared to表示比較，（ years were）pared to years, pared to為過去分詞短語作補充說明，需要注意的是注意其邏輯主語? in terms of/in respect of 就某個方面而言，這個表達在范文系列中出現(xiàn)很多次了? 注意同義表達 the number of years of schooling received改寫為the length of time people spent at school The gap was increased further in 1980 when the figures rose to years and years respectively.? 說明了兩點：第一是與1980對比，差距增大；第二是1990年兩者的數(shù)據(jù)主體二段We can see a similar pattern in the second graph, which shows that number of people working as scientists and technicians in industrialized countries increased from 55 to 1,000 people between 1980 and 1980, while the number in developing countries went from 12 to 20.? We can see a similar pattern in the second graph說明圖一與圖二的關(guān)系? which shows接的從句說明了該圖的特征，while表示對比，連接了industrialized countries的變化情形和developing ? countries的變化情形? 表示上升的表達 increase from 55 to 1,000。C2T4題目The table below shows the figures for imprisonment in five countries between 1930 and 1980.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.The table shows that the figures for imprisonment in the five countries mentioned indicate no overall pattern of increase of decrease. In fact there is considerable fluctuation from country to country. In Great Britain the numbers in