四六級英文作文參考(參考版)
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【正文】 ___________________________________________________________________________. ：Meanwhile, I’ll spare no effort to work hard both in the study and my future career in order to pay back the loan. 臨摩：全國人民都不遺余力地支持北京舉辦奧運會。 佳句臨摩 ：To make matters worse, my mother has suddenly fallen ill and is expecting a major operation. 臨摩：令人更迷惑不解的是，很多飛機都從大海上離奇消失了。 [6]“我保證…”，that引導同位語從句。 [4]過渡銜接詞語，使文章條理清晰、銜接緊密。 [2]“超出…的能力范圍”。保證合理利用貸款并表明還款決心，最后表示感謝。根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應包含如下內(nèi)容：簡單介紹自己的情況，表明寫信目的：申請助學貸款。 臨?。汉芏嗤瑢W經(jīng)常玩電腦游戲，這是浪費時間，而不是一種有益的放松方式。 3. 佳句：Therefore, college students should attach more importance to cultivating a good character rather than pursuing famous brands. ___________________________________________________________________________ 臨?。簩Υ髮W生來說，了解校園以外的世界是非常必要的。 1. 佳句：It is irrational for college students to pursue famous brands. 佳句臨摹not…but連接并列成分。beyond表示“超出…范圍”。 [6] it為形式主語，不定式為真正主語。 [4]用于引出原因。 [3] follow表示“跟隨，追求(趨勢或時尚)” [1]“有…傾向”。 【亮點點評】 [2]As far as I am concerned, [6]it is irrational for college students to pursue famous brands. [3]After all, most of famous brands are [7]far beyond their consumption ability. [3]Besides, [8]it is not famous brands but a person’s noble character that really makes him high class. [3]Therefore, college students should attach more importance to cultivating a good character [9]rather than pursuing famous brands. [4]The following reasons can account for college students’ preference for famous brands. [2]Above all, in many college students’ eyes, a famous brand is a symbol of sophistication and taste. They expect others to admire their high class and good taste. [2]What’s more, in modern society, famous brands to some extent are equal to fashion, [5]which has a great attraction to young college students. [2]Besides, parents
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