【正文】 engineering and obtained a very impressive track record in most of his courses. No doubt, his distinctive scores landed him as one of the top3 students in his class. The thing that impressed me most was that Mr. Guo paid much attention to applying what he had learned into practice, proving that he is indeed a very gifted student with bright prospects towering both his career and future advanced learning plans. B6 I9 ?* \0 {7 ^ M7 z Upon his graduation in 2005, Mr. Guo has continued to keep in contact with me via . This has enabled me to e to know about the impressive achievements he has acplished throughout his career thus far. Mr. Guo stood out among 30,000 other candidates on his graduation day and was swiftly hired by Kraft Foods, one of the world’s leading Fortune 500 panies. He was first employed as a trainee and subsequently promoted to be a certified process engineer. After two years at Kraft Foods, Mr. Guo joined Hill amp。 and thus I am pleased to ply with his request.5 q+ H8 e( \amp。X( V% a, f+ p Mr. Guo Zhenyu has requested a letter of reference from me to support his application for graduate studies at your esteemed university. As Dean of College of Food Science amp。e Q) x+ ]T9 {/ _$ 0 h Dear Sir or Madame,M R$ x0 F {: r第二封來(lái)自我本科的老師羅云波教授，他是這個(gè)領(lǐng)域全國(guó)最牛的學(xué)科帶頭人之一，現(xiàn)任中國(guó)農(nóng)業(yè)大學(xué)食品科學(xué)與營(yíng)養(yǎng)工程學(xué)院院長(zhǎng)，畢業(yè)于巴斯大學(xué)（University of Bath, UK），恰好我也申請(qǐng)了這所學(xué)校。 P9 {9 a+ Z) P. bBest regards,Benjamin o。A$ ]) T。Edward has progressed quickly to a junior manager who is well known for his reliability, ability to work with different stakeholders and delivery of quality work.8 q* |7 y6 e/ c( P4 {: z8 dShould you have any further questions, I am happy to provide more clarity, either via or phone. RMore importantly, he managed to pick up PR skills within a relatively short period of time.Though he did not have a Public Relations background, he managed to fit in quickly within the group. z* D% U6 [$ ~8 L6 w ? b3 ~4 x6 P1 g) DHis strong desire to learn and ability to fit in: Edward came from a Marketing background from his previous job at Kraft Foods. `amp。3 T5 k% y7 B。While Edward reports in directly to a member of my staff, I have had the opportunity to interact regularly with him.During this time, Edward has benefited from working with both worldleading multinational panies, as well as industry leading Chinese panies. G/ B0 c3 S! _2 PEdward’s role within the organization is primarily to support the team’s marketing and munications work for Hill and Knowlton’s clients, which includes planning, liaising with external stakeholders as well as implementing various initiatives for the clients.I am pleased to make this remendation for him to pursue his postgraduate studies, and believe that he has the capability and potential to make full use of the Masters program to further his career in future, hopefully back with Hill and Knowlton (China). $ E3 s: H% W* eamp。D. ` I have been asked by Edward Guo (Guo Zhenyu) to provide a reference / remendation for his application for the Masters program in Marketing at your esteemed university. v x5 N9 a z1 Q2 P Dear Sir/Madam,amp。L）中國(guó)區(qū)董事總經(jīng)理，新加坡人，畢業(yè)于南洋理工大學(xué)（Nanyang Technological University, Singapore）。 m6 T% F8 z ] 第一封來(lái)自我的老板Benjamin Tan Hak Boon（陳學(xué)文），時(shí)任偉達(dá)公關(guān)（Hill amp。幸運(yùn)的是，我首選的兩個(gè)big name都同意作為我的推薦人了，而且當(dāng)時(shí)我的老板Ben并沒(méi)有用我寫(xiě)好的版本，而是親筆為我重寫(xiě)了一份，讓我非常感動(dòng)！我把兩份推薦信也貼出來(lái)供未來(lái)申請(qǐng)的同學(xué)參考吧。 g! A6 K z2 c7 S4 C) A 你列出那些可能的推薦人用上述三個(gè)條件篩選之后通常就不會(huì)很多了，在剩下的名字當(dāng)中重點(diǎn)要考慮第三項(xiàng)，即這些人當(dāng)中誰(shuí)與你有過(guò)直接上下級(jí)的關(guān)系。不過(guò)，選擇推薦人的時(shí)候還要考慮一下這個(gè)人的簽名本身是否夠份量，這取決于三個(gè)條件：, n Z) A/ A f D0 n1）無(wú)論在學(xué)術(shù)界還是商界，最好都要位高權(quán)重、名聲遠(yuǎn)揚(yáng)；2）出身名校，有海外背景，如果畢業(yè)自你申請(qǐng)的學(xué)校就更好了；3）與你的學(xué)習(xí)和工作存在交集，也就是邏輯上他有充分了解你的機(jī)會(huì)。中國(guó)一個(gè)不太好的風(fēng)氣是推薦信大多是自己寫(xiě)好的，發(fā)給推薦你的人看看，如果對(duì)方?jīng)]有異議并且愿意在最后簽上自己的名字，就大功告成了。末了，真心感謝最后幫我潤(rùn)色英文的好朋友，Really appreciated, Sheena Melissa Chok!1 I6 y D5 B0 Y9 H% Q9 z) v, b, Y7 `6 g解析自己的留學(xué)申請(qǐng)文書(shū) – 推薦信, V3 ` d8 Y0 A以前在卡夫食品工作的時(shí)候，leader跟我說(shuō)職場(chǎng)成功要做到“三行”，首先是自己的能力要行，其次是要有人說(shuō)你行，最后是說(shuō)你行的那個(gè)人本身要行。 B8 n( H8 I8 w: G$ h1 S注：最后，再?gòu)?qiáng)調(diào)一下自己的motivation，表示自己對(duì)于進(jìn)一步求學(xué)的渴望。 X/ k g2 \. O。 \/ M+ \amp。 o J* h* g1 r \0 T$ h* M/ kWith my four years of experience as a student leader in China Agricultural University and my working experience in two industries, I have managed to build a strong sense of selfdiscipline. My four years of working experience has no doubt enhanced my perspective in the world of business. With this I am determined to undertake all endeavors fully and wholeheartedly. My decision to study marketing in UK is a very important step and I am taking this very seriously, and I believe I am both physically and mentally equipped with the drive to succeed and excel. 5 P {3 C Camp。