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如果要沖刺高分,我們要再加一句話,給文章畫一個有力的句號,或提升文章的思想境界,立意升華。表達“同時,我們不能忽視反方觀點的價值,或低低估某事的負面影響”。所以該句不是簡單的改寫,而應是遞進或強調(diào)。這句話其實是針對首段最后一句話改寫。第五段第1句結(jié)論段?!眑 But still, jobrelated skills are more important for most students.l But still, the cos are far greater.其實本句還可以不用反駁,再寫反方第二論據(jù),或針對第一論據(jù)的拓展、支持、舉例。該段為文章次要信息,可點到為止,不可花費過多時間和筆墨糾纏。表達“即便如此,反方觀點在大多數(shù)情況下還是不可行的”或“即使存在上面提到的負面,正面影響仍是大于負面的”。There are, of course, students interested in knowledge for its own sake, and they will later bee scientists and scholars who will make greater contributions to our society.Explanation:可選用Of course或 Indeed開始本句。It is also true that universities should develop pure science and knowledge.Explanation:在討論優(yōu)勢和劣勢的文章中,我們可以直接使用下列句型:l This is not to say, however, that we should neglect the problems it has caused.l But to acknowledge only the positive impact would be short sighted.第2句想反方觀點的論據(jù),或在特殊、極端情況下的一些合理性。②兼顧了反方觀點,不會出現(xiàn)評分標準中因為partly address the task而丟分的情況。第四段第1句寫讓步段落的兩大好處:①大多數(shù)考生絞盡腦汁也想不出第三個原因論據(jù)。當然還可以再舉一例:Another example is sth. 然后解釋說明。If a university can quickly respond, and consolidate teaching resources to offer courses about 3D, not only will its graduates be more petitive in the job market, but the university itself will keep pace with the technological development and move forward.如果一所大學能迅速反應,整合教學資源提供3D