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比如可以概括如下 This article point out the mon phenomenon —— rare animals cannot escape being hurt and killed by human being. Don’t copy the sentences in the text. Use another word or phrase that has the same or similar meaning. Use different sentence structures to express the same idea. Attention 。 This passage discusses the importance of selflearning for children. Students should have the chance to correct their own mistakes, learnbydoing and learn from each other, not just the teacher. (29 words) 3) The article gives the view that teachers should let students correct their mistakes by themselves. Students are able to correct their own mistakes and teachers’ frequent correction will make children unable to judge their own work. (35words) 4) Some people think students’ mistakes should be corrected by themselves and it is wrong for the teachers to do it for them too