高考考前寫作輔導(dǎo)(參考版)
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【正文】 Wish you success 寫作常見錯(cuò)誤： 1 動詞與主語關(guān)系不清 誤： I saw an old man going out of City Park and was about to cross Park Road. 正： I saw an old man going out of City Park and he was about to cross Park Road. 誤： But the car ran off immediately instead of stopping to apologize to the man. 正： But the driver drove off immediately instead of stopping to apologize to the man. 誤： The park should charge the entrance fee. 正： The entrance fee should be charged for parks. 正： People should pay for the entrance fee if they go to the parks. 2 句子之間的邏輯關(guān)系不清 誤： It hit the old man down but the driver, a woman, didn’t stop her car. Finding she had caused an accident, the woman sped her car to flee away. The old man and I saw the car’s number. It’s AC864. The old man couldn’t move , I decided to help him. 正： It hit the old man down but the driver, who was a woman, didn’t stop her car. Finding she had caused an accident, the woman sped her car to flee away. Fortunately, I saw the car’s number. It’s AC864. Noticing the old man couldn’t move, I decided to help him. 3畫蛇添足 、過多的長句使句子復(fù)雜化 （語言不簡潔） 修改前： A famous sportsman was giving a speech which was rather interesting. 修改后： A famous sportsman was giving an interesting speech. 修改前 Nowadays, some people are
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