【正文】 ◇ 語言點提示： resort to 借助、訴諸、求助于 ◇ 第三段思路點評： 先陳述人們對網(wǎng)絡的依賴，再談對此。 ◇ 語言點提示： has drawn?, realized, and provided 此為謂語連動式的運用。兩個長句足矣。第三段，論述對網(wǎng)絡依賴的觀點。第一段，側(cè)重簡述網(wǎng)絡給人們生活的多彩、便利。【范文】 Enhance Awareness to Guard against Campus Thefts? “If you don’t want to wake up and find you have no pants to wear, you’d better put them on in sleep,” goes a popular joke among students. Obviously, campus thefts have bee increasingly annoying as they occur far more often than before. And it seems that the thieves are less choosy these days, with their targets ranging widely from bikes, cell phones, purses, prepaid IC cards to sunglasses, bags, and even underwear. In short, anything that worth a dime is likely to be stolen. What makes students the easy targets? The reasons are not hard to find. But I believe of all these reasons, the lack of antitheft alertness is the most important. For lack of alertness, the students tend to leave the doors and windows wide open during sleep at noon or at night in summer. For the same reason, they’ll also leave their bikes unlocked before a store or by a road, or fet to take away their personal stuff before they go out of the classroom to make a phone call. These acts undoubtedly have increased their exposure to the lightfingered monsters. In order to minimize possible losses, the students must stay on guard in the first place, as awareness of the thefts around often makes a big difference. To be more specific, the students should not hide any tempting amount of cash in the dorm. Put it in the bank instead. Besides, do not leave any valuable items unattended. Take them wherever you go. In addition, it’s advisable to develop a neighbourhood watch programme with other students in the dorm and neighbouring dorms. ◇ 第一段思路點評： 陳述校園盜竊案件發(fā)生的情況 ◇ 語言點提示： it seems that 此句型表示一種可能性 ◇ 第二段思路點評： 說明被盜原因 ◇ 語言點提示： (1)What makes students the easy targets?此句引出下文 (2)antitheft alertness 防盜意識 (3)lack of alertness 缺乏警惕 (4)lightfingered 小偷小摸的、慣行扒竊的 ◇ 第三段思路點評： 闡述如何加強防盜意識 ◇ 語言點提示： 注意關(guān)聯(lián)詞語 in the first place， Besides， In addition 的使用可使行文更富邏輯性。第二段，主要分析校園物品被盜的原因。 ◇ 語言點提示： take precautions 采取預防措施 fire extinguisher 滅火器 (二 )Enhance Awareness to Guard against Campus Thefts 1. 校園盜竊案件時有發(fā)生 2. 物品被盜的原因 3. 學生如何加強防盜意識 ● 審 題概述 ● 這是一篇論述校園物品被盜和加強防盜意識的文章。 【范文】 Fire Prevention on Campus? People are alarmed by the succession of campus fires in recent years. In each of these accidents, heavy casualties were reported – houses were burned down, students lost their lives, and properties were damaged. Faced with such a chilling fact, people keep asking, “ What on earth results in these repeat