作文willphoneskillletterwriting(參考版)
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【正文】 。好在在第二段中用了first, in the second place, third, what’s more來連接自己的幾個理由，結(jié)構(gòu)尚算清楚。而且該考生在語法、拼寫、大小寫以及很常用的基本詞語的意義和用法上有存在很多問題。短文基本切題，文字勉強連貫，基本上能表達作者的意思，但是開頭段太過煩瑣，不能做到言簡意賅?？傮w來說，在35分鐘規(guī)定時間內(nèi)完成的這篇短文還是比較不錯的，所以得到了14分的好成績。例如，開頭的There seems to be a fashion,其中seems to be a fashion意為“似乎有一種潮流”，只是似乎，那也有可能沒有呢，而如果沒有，作者就失去了立論依據(jù)，所以在這里最好直接改為There is a fashion 就行了。例如：side with, timeconsuming as it may be , …can never be in a position to rival the spontaneous joy when …, the only and the best choice would be no other than …, abandon phone for … 等等。用for one thing, for another 來從兩個方面論證自己的觀點，最后由however一詞引出自己的客觀的立場。全文僅僅圍繞題目的要求，段落分明，表達思想清楚，行文較為流暢。第二段中作者闡述了兩點理由來論證自己的觀點，一方面認為寫信能比電話更為真誠地傳達感情，另一方面在有些情況下，寫信要比電話更為正式和得體。t bother to get a phone as it means nothing to them. Still a lot of people remain to be illiterate, which means they may have difficulty using phones properly. Phones for those people, are nothing but a white reason is that, some people keep letter writing as a hobby by which they express their most sincere feelings. Everyone has experienced a sense of happiness when hearing from friends, family members, lovers. It is just beyond parison. Every words contains infinite emotions. Letters pass people love to others by traveling through the long long journey. And also letter writing is cheaper!According to what have been stated, we can safely draw aconclusion that the day phones kill letter writing is still not there yet. We have every reason to believe that letter writing, will exist lively for ever, as a most traditional, expressive form of munications.示例六 Recently young people tend to phone more often than write to each other, so some say that phones will letter writing still has a strong vitality, it can not be killed by phones so easily in mordern time. First of all,it’s true that phones are convenience to inform efficiently,but if can not burden much more. There are always something you are unwilling to speak out. At that time, you can ask a letter writing for letter writing give you more freedom and room on the ’s more,letter writing has longer quality guarantee period than words said the result of this,you can keep them just as treasure a present of your you can visualize the conversation right away even after a very long but not least important,letter writing always has fewer mistakes so it is a ripe fruit of thought,paring on phone,words lack of enough consideration. All in all,letter writing is free and has a merit of longevity,it will not be killed by phone ,for it is mature thought and has modern form such as ,I reckon that letter writing will last for even a long time示例七、八WILL PHONES KILL LETTER WRITING?You are to wri
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