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In conclusion ,the automobile , more than any other mode of transportation, has greatly changed people’s lives. It is a longcherished aim of the whole world to finally eliminate the harms done by people’s excessive use of private cars. In no way is it an easy task. Nonetheless, through the smooth implementation of more efficient traffic laws and regulations as well as the enhanced awareness of the public,the pollution of cars will be reduced.。 但最終消除過度使用汽車造成的環(huán)境危害是全世界長久樹立的目標(biāo),這是一個(gè)艱巨的任務(wù)。 結(jié)尾除了給予總結(jié)的正常論述外,還給予了解決的方法和建議,這樣的論述更具說服力。 為了建設(shè)資源節(jié)約型和環(huán)境友好型的社會(huì),人們理應(yīng)少開車。二氧化碳引起全球范圍的溫室效應(yīng),導(dǎo)致海平面上升并對天氣產(chǎn)生不良影響。人們不得不面對這個(gè)無法逃避的現(xiàn)實(shí)。汽車的使用嚴(yán)重威脅著我們的環(huán)境。 里面把汽車尾氣,二氧化碳,資源浪費(fèi)