四級寫作評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)ppt課件(參考版)
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【正文】 用詞準(zhǔn)確，僅有個(gè)別 小錯(cuò)誤 。表達(dá)思想清楚，文字連貫，用詞比較準(zhǔn)確，但有少量語言錯(cuò)誤，如 “ Also in some places. Women are considered being “thing” belong to men”，應(yīng)改為 “ Also in some places， women are considered being the “things”that belong to men” ? （ 14分段） ? 東方教育點(diǎn)評：切題。 （ 2）文字缺連貫、且顯累贅，如第二段可以把各句再改得簡練一點(diǎn)并且有適當(dāng)?shù)霓D(zhuǎn)承詞。有些地方表達(dá)思想不夠清楚，文字勉強(qiáng)連貫；語言錯(cuò)誤相當(dāng)多，其中有一些是嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤。 （ 3）語言錯(cuò)誤較多，很多句子不通順，如 “ In today, many women have a work.”應(yīng)改為 “ Today, many women get a job.”(濫用介詞 )； “ In ancient, women’s position in family is pity”中 pity應(yīng)改為 pitiful（詞形誤用）； “ They had to looks after their children, did every how husband ordered her to do.”中 every 改為 everything， how改為 what（代詞錯(cuò)誤）； “ They have the right of speaking of idea, discussion thing with her husband, do what she wants to do.”應(yīng)改為 “ They have the right to express ideas, discuss things with their respective husband, and do what they want to.”(人稱代詞前后 不一致 )。 具體問題剖析： ? （ 1）各段圍繞中心句論述不深入，沒有說服力。但表達(dá)思想不清楚，連貫性差。 ? （ 3）銜接不自然，沒有用適當(dāng)?shù)年P(guān)聯(lián)詞，如 “ Sometimes, the matter, the husband hitting has welf, often happened”，應(yīng)改為“ The case that husband hits his wife often happens. ” ? （ 4）拼寫錯(cuò)誤很多，大部分句子均有 錯(cuò)誤 。 具體問題剖析： ? (1)缺乏邏輯，東一句西一句，沒有圍繞中心論述，如第一段就沒有展開論述婦女社會角色的轉(zhuǎn)變，說得太籠統(tǒng)而缺乏說服力。我閱卷的時(shí)候看到字跡不清楚的就大概打個(gè)分?jǐn)?shù)。也不要太長，以免犯太多錯(cuò)誤。基礎(chǔ)差一點(diǎn)的同學(xué)可以多套用；基礎(chǔ)好的同學(xué)可以少用。 ? 不要用自己不明確和不會拼寫的詞 ，還有一定要 確保句子的正確性，盡量避免語法結(jié)構(gòu)的錯(cuò)誤 。 ? 適當(dāng)用稍微復(fù)雜一點(diǎn)的句型，如定語從句、強(qiáng)調(diào)句、倒裝句、并列結(jié)構(gòu)、名詞性從句、獨(dú)立成分等。每段的起始句都要寫好。 ? 同時(shí)在文章
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