【正文】 15．H解析：Mobile phones have been used widely in our daily life today. With the development of economy,。亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務，語言表達符合英語習慣，準確運用時態(tài)，主謂一致，在文中使用了時間狀語從句，定語從句，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如have fun，in order to，as for，in my opinion等。14．B解析：Students in our school have one thing in mon an interest in sports. But different students have different reasons for taking part in sports.Many students have sports when they feel tired after study. They just want to relax themselves and have fun. Most boys love sports. They take part in all kinds of sports in order to bee stronger. They join in the sports that interest them most, such as soccer, basketball and volleyball. As for girls, they want to lose weight. They want to keep slim, so they also like taking exercise.In my opinion, no matter what reasons we have, we all can get a lot from sports.【解析】【詳解】本篇寫作主要是談論自己對運動的觀點和看法，應該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，寫作要點要包括：。t be afraid of the difficulties in my life and I39。文章中句式變化豐富，有簡單句、并列句、復合句，長短句結(jié)合，增強了文章的表現(xiàn)力。短文主要分成三段，每一段主題都很明確，敘述詳細、清楚。文章有以下幾個優(yōu)點：首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包括了題目中要求的所有內(nèi)容，沒有遺漏要點。為提升文章檔次，應注意銜接詞以及高級句式或復雜結(jié)構(gòu)的使用。應從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā)，選擇適當句型、短語、詞匯進行表達。寫作時應注意：首先要保證發(fā)言稿中包括了所有提示的內(nèi)容，不能遺漏要點，可以根據(jù)表達需要適當發(fā)揮，但要與上下文意銜接起來。寫作時學生們應根據(jù)這幾個內(nèi)容提要，發(fā)揮自己的想象力，將這些內(nèi)容補充完整，用正確的英語表達出來。m sure that nothing can beat me and I will win! Believe myself, a beautiful future is waiting for me.Thank you for your listening.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以Believe Myself and I will win為題，寫一篇演講稿。13．B解析：Believe Myself, and I will winHello, everyone! As an old saying goes, where there is a will, there is a way. There always are difficulties in our life and we have to face them.When I was in the seventh grade, I always had difficulty in learning English. I just couldn’t understand it. I even wanted to give it up. Then my parents told me that where there is a will, there is a way. They also told me that I should be confident. My English teacher encouraged me to continue to study and told me some good ways to study it. I had the confidence again. I found when I put my heart into it, English didn’t’ seem that difficult. I made great progress. My parents and teachers were happy for me. I felt pleased and proud for myself, too. To be confident means I should believe myself. Believe myself, there are hopes in my life. In the future, I won39。短文中使用了豐富的句式，如Some students can39。句式結(jié)構(gòu)以簡單句為主，敘述清晰、簡潔。短文有如下幾個優(yōu)點：首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包含了題目中要求的所有信息，且層次清晰，文章分成了四段，每一段的中心話題也很明確。語句之間使用恰當?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫。句式結(jié)構(gòu)可以簡單句結(jié)構(gòu)為主，這樣的句式表達簡潔、明了，易于掌握。學生們可以從自身的經(jīng)歷和體會出發(fā)，選取生活中常見的場景進行介紹。審題可知，文章中應主要包括以下幾個內(nèi)容：首先介紹同學們普遍感到壓力這種現(xiàn)象；然后講述自己過去曾面對的壓力；最后介紹自己如何成功緩解壓力。 I had a talk with my parents and told them I had done my best. Finally, they understood me. In this way, I feel less stressed out so that I can concentrate more on my studies.s world. Most students in our class are under too much pressure. Some students can39。這里Protecting the environment 做主語，用的是動詞的ing形式。這里had better表示最好，后面跟動詞原形，take a bus表示乘公共汽車。寫作中適當使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達具有條理性。寫作時，避免使用漢語式的英語，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語。時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時。s more, we had better walk or take a bus. Protecting the environment is our duty. Everyone should play a part in saving the earth.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇材料作文，根據(jù)材料中的相關(guān)信息介紹一下整個國家的空氣污染狀況。s activities are also the sources of air pollution such as throwing the rubbish and smoking. What39。s a good idea to talk with your classmates in Chinese、I think it can help you to improve your pronunciation、In a word, if you have good ways of learning Chinese, you will learn it 。文章中的語句以簡單句結(jié)構(gòu)為主，也使用了并列句和復合句，調(diào)整了文章的結(jié)構(gòu)。其次短文使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，句式結(jié)構(gòu)符合英語的表達習慣。文章主要分成三個部分：第一段是與Sam之間的問候以及引出Sam學習漢語這一話題，并介紹寫信的目的；第二段中是提出的具體的建議，這是這篇文章的主體，所在篇幅最大?！军c睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求給Sam寫了一封信，對他的漢語學習提出了一些好的建議。為提升文章檔次，可以穿插使用并列句或復合句以及其他一些復雜句式。應從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)考慮，寫完整的句子。文章應使用一般現(xiàn)在時，根據(jù)表達需要使用恰當?shù)娜朔Q。d better read Chinese magazines or newspapers after class. You can also watch Chinese programmes on the Internet. I think it can help you to improve your pronunciation. Lastly, you can write s to me or other Chinese friends in Chinese.In a word, if you have good ways of learning Chinese, you will learn it well.Yours,Daming【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以大明的身份給Sam寫一封信，告訴他如何學好漢語，題目中從四個方面提出了建議。s a good idea to talk with your classmates in Chinese. And don39。10．D解析：Dear Sam,I39。高分句型：That’s why I want to choose paper cutting中why引導的表語從句。前三段分別講述他所喜歡的學科（體育、剪紙和廚藝），并解釋愿意以及收獲，最后一段講述這些學科對他的生活的意義。：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的文章，很好地完成了試題中所規(guī)定的內(nèi)容。注意時態(tài)的運用，靈活運用所學單詞、短語和句型。9．A解析：例文Of all the courses, I like sports best because I am interested in playing basketball. I can make a lot of friends when I play basketball. And I will learn the spirit of teamwork. So I want to choose sports.I also like paper cutting because it is very interesting and I can learn more about traditional Chinese culture. That’s why I want to choose paper cutting.I often help my parents with housework when I am free. So I want to learn how to cook delicious food. I think it is very useful course because I’d like to cook something different for my parents.I believe these courses will make my life more colorful.【解析】【詳解】。恰當?shù)闹V語也為文章增色不少，例如用到了“Practice makes perfect”熟能生巧這個諺語。寫作亮點：首先用一個自然段來闡明寫作的主題，表達出自己的觀點（認為作業(yè)是很必要的），可以借助it is necessary for sb to do…這樣的句型。首先需要陳述正反兩方面的觀點，其次結(jié)合自己的實際經(jīng)驗，發(fā)表自己的觀點。t be too much. It can improve our skills. Daily homework should be different and colorful. It might be some extensive reading, a paper or even just a game. We should be left enough free time so that we can do things we really like to do.That39。m glad to give a report about my ideas on daily homework. I think it39。文中 not only …but also…，help a lot，share happiness and sadness，do well in，give up, besides，so, and, a good sense of time, used to, make sb.+adj.，therefore, be proud of等詞（組）恰當使用，使上下文意連接緊密；文章的最后I hope one day, my school and teachers will be proud of me! 表達了自己愿望與想法，使文章增色不少，值得學習。寫作中注意連詞、固定短語的交替使用，使文意連接緊密，還要注意使用豐富的語句，注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，最后最好要表達出自己的感想和看法。7．H解析：How time flies! My colourful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think about myself.In the past, I learnt a lot of knowledge not only f