【正文】 。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀觥⒚鞔_的關(guān)鍵。構(gòu)思提綱。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。Dear Angel,How are you doing? Best wishes!Yours,Cathy【答案】Dear Angel,How are you doing? I’m writing to tell you that we received the books that you bought for us. We are grateful to you and all of us are very happy。3字跡工整、語言精練、表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確、條理清晰。寫作要求：1不得使用真實(shí)的姓名和學(xué)校名。（3）同學(xué)們將在下個(gè)月網(wǎng)購其他的英文書。2介紹活動的情況：（l）上周五，俱樂部成員們一起讀英文書。請你根據(jù)以下信息, 給Angel寫一封電子郵件，告訴她俱樂部的活動情況，并說說網(wǎng)購圖書的好處。10．書面表達(dá)假如你是英語俱樂部的Cathy,上周五你們收到了外教Angel為同學(xué)們網(wǎng)購的英文書籍。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。m very happy to have the chance to show my plan for the graduation ceremony. The ceremony will be held in our school hall at 7 o’clock on June have planned three activities for it. First of all, we would like to invite our headmaster to make a speech and give us his best wishes for a bright future. After that, every one give each other gifts and blessings. And then each class will give a wonderful performance. In the end, some pictures will be shown to share the happy time we have had together.This is what we will do. I hope you will choose my plan.Best wishes,Yours,Li hua【解析】【分析】這篇書面表達(dá)主要是推薦自己的畢業(yè)晚會計(jì)劃。 。 ，語法正確，書寫整潔。假定你是李華，請根據(jù)要點(diǎn) 寫一封信，說說你的計(jì)劃。寫作亮點(diǎn)：本文語言精煉，像第二自然段的Football has a very long history. It is liked by people all over the world. The World Cup takes place every four years. it helps develop team spirit. What’s more, playing football is good for our health. 等等句子，簡潔，但是句意表達(dá)清楚；同時(shí)，本文用了被動語態(tài)、動名詞作主語、不定式作表語等等語法形式，使表達(dá)生動；用了first, second等使得短文層次清楚。要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫。參考詞匯：梅西 MessiDear classmates,I’m very excited to hear that China will build 20,000 footballthemed schools by 2020. Thank you for your attention.【答案】Dear classmates，I’m very excited to hear that China will build 20，000 footballthemed schools by 2020．Football has a very long history．It is liked by people all over the world．The World Cup takes place every four years．Playing football has lots of advantages．First，both boys and girls can take part in it．Second，it helps develop team spirit．What’s more，playing football is good for our health．I’m a football fan．Messi is my hero．He has a gift for playing football．My dream is to bee a famous football player like Messi．I hope China will hold the World Cup some day．Thank you for your attention．【解析】【詳解】試題分析：本題要求按提綱的提示，介紹足球運(yùn)動并談?wù)勛约旱膲粝?。?識歷史悠久，深受喜愛世界杯4年舉行一次好 處男生女生皆可參加利于培養(yǎng)團(tuán)隊(duì)精神考生自擬（至少1點(diǎn)）偶 像梅西，有足球天賦夢 想考生自擬（至少1點(diǎn)）注意：1. 詞數(shù)90左右。 ”8．書面表達(dá)為了配合“足球進(jìn)校園”活動，你們班開展了一次主題班會。比如：固定搭配、固定句型It39?！芭懿健?，正文部分詳細(xì)地描寫了自己起初跑步總是不及格，通過克服困難、不懈地努力，堅(jiān)持跑步，到現(xiàn)在比以前會跑；結(jié)尾談了這件事對自己的影響；文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，前后呼應(yīng)?！驹斀狻浚玫谝蝗朔Q寫初中生活中自己堅(jiān)持做的一件事，根據(jù)提示，描寫“What did you do?用一般過去時(shí)，描寫How do you feel?用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。m very proud of feel more confident and I39。提示詞語：keep, practice, difficult, give up, proud提示問題：1. What did you do?2. How do you feel?It s important for us to keep trying to achieve our goals. 【答案】It39。假如你是李華，請用英語寫一篇短文投稿。生活中想要做成任何一件事情，都需要持之以恒的精神。7．題目②“持之以恒，方得始。語法規(guī)范、準(zhǔn)確。文章最后的兩句話也點(diǎn)明了文章的主題。作者在短文中敘述了林濤和梅梅兩人在公園里給小樹澆水、并掛牌子告訴人們注意保護(hù)樹木。點(diǎn)睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。在文章中點(diǎn)綴幾個(gè)并列句、復(fù)合句或復(fù)雜句式，調(diào)整文章節(jié)奏，提升文章檔次。寫作時(shí)要注意按照事情發(fā)展的先后順序，這樣可以使文章條理清楚。因此寫作前，要仔細(xì)看圖片，了解圖片中所發(fā)生的事情，并提煉出要點(diǎn)，列出所要用到的詞匯、短語等，或者列出大概的寫作提綱。請用英語寫一篇約100詞的短文。正確文章行文連貫、語句通順、表達(dá)流暢。s easy for us to get around on shared bikes