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。短語和固定搭配的正確使用也為這篇文章增色不少,例如“adjust to…”(調(diào)整以適應(yīng)…),“as time went by”(隨著時(shí)間的流逝),“made great progress”(取得巨大進(jìn)步),“keep on learning”(繼續(xù)學(xué)習(xí)),“In a word”(總而言之)等等短語使用正確。t adjust to the weather and life ,as time went by,I found myself quite happy when I saw the students I was teaching made great order to teach them,I had to keep on learning as a result,my English improved a ,I made friends with some of my are still keeping in touch by letter now.In a word,not only did I help those in need,but also I myself learn a lot that I have another chance to do volunteer work,I am ready to go.【解析】寫作分析:這是一篇給定標(biāo)題的材料作文,需要逐條完成要點(diǎn)問題的回答,描述一次自己讓別人開心快樂的經(jīng)歷,是一篇記敘文,首先要讀懂5個(gè)問題,其次要用恰當(dāng)?shù)恼Z言和銜接手段把這五個(gè)問題的回答聯(lián)系在一起,變成一篇短文,同時(shí)也要注意在描述過去的故事的時(shí)候要正確運(yùn)用過去時(shí)態(tài)。高分句型:It is +adj. + for sb. +to do sth.;there be句型;祈使句;need to do sth.。承接文章開頭,句意完整,避免漢語式英語,敘述條理清晰。主要說明要有自己的目標(biāo),努力實(shí)現(xiàn)目標(biāo)應(yīng)做到勤奮學(xué)習(xí),使自己不斷強(qiáng)大;正確面對(duì)困難,積極參加社會(huì)活動(dòng)。寫作要求:,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮使行文連貫; ,字跡工整,詞數(shù)不少于80;,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);。請(qǐng)以Dream Chaser為題,談?wù)勀阕约旱挠^點(diǎn)。但既然選擇了遠(yuǎn)方,便只顧風(fēng)雨兼程?!究键c(diǎn)定位】 考查提綱類作文。寫作亮點(diǎn):短文開頭直奔主題:我想要談?wù)勎业臒兰霸鯓犹幚硭麄?;后面三段分別從外貌上的煩惱、與父母交流上的障礙、學(xué)習(xí)上的壓力幾方面分別談?wù)撟约旱臒兰疤幚淼姆绞剑鷦?dòng)具體,條理分明。要包含表格中所有的信息,并作適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮。Hello everyone,Hello everyone,I am Li Hua. I’d like to talk about my problems and how I deal with them. That’s all. Thank you!【答案】Hello everyone,I am Li Hua. I’d like to talk about my problems and how I deal with them.I am not very tall and very mon. But I don’t care and I believe in myself.My parents don’t understand me and I have very few friends. I encourage myself to be kind to others and learn to municate with others very well.I often feel stressed because of my study and I don’t have many chances to join the afterclass activities. I will plan my time very carefully and improve my study in a very good way. Try to join as many activities as possible and achieve a balance between study and hobbies.That’s all. Thank you!【解析】試題分析:本題是一篇給材料作文,要求用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿,在班會(huì)上談?wù)勀阌龅降臒酪约澳阕约旱淖龇ā?. 所寫內(nèi)容必須包括表格中所有的信息,并作適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮。假設(shè)你是李華,請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表提示,用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿,在班會(huì)上談?wù)勀阌龅降臒酪约澳阕约旱淖龇?。要點(diǎn): 不重視課外閱讀的原因1. 作業(yè)太多2. 沒有讀書習(xí)慣3. 時(shí)間花在電腦或網(wǎng)絡(luò)上課外閱讀的好處1. 更多地了解世界2. 學(xué)會(huì)如何思考3. 生活更加豐富多彩對(duì)學(xué)校或同學(xué)的建議……(至少一點(diǎn))注意:1. 詞數(shù): 80個(gè)左右(開頭已給出的內(nèi)容不記入總詞數(shù));2. 內(nèi)容必須包括上表中的要點(diǎn),可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,但不要逐字翻譯;3. 條理清楚、語句連貫;4.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的地名、校名和人名。7.目前,許多中學(xué)生不重視課外閱讀。(2)To do voluntary labor is a good chance for them to learn how to do difficult work. 做義務(wù)勞動(dòng)是他們學(xué)習(xí)如何做困難工作的好機(jī)會(huì)。亮點(diǎn)句型:(1)A strong argument has taken place among students since our school made students do voluntary labor. 自從我們學(xué)校讓學(xué)生做自愿勞動(dòng)以來,在學(xué)生中發(fā)生了一場激烈的爭論。 生詞提示:respect尊重【答案】A strong argument has taken place among students since our school made students do voluntary labor.Some students think it is a good way of education. Now most families have only one child. They never do hard work. To do voluntary labor is a good chance for them to learn how to do difficult work. It can also help them understand and respect the cleaners.But others have different points. They think it is easy for them to get sick. They don’t think it is students'jobs. Cleaning the classroom every day is enough.【解析】【詳解】閱讀題干要求,這是一篇看法類的作文,那么首先得點(diǎn)明討論的話題,然后分別寫出不同人群對(duì)此事的看法,時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。 3.打掃教室就足夠了。 不同意:1.很臟,容易使學(xué)生生病。 2.學(xué)生應(yīng)該學(xué)會(huì)做艱苦的工作。 這件事在學(xué)生