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【點(diǎn)睛】點(diǎn)睛:首先認(rèn)真審題,看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn);然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容,列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá);然后緊扣要點(diǎn),動(dòng)筆寫作,在寫作過(guò)程中,要注意句與句、段與段之間的過(guò)渡,必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞,使文章過(guò)渡平穩(wěn),自然流暢;最后,要仔細(xì)檢查有無(wú)單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)誤用等,還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理,有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言,大小寫是否正確,詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。同時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu),造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣;盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,最好不要寫太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句;盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫的單詞,確保正確率;詞匯、句式要豐富多樣,可以為文章增色添彩。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料,不可遺漏要點(diǎn),并可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。文章時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),人稱主要為第一人稱。It’s good to get up earlyGetting up early is a good habit. It’s good for us in many ways.______________________________________________________________________________【答案】It’s good to get up earlyGetting up early is a good habit. It’s good for us in many ways. Firstly ,we can have enough time to plan a day better .Secondly,doing exercise is good for our health .Also, breathing the fresh air is good to our bodies and our moods, and it can help remember important things easily. Thirdly, having breakfast can help protect our stomachs ,make us have good health ,and have more energy to do all kinds of things better. In a word, the morning is the key of a day. Everyone should get up early every day.【解析】【詳解】本文是一篇話題作文。3. 詞數(shù)90詞左右。要求:1. 包含所給信息,并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。同學(xué)們,沐浴在晨光中,行走在上學(xué)路上,當(dāng)我們有充足的時(shí)間安排一天的學(xué)習(xí)生活時(shí),你會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)每天早起一點(diǎn)點(diǎn)會(huì)給我們帶來(lái)許多好處。寫作中注意使用連詞,做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密,符合邏輯關(guān)系。寫作中注意將以前的自己和現(xiàn)在的自己介紹清楚,并介紹一下自己的愿望。(3)提示詞:get along with;colorful(adj.);knowledge;habitI Expect My School LifeI will study in a high school soon. Everything is new to me. ____________________________【答案】One possible version: (118 words)I Expect My School LifeI will study in a high school soon. Everything is new to me. I hope my school is big and clean with a large dinning room. And the library is full of different kinds of books. So I can read them in my spare time. I can get along well with my teachers and classmates. I can help each other with my classmates. At the same time, I expect my school life is colorful, after class I can listen to music, play chess and basketball. To get more useful knowledge or information, I can surf the Internet. I will keep a good eating habit. Do exercise often to stay in good spirits. Try my best to make great progress.As long as I stick to it, I can achieve my dream.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文,題目中給出的材料較為齊全。要求:(1)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn):①生活、學(xué)習(xí)環(huán)境(餐廳,圖書館,運(yùn)動(dòng)場(chǎng)……);②師生、同學(xué)關(guān)系;③生活多彩、學(xué)業(yè)進(jìn)步;④補(bǔ)充一點(diǎn)自己的想法。請(qǐng)以“I Expect My School Life”為題,寫一篇80詞左右的短文。8.三年快樂(lè)而充實(shí)的初中生活結(jié)束了,你將進(jìn)入高中(中職)學(xué)校學(xué)習(xí)。【點(diǎn)睛】首先認(rèn)真審題,看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn);然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容,列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá);然后緊扣要點(diǎn),動(dòng)筆寫作,在寫作過(guò)程中,要注意句與句、段與段之間的過(guò)渡,必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞,使文章過(guò)渡平穩(wěn),自然流暢;同時(shí)注意語(yǔ)句要通順,詞匯書寫無(wú)誤,不要出現(xiàn)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。同時(shí)在寫作時(shí),注意連句成篇,保持文章的連貫性,要層次清楚,要點(diǎn)分明,中心突出。根據(jù)所給出的材料內(nèi)容可知文章時(shí)態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),人稱主要用第一、第三人稱。m glad that you like the film. Indeed, I have learned a lot from it as well. In school, I also encounter some problems, the biggest problem is how to strike a balance between study and life. Whenever I want to play and don39。Dear DemonI39。,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,使短文連貫、通順。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)郵件內(nèi)容結(jié)合你的情況,用英語(yǔ)回復(fù)。比如,老師問(wèn):希望是什么?班長(zhǎng)回答:希望是我們這個(gè)年代鉆石一樣的東西。影片故事設(shè)定在2075年,講述太陽(yáng)即將毀火,已經(jīng)不適合人類生存,而面對(duì)絕境,人類將開啟“流浪地球”計(jì)劃,試圖帶著地球一起逃離太陽(yáng)系,尋找人類新家園的故事。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外,還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理,有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言,大小寫是否正確,格式是否正確,詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。修改潤(rùn)色。使用的詞語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。初寫短文。有了提綱,我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求,抓住要點(diǎn),詞數(shù)符合要求。【點(diǎn)睛】寫作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起:認(rèn)真審題。亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明:這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文,很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù),語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣,準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致,特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句,如be supposed to, be kind to, keep your words, what’s more, in one’s opinion, develop bad habits, be rude to, be strict with, make a difference to以及it is a good habit to be honest中it作形式主語(yǔ)。Dear Sam,Haven’t written to you for a long time! As you know, family rules are an important part of our Chinese traditional culture. Today I’m writing to tell you something about my family rules.There are many rules that we have to follow.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________What about you? Do you have any family rules? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon!Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Sam,Haven’t written to you for a long time! As you know, family rules are an important part of you Chinese traditional culture. Today I’m writing to tell you something about my family rules.There are many rules that we have to follow. First, you should respect the old and love the young. You are also supposed to be kind to other. Next, it’s a good habit to be honest and keep your words. What’s more, you should keep studying , go to bed and get up on time. You mustn’t stay up too late.In my opinion, every family must keep rules and children shouldn’t develop bad habits, like telling lies and be rude to others. We should be strict with ourselves.The family rules also make a great difference to me. I learn to think about others’ feelings and Chinese traditional culture. What about you? Do you have any family rules? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】本文屬于材料作文,向山姆介紹你的家規(guī)并向他展示一個(gè)溫情的中國(guó)家庭。要點(diǎn)提示:三條家規(guī)尊老愛幼,禮貌待人誠(chéng)實(shí)守信,不斷學(xué)習(xí)按時(shí)作息,杜絕熬夜你對(duì)你家家規(guī)的看法......簡(jiǎn)單闡述你是如何受益的......寫作要求:,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,使行文流暢、通順;;。我們的國(guó)家主席習(xí)近平多次強(qiáng)調(diào)良好家風(fēng)家規(guī)的重要性。6.俗話說(shuō),國(guó)有國(guó)法,家有家規(guī)。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維,考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性,也更富有條理。t make go