【正文】 考點：材料作文。寫作亮點：短文用了一些短語和句式，如：do a survey about sth關(guān)于某事做調(diào)查；respect their parents,尊敬他們的父母；look after照顧；make a good plan for sth為某事做一個好的計劃；make some good friends交一些好朋友；keep healthy保持健康。因為是敘述同學(xué)的現(xiàn)在的觀點，所以句子應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時，敘述同學(xué)的觀點用第三人稱，敘述自己的觀點用第一人稱。同學(xué)主要觀點你的觀點努力學(xué)習(xí)尊重父母服務(wù)社會計劃未來……（至少兩條）注意：（1）短文必須包括表中所有內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)；（2）你的觀點至少兩條；（3）詞數(shù)：80—100；（4）短文首句僅供選擇使用，不計入總詞數(shù)?！癏ow can a teenager have a successful life?”的討論，為此你采訪了一些同學(xué)（結(jié)果見下表）。陷入麻煩，這句話意為：當(dāng)他們陷入麻煩時他們知道他們需要他們自己盡力去解決問題。in高分句型二：they know that they need to try their best to solve the problems by themselves when they are in trouble.thislifeachildrencase，they句型：高分句型一：In：短語：in one39。： 本文時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱主要為第三人稱，輔以第一人稱。t do all the things for they also need the experiences in their these experiences play an important role in a successful this way,they know that they need to try their best to solve the problems by themselves when they are in ,they sometimes can gain friendship and more love in their lives.【解析】【詳解】：本文是一篇話題作文，要求就“Snowplow Parents（掃雪機式父母）” 這一話題展開討論，并根據(jù)表格中所給出的提示內(nèi)容選擇一種觀點，結(jié)合此觀點闡述自己的看法。t understand the snowplow these parents,they control clean all the obstacles in children39。短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。自己的看法自己的看法要求：詞數(shù)：6080詞。觀點理解不理解父母出于對孩子的愛才這么做?！皰哐C式父母”的特征是不惜一切代價為孩子掃除他們生活中遇到的一切障礙，解決一切困難，以便他們可以輕松擁有成功的人生。文中 not only …but also…，help a lot，share happiness and sadness，do well in，give up, besides，so, and, a good sense of time, used to, make sb.+adj.，therefore, be proud of等詞（組）恰當(dāng)使用，使上下文意連接緊密；文章的最后I hope one day, my school and teachers will be proud of me! 表達(dá)了自己愿望與想法，使文章增色不少，值得學(xué)習(xí)。寫作中注意連詞、固定短語的交替使用，使文意連接緊密，還要注意使用豐富的語句，注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，最后最好要表達(dá)出自己的感想和看法。How time flies! My colourful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think about myself. 【答案】How time flies! My colourful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think about myself.In the past, I learnt a lot of knowledge not only from books but also from the teachers. So, I am very grateful to them. They helped me a lot! I also got on well with my classmates. We shared happiness and sadness together. We were like a big family. However, I still have a lot to improve. I didn’t do well in Maths because I gave up easily when meeting difficult Maths problems. Besides, I didn’t have a good sense of time. I used to go to school late and that made my teachers angry.Therefore, in the future, I will try my best to bee better. I will work harder and organize my life and my time better. I hope one day, my school and teachers will be proud of me!【解析】試題分析：本篇書面表達(dá)以“My Unforgettable Middle School Life”為題，結(jié)合本題所給的寫作信息，闡述自己難忘的中學(xué)生活。語言連貫、通順。短文的開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。請以My Unforgettable Middle School Life為題，根據(jù)下面的思維導(dǎo)圖，寫一篇短文介紹自己難忘的校園生活并描述對未來的期盼。句式結(jié)構(gòu)以簡單句為主，也使用了并列句、賓語從句、狀語從句等復(fù)合句，還有一些好的句型，如The best time to e here is in autumn, because it’s really cool and you can just take some light coats、Besides, Anhui is