【正文】 這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。修改潤色。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。初寫短文。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點，詞數(shù)符合要求?！军c睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認真審題。根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定并準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當增加內(nèi)容。Hello!Dear Amy, thank you for caring.Now I am working hard for the senior high school entrance examination. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________How about you? I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Li Ming【答案】例文Hello!Dear Amy, thank you for caring.Now I am working hard for the senior high school entrance examination. I have got good results in most of my subjects, but I am not happy with myself. I think I must spend more time on my studies.My parents are really strict with me. However, they care for me as well. Once upon a time, I failed in my physics exam and felt stressed and sad. They had a close munication with me and helped me solve my problems and cheer up again.My teachers are also ready to help us. They hope that we can realize our dreams. They tell us to try our best and not to give up. Life is always full of ups and downs. It39。 （2）. 第2要點和第3要點要用2—3句話作適當發(fā)揮。他們希望你們實現(xiàn)自己的理想。 （2）. 你的父母對你嚴格要求，但是也很關(guān)心你。要點如下： （1）. 雖然你大部分功課你都學得比較好，但是你對自己不滿意。要點： 不重視課外閱讀的原因1. 作業(yè)太多2. 沒有讀書習慣3. 時間花在電腦或網(wǎng)絡(luò)上課外閱讀的好處1. 更多地了解世界2. 學會如何思考3. 生活更加豐富多彩對學校或同學的建議……（至少一點）注意：1. 詞數(shù): 80個左右（開頭已給出的內(nèi)容不記入總詞數(shù)）；2. 內(nèi)容必須包括上表中的要點，可適當發(fā)揮，但不要逐字翻譯；3. 條理清楚、語句連貫；4．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的地名、校名和人名。9．目前，許多中學生不重視課外閱讀。：短語：as follows，take part in，What’s more，look forward to。文章時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時。學生除了要把所給要點提示都表達出來外，還要進行適當拓展，使文章內(nèi)容充實。8． 假如你是李華，你的英國筆友 Jack 給你寫郵件表達了想?yún)⒓幽阈Ｊ钇跒橥鈬鴮W生舉辦的漢語夏令營的愿望，希望你告知活動舉辦的具體時間地點，活動安排以及你的建議。銜接自然，順暢。句式豐富。【點睛】本文緊扣要求對家鄉(xiāng)做了簡單介紹，內(nèi)容完整，用了表格中的信息。寫作中注意表達觀點時的常用句式，注意在表達不同觀點時，連詞的使用。 狀況水污染，大氣污染...... 應(yīng)對措施立即阻止此類活動,治理環(huán)境（至少兩條）...... 感想建議環(huán)境能夠變得更好......Change for a better China________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】We all know it is being more and more important to protect our environment well. But some people don’t care about it .They throw litter into the river and even worse factories also put waste into the river, the river is full of rubbish. The air is badly polluted because there are more cars on the road these days. Factories that burn coal also pollute the air with a lot of black smoke. We hardly ever see blue skies anymore.I think everyone in our hometown should play a part in cleaning it up. We should write to the government ,they should close down the factories. Trees are very helpful and important for the environment .We can plant more trees and more trees in order to live better and more healthy .Now, Our hometown has started to face the problem, I believe we can make our country a better place if we keep trying.【解析】【詳解】環(huán)保話題是人們最關(guān)心的話題之一，請以Change for a better China為主題，結(jié)合自己家鄉(xiāng)的變化寫一篇英語短文。注意事項：，條理清楚，作適當發(fā)揮。句式結(jié)構(gòu)以簡單句為主，也使用了并列句、賓語從句、狀語從句等復(fù)合句，還有一些好的句型，如The best time to e here is in autumn, because it’s really cool and you can just take some light coats、Besides, Anhui is also famous for ancient villages such as Xidi, Hongcun and so on.、What’s more, e and watch Huangmei Opera. It’s easy to understand and won’t let you down!、I’m looking forward to seeing you here!等。第二，短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，語法規(guī)范，用詞準確，句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整，符合英語的表達習慣。短文先對Dave發(fā)出邀請，然后具體介紹了家鄉(xiāng)的位置、景點、文化等，并提出了建議?！军c睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求邀請Dave來自己的家鄉(xiāng)旅游，并介紹了家鄉(xiāng)的景點和文化。如可以使用簡單句結(jié)構(gòu)，易于掌握，不容易出錯。寫作時應(yīng)合理安排幾個內(nèi)容，分清主次，并注意上下文的連貫。,不計入總詞數(shù)Dear DaveI know that