【正文】 。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。同時還要注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。一切都準備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。通常書面表達給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。構(gòu)思提綱。審好題是寫好書面表達的關(guān)鍵。增強邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫。根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定并準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當增加內(nèi)容。Dear Angel,How are you doing? Best wishes!Yours,Cathy【答案】Dear Angel,How are you doing? I’m writing to tell you that we received the books that you bought for us. We are grateful to you and all of us are very happy。3字跡工整、語言精練、表達準確、條理清晰。寫作要求：1不得使用真實的姓名和學校名。（3）同學們將在下個月網(wǎng)購其他的英文書。2介紹活動的情況：（l）上周五，俱樂部成員們一起讀英文書。請你根據(jù)以下信息, 給Angel寫一封電子郵件，告訴她俱樂部的活動情況，并說說網(wǎng)購圖書的好處。10．書面表達假如你是英語俱樂部的Cathy,上周五你們收到了外教Angel為同學們網(wǎng)購的英文書籍。最后要細心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無誤。在寫作時，注意緊扣主題，連句成篇，要層次清楚，要點分明，中心突出。本文所給材料比較詳細，考生要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達出來。根據(jù)編輯部策劃開“A Letter to My Teacher”專欄，邀請你以信件的形式重新投稿。，稿件的首尾已在答題卡上給出，不計入總詞數(shù)：。為此，編輯部策劃開“A Letter to My Teacher”專欄，邀請你以信件的形式重新投稿。9．假設(shè)你是Beth,前段時間曾向英語?？端鸵黄}為My English Teacher Miss Zhang的短詩。d better …；I39。3. 高分亮點：短語：school gate；invite sb. to do；a lot of；plan to do。2. 例文點評：文章采取郵件格式，時態(tài)以一般將來時態(tài)為主。m looking forward to your early reply.Yours, Li Hua【解析】【詳解】1. 題干解讀：這是一篇給材料作文，屬于應(yīng)用文寫作。m looking forward to your early reply.Yours, Li Hua【答案】Dear Peter，How is it going?I am writing to invite you to visit Beijing International Horticulture Exposition. We will meet at the school gate at 7:00 . this Friday. Then we will go to Beijing International Horticulture Exposition together. We can do a lot of things there. We can not only enjoy the special and beautiful plants but also learn different cultures in various indoor or outdoor shows. We plan to stay there for a whole day. You39。請用英語寫一封電子郵件，告訴他集合的時間和地點，在那里可以做什么，以及參觀時需要準備什么。8．假如你是李華，你們學校準備組織學生本周五去北京世園會參觀。語法規(guī)范、準確。文章最后的兩句話也點明了文章的主題。作者在短文中敘述了林濤和梅梅兩人在公園里給小樹澆水、并掛牌子告訴人們注意保護樹木。點睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。在文章中點綴幾個并列句、復(fù)合句或復(fù)雜句式，調(diào)整文章節(jié)奏，提升文章檔次。寫作時要注意按照事情發(fā)展的先后順序，這樣可以使文章條理清楚。因此寫作前，要仔細看圖片，了解圖片中所發(fā)生的事情，并提煉出要點，列出所要用到的詞匯、短語等，或者列出大概的寫作提綱。請用英語寫一篇約100詞的短文。最后玩具的意義得到了升華，表達了作者的期望（I hope I can be a soldier），上升到了保家衛(wèi)國的層面，這樣的一篇作文是有深度的，能夠讓人感動的，是一篇優(yōu)秀的范文。寫作亮點：這篇文章講了自己最喜歡的玩具槍，描述玩具槍的時候有適當?shù)募毠?jié)補充，例如a toy gun wrapped by yellow cloth（用黃布包著的玩具槍），這里用到了過去分詞作定語，作者還描述了玩具槍的功能（small plastic pills），順便還描述了自己小時候玩槍的經(jīng)歷，準確使用了時態(tài)。A（n） _________ I have__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】A（n） toy gun I haveEveryone has an object that she/ he like best. So do I.In my drawer, there is a toy gun wrapped by yellow cloth. It’s a black toy gun and it can shot some small plastic pills for ten meters. When I was young, I played with other kids with my toy gun. They all admired me and put me in the place of leader. I was so happy then. When I was a little boy, I liked watching the war movies best. I was eager to have my own toy gun. One day, it was my birthday. I asked for it when my father came back. My family was poor then and my father didn’t promise me. From then, father worked harder and came back more lately. A week later, father put a box to me. A black toy gun in it! I was moved with tears. In order to get it, father worked late and hurt hims