【正文】 要求：1．語(yǔ)言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，短文連貫通順；2．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)；3．80詞左右。我們的社會(huì)在呼喚文明的回歸，但是做到文明必須縣有禮貌。河南中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)我們的國(guó)家日益強(qiáng)大，人民也變得富足因而有實(shí)力在國(guó)內(nèi)外旅游。短文中句子結(jié)構(gòu)以簡(jiǎn)單句為主，也使用了并列句和復(fù)合句以及一些較復(fù)雜的高級(jí)句式，語(yǔ)句之間也使用了較好的連接成分，如We should be polite to others and try to behave well. 、It’s kind of you to help people in need. 、Meanwhile, We can help clean up our city in order to make it clearer and tidier.、We can’t spit anywhere and we shouldn’t throw rubbish everywhere. At the same time, we shouldn’t break traffic 。文章條理清晰，有層次?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，向中學(xué)生們發(fā)出號(hào)召，共同參與到城市“雙創(chuàng)”活動(dòng)中來(lái)。寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)注意：首先英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)是不同的，不能逐詞翻譯，寫(xiě)漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ)，而應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)考慮，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯、短語(yǔ)和句型，以常見(jiàn)的主謂賓或者主系表構(gòu)成的簡(jiǎn)單句為主，穿插使用并列句或者復(fù)合句，改變文章節(jié)奏，提升文章檔次。根據(jù)這個(gè)內(nèi)容，寫(xiě)作時(shí)，把短文分成兩個(gè)層次，這樣可以使文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰、條理。題目中并沒(méi)有規(guī)定具體的寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容，而是用圖表的形式，列出了寫(xiě)作的提綱。要求：，意思連貫，語(yǔ)法正確，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范；，并做適當(dāng)?shù)耐卣梗?. 行文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名、校名或地名；4. 詞數(shù)80左右，（短文的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；Since the government created the civilized and healthy city, our living environment has improved a lot. Everyone plays an important role in building our city, so good behaviors can be seen everywhere.As junior high students,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Let’s take action now. Our actions can make a difference and lead to a more beautiful city.【答案】Since the government created civilized and healthy city, our living environment has improved a lot. Everyone plays an important role in building our city, so good behaviors can be seen everywhere.As junior high students, on the one hand, there are a lot of things we can do. We should be polite to others and try to behave well. It’s kind of you to help people in need. Meanwhile, We can help clean up our city in order to make it clearer and tidier. Also, we can plant more trees and keep off grass. On the other hand, there are many things we shouldn’t do. We shouldn’t make a lot of noise loudly in the public. We can’t spit anywhere and we shouldn’t throw rubbish everywhere. At the same time, we shouldn’t break traffic rules.Let’s take action now. Our actions can make a difference and lead to a more beautiful city.【解析】【詳解】瓊海正在進(jìn)行“雙創(chuàng)”活動(dòng)，即創(chuàng)建文明城市、創(chuàng)建健康城市，城市的生活環(huán)境有了很大的改變。自雙創(chuàng)以來(lái)，我們的生活環(huán)境得到了很大的改觀，人人積極參與雙創(chuàng)活動(dòng)，讓人點(diǎn)贊的文明行為隨處可見(jiàn)。17．（開(kāi)頭介紹了中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化面對(duì)的問(wèn)題，接下來(lái)介紹我認(rèn)為開(kāi)設(shè)傳統(tǒng)文化課的必要性的原因，最后號(hào)召更多的學(xué)校開(kāi)設(shè)傳統(tǒng)文化課。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱(chēng)為第一，三人稱(chēng)，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：Chinese traditional culture is facing……，it’s necessary for schools to……，we shouldn’t……，They can raise……，it is of great importance to……等句式的應(yīng)用。假如你是Mike,請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一封郵件，給你校英文報(bào)投稿寫(xiě)一篇短文，詞數(shù)80左右，談?wù)勀銓?duì)開(kāi)設(shè)傳統(tǒng)文化課的看法。福建中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)隨著電子時(shí)代的到來(lái)，西方文化如潮水般涌來(lái)，中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化的傳承面臨著巨大的挑戰(zhàn)。文中more convenient，is filled with, what’s more, a lot of ，however, although, spend... doing...,be bad for, in my opinion等詞（組）恰當(dāng)使用，使上下文意連接緊密；文中還多處使用了賓語(yǔ)從句、讓步狀語(yǔ)從句、動(dòng)名詞作主語(yǔ)等句式，大大增加了信息的容量，使文章增色不少，值得學(xué)習(xí)。寫(xiě)作中注意連詞、固定短語(yǔ)的交替使用，使文意連接緊密，還要注意使用豐富的語(yǔ)句，注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，最后最好要表達(dá)出自己的感想和看法。Dear Editor,Recently, our class had a discussion about whether students should learn on the Internet.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Dear Editor,Recently, our class had a discussion about whether students should learn on the Internet.Some students support it. They think online learning is much more convenient and the Internet is filled with useful resources. What’s more, learners have freedom to decide what and when to learn. However, some students don’t wele it. Although, they think there’s a lot of information on the Internet. Some information isn’t true. Also, spending a long time searching information online is bad for their eyes.In my opinion, every coin has two ideas. I think it’s better to use both the traditional way of learning and online learning. Students should use the Internet properly.【解析】試題分析：本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)以“網(wǎng)上學(xué)習(xí)（online learning）”為話題，結(jié)合本題所給的寫(xiě)作信息，闡述網(wǎng)上學(xué)習(xí)的兩種不同的觀點(diǎn)。提示：觀點(diǎn)贊成反對(duì)理由1. 網(wǎng)上資源（resource）豐富2. 可以自由（freedom）選擇學(xué)習(xí)內(nèi)容和時(shí)間1. 網(wǎng)上信息太多，有些不真實(shí)2. 長(zhǎng)時(shí)間用電腦對(duì)眼睛不好要求：詞數(shù)不少于80詞，稿件的開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。假設(shè)你是陳欣，最近某英文雜志正在討論中學(xué)生是否應(yīng)該通過(guò)網(wǎng)絡(luò)進(jìn)行在線學(xué)習(xí)。湖北中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)隨著網(wǎng)絡(luò)的不斷發(fā)展，傳統(tǒng)的學(xué)習(xí)模式受到?jīng)_擊。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。動(dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料，然后用正確的英語(yǔ)句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。在美期間，你住在Tom家，在這一學(xué)期里，你和他及他的家人結(jié)下了深厚的友誼。注意：1．詞數(shù)80左右；2．合理增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。1. 介紹Tom：為人友好，樂(lè)于助人，你們相處很融洽；2. 他在英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)方面給你的幫助；你了解了美國(guó)的文化；3. 他的父母悉心照顧你的生活，給你做中國(guó)菜。在美期間，你住在Tom家，在這一學(xué)期里，你和他及他的家人結(jié)下了深厚的友誼。14．（根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用第一人稱(chēng)，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫(xiě)等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。s more, going on a trip in holiday is another way to make me relaxed. I believe the more relaxed we are, the happier we will be healthy and learn better .Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】這是一篇要求介紹自己面對(duì)著各種各樣的壓力是如何做的。參考詞匯：stressed 注意：；；，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。假設(shè)你叫李華，請(qǐng)從以下幾個(gè)方面，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)出你的具體做法，向該欄目投稿。重慶中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)我們?cè)谏钪锌偸敲鎸?duì)著各種各樣的壓力，這會(huì)嚴(yán)重妨礙我們的學(xué)習(xí)和生活?！军c(diǎn)睛】點(diǎn)睛：首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作，在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過(guò)渡，必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過(guò)渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后，要仔細(xì)檢查有無(wú)單詞拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)誤用等，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫(xiě)是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。同時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫(xiě)太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫(xiě)的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。文章時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱(chēng)主要為第一人稱(chēng)和第三人稱(chēng)。re the persons who will make the final decision.【解析】【詳解】本文是一篇給材料作文。s good or bad to have a brother or sister. But we should respect our parents39。re afraid that the new baby will be so noisy that it may bother their study.In my opinion,it39。t get used to the change. They also worry that their parents won39。s more,they think they39。s good to have a brother or a sister. They can help each other and share happiness and sadness together. And they won39。文章開(kāi)頭已給出,不計(jì)入總數(shù)。,書(shū)寫(xiě)工整,句式規(guī)