【正文】 。但是需要注意文章邏輯，語篇順序，注意連接詞的使用和長短句結(jié)合。但是，我不能氣餒，要從失敗中找原因，從哪里跌倒，就從哪里起來，所以，第二周，我讓媽媽教我做菜，獲得了成功，而且知道了，只要不放棄，就能獲得成功。t lose my heart. This weekend, I asked my mother to teach me how to cook. She taught me how much salt I should use. Wow, the cabbages tasted good. My mother praised me and I felt very happy. Now I know that if I try hard, I will succeed.【解析】【分析】本文為材料作文，需要寫出第一次做某事，人生中有許多第一次，可以挑選一件讓自己感覺深刻，并且從中學(xué)到了許多東西的事件來寫，這樣的話，貼近生活實際，學(xué)生有話可說。（文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名和校名）【答案】The First CookingLast weekend, my parents went out and only I stayed at home. So I had to cook a meal for myself. First I washed the cabbages and then cooked it. But I didn39。”請談?wù)勀闳松凶铍y忘的“第一次”，或許是第一次做家務(wù)、第一次旅行、第一次成功……并說說你從中學(xué)到了什么或有哪些收獲。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用, 讓文章更出彩。使用了一些比較好的字句。應(yīng)用了較豐富的語言結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯，用詞準(zhǔn)確、句子通順、行文連貫、表達(dá)清楚，具有較強(qiáng)的語言運用能力。適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。寫作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要是第一人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)進(jìn)行敘述。 【答案】Saving the EarthThe earth is our home. We should take care of it. But some things we have done are bad for the earth. We have polluted the earth and made it sick. We cut down too many trees and change rich land into desert. Many factories pour waste water into rivers and lakes. Pollution has caused some serious problems. For example, much of the land is poor, some rivers and lakes are dirty. Even the temperature of the earth is rising. The earth is crying for help.What shall we do to save it? My suggestions are that we should plant more trees, put the rubbish into dustbins and stop factories from pouring waste water directly into rivers. After all, we have only one earth. We should do everything we can to protect it, or we’ll be punished and lose our home.【解析】試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文,動筆前首先要認(rèn)真審題,弄清題意。根據(jù)提示，以“Saving the Earth”為題，寫一篇80詞左右的短文。句型：Though I am not good at cooking, I can ask my mother for help；I am eager to receive your early reply。例文點評：例文采用的是三段式；用第一人稱來敘述父親節(jié)計劃；時態(tài)采用的是一般現(xiàn)在時為主，描述具體建議時，描寫細(xì)致，條理清晰。提示詞語： gift, love, opinion提示問題： ● What’s your plan for Father’s Day? ● Why do you do so? ● What do you want Peter to do?Dear Peter,How is it going? We will share the plan for Father’s Day next Yours,Li Hua【答案】例文Dear Peter,How is it going?We will share the plan for Father’s Day next week. I am going to do some meaningful things for my father. Firstly, I am going to buy a beautiful card for him. And then, I plan to cook him a big meal. Though I am not good at cooking, I can ask my mother for help.I will do this because I love my father deeply. He works very hard every day to support my family. Would you please give me some advice? I am eager to receive your early reply. Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】題干解讀：該題目屬于記敘文寫作，但寫作時要按郵件格式寫。7．假如你是李華，下周你們學(xué)校將要組織學(xué)生開展“父親節(jié)活動計劃”分享活動，你打算先分享給你們班交換生Peter，希望聽聽他的看法。注意書寫的規(guī)范：大小寫、標(biāo)點符號等的正確運用?？忌荒苓z漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和高分句式，語言要規(guī)范，信息表達(dá)清晰、完整，意思連貫。【點睛】本文思路清晰，時態(tài)運用要正確，敘述清楚條里，層次分明，所用句式句型比較高級，像If we don’t let off fireworks, cleaners don’t need to clean up so much rubbish everywhere./ They think Chinese people have been used to letting off fireworks since hundreds years ago. / I think we should follow the rule because good environment is more important than anything else.。 我認(rèn)為我們應(yīng)該遵守這條規(guī)則，因為良好的環(huán)境比其他任何東西都重要。我們應(yīng)該保護(hù)它。他們認(rèn)為中國人幾百年前就習(xí)慣放煙花了。如果我們不放煙花，清潔工就不需要到處清理那么多垃圾。另外，如果人們不夠小心，可能會引起大火。他們認(rèn)為煙花產(chǎn)生的煙太多，會造成嚴(yán)重的空氣污染。寫完以后，注意再讀一遍，看看有無單詞拼寫、標(biāo)點、語法錯誤（時態(tài)、主謂一致等）。要運用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有連貫性。仔細(xì)閱讀所給材料，認(rèn)真審題，確定主題，根據(jù)主題和所給要點列出提綱，所寫內(nèi)容必須包括表格中的信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，語句通順，意思連貫，書寫規(guī)范。時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時。你們班級的同學(xué)們就春節(jié)是否能燃放煙花進(jìn)行了討論。如，火災(zāi)……3．……(發(fā)揮至少一點)1．千百年來已經(jīng)習(xí)慣燃放煙花2．沒有煙花，過春節(jié)更無趣3．……你的觀點……(自擬至少兩個觀點)Dear Major,We have had a discussion about whether to let off fireworks at Spring Festival. All the students in our class give the ideas.