【正文】 。在說選擇城市A的原因時，用了that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句。對于優(yōu)點則重點突出，因為在城市A可以做很多事情，作者在這里用了詞組“a lot of ”。寫作亮點：本篇作文按照題目要求選擇了城市A作為自己暑假旅游的目的地。句型不要都用簡單句。熟悉英語的表達方式。食物等相關(guān)信息，要求考生對每個信息進行比較，選擇自己要去的暑假旅游目的地。10．書面表達根據(jù)下表用英語寫一篇80詞左右的短文，內(nèi)容須包括：對下表中關(guān)于（City A和City B）的全部信息進行比較，分析利弊，確定其中一個城市作為你的暑假旅游目的地。本篇文章內(nèi)容完整，符合材料要求，Elephants are the largest mammals …,及First, we should plant more trees 也使用到了比較級和最高級；Firstly,…. Secondly,…等詞的使用使文章具有層次性，條理清晰。提出倡議時可以使用We can/ We should/ Let’s/We’d better的表示建議的句子。文章共分為三個方面的內(nèi)容，首先描述大象想在所處的現(xiàn)狀，然后說明出現(xiàn)這種狀況的原因，最后為了保護的大象我們應(yīng)該如何去做。s contribution （貢獻） can make a big difference. Yours,Lihua【答案】Dear classmates,Elephants are the largest mammals on the land and they can live up to be eighty years. But now the number of the elephants is decreasing because of the following reasons. Firstly, people cut down trees in the forest, so elephants are losing their homes. Secondly, people also kill elephants for their ivory.As a result, we need to do something to help them. First, we should plant more trees to build the homes for elephants. Second, we can put up post on the street to tell people that it is against the law to kill elephants. Or we can also hold some activities in some public places to spread the idea of protecting the elephants. I believe everyone39。參考詞匯：哺乳動物mammal。要求：1）恰當運用比較級和最高級；2）80詞左右。目前數(shù)量在減少，因為：1）人們砍伐森林，大象漸漸失去家園；2）人們捕殺大象，獲取象牙。9．假如你是李華，請你根據(jù)以下提示用英語寫一封保護大象的倡議書。高分亮點：短語：Firstly；Secondly；Finally；a good way to do sth；broaden our knowledge and horizon。提示詞語：story, novel, knowledge, improve, important提示問題：● What kind of books should we read? ● Why do we read?Dear students, the World Reading Day is ing. So I’m here again to call on all of us to read more books and read good books. Li Hua【答案】例文Dear students, the World Reading Day is ing. As a middle school student, everyone should read books. Firstly, reading increases our knowledge and we can learn the world affairs without going out. Secondly, reading is a good way to improve reading and writing skills. Finally, reading can broaden our knowledge and horizon, which is important to job hunting in the future. Therefore, start to reading, no matter how old you are and what you are doing. So I’m here again to call on all of us to read more books and read good books. Li Hua【解析】【詳解】題干解讀：該題目屬于應(yīng)用文寫作，但寫作時要按照應(yīng)用文格式寫，寫作時承接短文開頭，寫出對學生的倡議。假如你是李華，請你寫一封倡議書，向全體同學發(fā)出號召。s a good idea to talk with your classmates in Chinese、I think it can help you to improve your pronunciation、In a word, if you have good ways of learning Chinese, you will learn it 。文章中的語句以簡單句結(jié)構(gòu)為主，也使用了并列句和復(fù)合句，調(diào)整了文章的結(jié)構(gòu)。其次短文使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，句式結(jié)構(gòu)符合英語的表達習慣。文章主要分成三個部分：第一段是與Sam之間的問候以及引出Sam學習漢語這一話題，并介紹寫信的目的；第二段中是提出的具體的建議，這是這篇文章的主體，所在篇幅最大?！军c睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求給Sam寫了一封信，對他的漢語學習提出了一些好的建議。為提升文章檔次，可以穿插使用并列句或復(fù)合句以及其他一些復(fù)雜句式。應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)考慮，寫完整的句子。文章應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時，根據(jù)表達需要使用恰當?shù)娜朔Q。d better read Chinese magazines or newspapers after class. You can also watch Chinese programmes on the Internet. I think it can help you to improve your pronunciation. Lastly, you can write s to me or other Chinese friends in Chinese.In a word, if you have good ways of learning Chinese, you will learn it well.Yours,Daming【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以大明的身份給Sam寫一封信，告訴他如何學好漢語，題目中從四個方面提出了建議。s a good idea to talk with your classmates in Chinese. And don39。m happy to hear from you. I know you want to learn Chinese well. Here are some suggestions.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________