【正文】 高分句型：It is +adj. + for sb. +to do sth.；there be句型；祈使句；need to do sth.。承接文章開頭，句意完整，避免漢語式英語，敘述條理清晰。主要說明要有自己的目標(biāo)，努力實現(xiàn)目標(biāo)應(yīng)做到勤奮學(xué)習(xí)，使自己不斷強大；正確面對困難，積極參加社會活動。寫作要求：，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮使行文連貫； ，字跡工整，詞數(shù)不少于80；，不計入總詞數(shù)；。請以Dream Chaser為題，談?wù)勀阕约旱挠^點。但既然選擇了遠(yuǎn)方，便只顧風(fēng)雨兼程。句型：By doing so, our world will bee more and more beautiful；we can pick up the rubbish, recycle things in our daily life, and so on。例文點評：例文采用的是一段式，人稱用的是第一人稱復(fù)數(shù)形式，時態(tài)主要用的是一般現(xiàn)在時，描述具體怎么做時，描寫細(xì)致，條理清晰。假如你是李華，請用英語寫一篇短文投稿，談?wù)勆钪心阍撛趺醋?，以及這樣做的意義。時代楷模充分體現(xiàn)“愛國、敬業(yè)、誠信、友善”的價值準(zhǔn)則。句型：被動句型，現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語，主語從句。文章條理分明，三個要點提示都已表達(dá)清楚，并進(jìn)行了適當(dāng)拓展，所給單詞也都全部用上。：該題要求寫作體裁為書信格式，所以例文用第一人稱I進(jìn)行寫作，在文章結(jié)尾也按照標(biāo)準(zhǔn)書信格式進(jìn)行了收尾。提示詞語： Chinese classes, learn, attend, culture, prepare提示問題： ● When and where will the Chinese Summer Camp be held?● What activities will be held at the Chinese Summer Camp?● What is your advice for Jack?Dear Jack,I am very glad to know that you are interested in the Chinese Summer Camp in ourschool this summer holiday . .Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jack,I am very glad to know that you are interested in the Chinese Summer Camp in our school this summer holiday.The Chinese Summer Camp will be held in our school from July 10th to July 30th this summer. The activities of this Chinese Summer Camp are as follows:First, you will attend Chinese classes, learning the meaning of Chinese characters. Second, you will take part in different parties, knowing the history of China and Chinese culture, especially Chinese holidays, which will impress you deeply.What’s more, you will have chances to visit some museums and the Great Wall. What you should prepare is a pair of shoes for the visit. If you have any questions, please tell me. I am looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua【解析】【詳解】：這是一篇提綱類書面表達(dá)，只給了一些要點提示，但都不很明確。此處because of， in one’s opinion, give up, know about, last but not least, set up, all in all, call on等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。點睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。Your opinionnecessary or unnecessaryYour reasonsthe root （根） of Chinese culture, know more about,spread, developYour suggestion…Dear editor,As we all know, Chinese traditional culture is facing a great challenge because of the rapid development if international technology nowadays. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours,Mike【答案】Dear editor, As we know, Chinese traditional culture is facing a great challenge because of the rapid development of international technology nowadays. In my opinion, it’s necessary for schools to set up traditional culture classes. First, traditional culture is the root of Chinese. As Chinese, we shouldn’t give up our traditional culture and run after Western culture. Second, traditional culture classes can give students chances to know more about our nation. They can raise their sense of national pride. Last but not least, setting up traditional culture classes can spread and develop our Chinese culture.All in all, it is of great importance to set up traditional culture classes in schools. Let’s call on more schools to set up traditional culture classes!