【正文】 語(yǔ)法或用詞方面錯(cuò)誤較多，嚴(yán)重影響了對(duì)所寫內(nèi)容的理解。 第五檔 （ 1 分－ 5 分） 未完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。漏掉或未描述清楚內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)； 語(yǔ)法和用詞方面有一些錯(cuò)誤，但不影響理解。 第三檔 （ 12 分－ 14 分） 基本完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。運(yùn)用的句式和詞匯能滿足任務(wù)要求； 完全達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫作目的。覆蓋了所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)； 英、美拼寫及詞匯用法均可接受。 One Possible Version Dear Jim, I’m writing to express my thanks for your help during my stay in the USA. I’ve been back home safely but I am still lost in the good days spent togeter with you and your family. I’m really grateful for your good care and kind help in America. Arriving there, my language was not very good, and do you still remember you help me with my presentation on Mr. Donald’s lecture? Without your help with my language, I must have fooled myself. Besides this, you took me out to so many places of interests, which brought me a great grasp of ancient and presentday America. The most touching and warmest experience was having met and stayed with your family, which is a democratic, open, friendly and encouraging family. I have to say that I love you all from the bottom of my heart. I can’t thank you more, and I hope in the near future you’d like to visit Beijing, China. Then, I can try my best to pay you back. I’d like to introduce you to all my family and friends, and I’m hoping to take you to the Great Wall, one of the seven wonders in the world. I’m looking forward to your reply. Wish you good luck! Yours, Li Hua. 第二節(jié)（ 20 分） 一、評(píng)分原則： 1．本題總分為 20 分，按 5 個(gè)檔次給分。 未能清楚地傳達(dá)信息。 內(nèi)容、條理和交際等方面基本符合要求； 所用語(yǔ)法和詞匯滿足了任務(wù)的要求； 語(yǔ)法和用詞方面有一些錯(cuò)誤，但不影響理解。 三、各檔次的給分范圍和要求： 分值 評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)說(shuō)明 第一檔 (13 分 15 分 ) 完全完成 了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。 4．拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)或書寫影響內(nèi)容表達(dá)時(shí)，應(yīng)視其影響程度予以考慮。 (請(qǐng)勿必將作文寫在答題卡 指定區(qū)域內(nèi)） 北京市 房山區(qū) 20212017 學(xué)年度高三年級(jí)第二學(xué)期 第一次模擬 考試 英語(yǔ)試卷 參考答案及評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn) 第一部分：聽(tīng)力理解（共三節(jié)， 30分） 第一節(jié)（共 5 小題；每小題 分，共 分） 1. A 2. C 第二節(jié)（共 10 小題，每小題 分，共 15 分） 7. A 10. B 11. A 第三節(jié)（共 5 小題；每小題 分，共 分） ★ 每小題超過(guò)一個(gè)詞不計(jì)分 ； ★ 拼寫錯(cuò)誤不計(jì)分； ★（ 1 1 20）人名、月份、地名首字母必需 大 寫，否則不 計(jì) 分，★（ 18） 大小寫均可。 ， 并可表述希望有機(jī)會(huì)可以給對(duì)方回報(bào)。 Parents Model Healthy Eating It should e as no surprise that the more stressed parents are at work, the greater the burden on their family is. 71 After all, the more time parents spend working, the less time and energy they have to plan and prepare healthful meals. For years, most studies have focused on the role of working mothers while fathers were ignored. They didn’t look at the family as a whole. 72 It adds a new wrinkle to the relationship between work stress and family nutrition. Moms’ work related stress is still a central factor in how well families eat because they typically do most of the food shopping and cooking. 73 The study found that when mom or dad experience high levels of work related stress, their families are eating oneandahalf fewer family meals per week, and the parents themselves report eating fewer fruits and vegetables, more fast food, and are less likely to eat breakfast regularly. It’s worth noting that the study looked mainly at low ine families who belonged to ethnic or minority groups. 74 But the implications are wide ranging. 75 Teaching kids, especially teenagers, to help with grocery shopping and to cook actual meals, instead of just putting a frozen pizza in the microwave, could be an important piece of the puzzle in helping families improves their eating habits. A. But dad’s work related stress has a large impact, too. B. As to family nutrition, the entire family plays a role even kids. C. Yet, the kids’ stress may affect the families’ nutrition, too. D. So the findings don’t necessarily apply directly to other types of families. E. It’s also probably not a surprise that this can negatively affect a family’s nutrition. F. However, a recent study does and look at the role of fathers in particular. G. It is parents who give their kids a good model to develop a good eating habit. 第四部分：書面表達(dá)（共兩節(jié)， 35 分） 第一節(jié) （ 15 分） 假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。s choices, and should not look down upon others because they do not follow the mainstream. One of my college classmates has suffered discrimination owing to his personality and clothes. He is a shy boy with a soft voice and he likes dressing in pink shirts, which makes him a little girlish. Some students often talk in the back, saying that he had no masculinity, and some even doubted that he might be gay. During group activities, some students deliberately alienate him. This drove him crazy. He plained to me, Personal behavior and clothing are my own choices. Why can39。s Shanxi Taigang Stainless Steel Co. figured out the production technique of the pen nib steel four months ago — that is, five years after the country started a ballpoint project, with Taigang as the leading participant. Wang Huimian, a senior engineer with Taigang, said microelements are essential in turning raw steel into pen nib steel with perfect performance. To work out the right proportion of different elements, Wang said, Taigang39。s Spring Festival. If travel agencies and governments can promote the need for motorcyclists to obtain accurate information before they head to the US such as the required documents, how to rent a motorbike and local traffic laws riding the range will bee a safe and great way to spend a vacation. 56. Zhao Yang’s childhood dream was to ______. A. bee a professional motorcyclist B. travel in HarleyDavidson motorcycles C. take a trip in the USA along with his wife D. travel to work on a fashionable motorcycle 57. To prepare for the motorcycle trip in the USA, Zhao Yang ______. A. made various research and checked his driving license B. took the suggestions given and chose the classic route C. joined one of the Harley Davidson clubs and got suggestions D. took lots of health examinations and bough