【正文】 – 你是否在敘述每個方法時，在開頭都已經說明了為什么要進行這個測定？ – 你是否簡要說明了你所使用的各種統(tǒng)計分析方法？ – 你所用的方法都與你的研究相關嗎？ ? 結果 – 結果展示是否符合讀者理解的邏輯性？（不一定要與你做的順序相同） – 結果是否充分展示？（以圖、表表示）。 – No ： It was observed that the solution turned red. – Yes ： The solution turned red. 或 We observed that the solution turned red. ? This observation leads us to conclude ? product of the reaction ? Calculation results。 Sketch map。 then upload your archive file under Manuscript(s) to be Revised from your To Do list. We trust in your cooperation and look forward to receiving the final version of this fine paper soon. Yours sincerely, Dr. Haymo Ross Deputy Editor 示例解析 II ATPaptamer 復合物 Adv. Mater. 2022 （影響因子 ） 選擇性 濃度梯度 對照 ? Subject: Your Manuscript for ADVANCED MATERIALS ADVANCED MATERIALS Manuscript number: MSType: Communication Title: A Gold Nanoparticlebased Aptamer Target Binding Readout for ATP Assay Correspondence Author: Fan YOUR SUBMISSION OF: ______________________________________________________ Dear Professor Fan, Thank you for your letter and the above mentioned manuscript. Please find attached the ments of our referees. I regret to inform you that on the basis of the reports we are unable to accept the manuscript for publication in ADVANCED MATERIALS in its present form. However, if you were to substantially revise the manuscript taking into account the ments of the referees we would be pleased to have the manuscript reassessed. I am sorry not to be able to be more positive at this time but hope that this does not deter you from continuing to enjoy, and submit your work to, the journal. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Dr. David Flanagan Deputy Editor ? Subject: Your manuscript for ADVANCED MATERIALS YOUR SUBMISSION OF: ______________________________________________________ Dear Professor Fan, Thank you for your letter and the abovementioned manuscript. I regret to inform you that we are still unable to accept the manuscript for publication in ADVANCED MATERIALS, a decision that is in accord with the opinion of the referee (see below). I am sorry not to be able to be more positive in this case but hope that you continue to enjoy ADVANCED MATERIALS and soon submit more work to the journal. I hope then to be able to offer you a better service. Yours sincerely, Dr. David Flanagan Deputy Editor ? Dear Professor Fan, Thanks for your , in which you asked whether it is possible for me to reconsider my earlier decision to reject your abovementioned revised manuscript. In principle every author of a rejected paper at ADVANCED MATERIALS has the right to appeal. For this it is necessary to submit a revised (or the original) manuscript and to present a rebuttal to the referees39。 4）網上投稿 Submit a manuscript – 申請賬號，然后以 author login身份登錄，按照提示依次完成。最好引用文獻作一些解釋 – 有理有據(jù) 投稿流程 1）選擇合適的 SCI期刊。 More recent studies by DD…… ? 敘述兩種觀點： AA put forward that……In contrast, BB believe or Unlike AA, BB suggest ； AA suggest……Similarily, alternatively, BB……Or Also, BB or BB also does…… ? 表示因果或者前后關系可用 Consequently, therefore, as a result……表明遞進關系可用 furthermore, further, moreover, in addition…… – 注意段落布局的整體邏輯。 – 1)如果觀點不是這篇文章最先提出的： We confirm that…… – 2)對于自己很自信的觀點： We believe that…… – 3) 由數(shù)據(jù)推斷出一定的結論： Results indicate, infer, suggest, imply that…… – 4) 在極特別時才可用 for the first time來強調自己的創(chuàng)新 …… – 5) 對所提出的觀點不完全肯定： We tentatively put forward。 ? 可明確提出本文只關心某一特定范圍的問題， We preliminarily focus on the…… ? 也可說兩者都重要，但是本文只涉及其中一種。 – 找?guī)灼嚓P的優(yōu)秀論文，把可能用到的句子摘錄下來填充到骨架中（“抄”，描紅） – 加上連接語或連接詞使之具有起承轉合 – 把句子按自己的語氣和理解改成自己的話 ? 反復修改 – 放置一段時間等印象淡了之后再讀 – 多讀幾篇相關的優(yōu)秀論文（也許有所感受） – 請人讀是否通順，是否可以理解 論文的形式 ? 同行評議的研究論文 – 全文 (article, full paper…)