【正文】 when we are upset, we need other people to give us fort and encouragement. Friendship makes life more meaningful and beautiful. ? … … How can we keep friendship? ? In order to keep a successful friendship, each friend must consider the other equal. Listen attentively when your friend shares something with you and takes seriously what he says. Treat him with respect in the pany of others. ? …… 以“ Friendship”為題，寫一篇短文 ,開頭已給出 為什么需要友誼 人人會(huì)有困難，沒(méi)有朋友難以重新開始；得意時(shí)需要分享快樂(lè)，失意時(shí)需要傾聽訴說(shuō) 交什么樣的朋友 真誠(chéng)、善良、友好、重感情、樂(lè)于助人；有共同理想和興趣 如何保持友誼 幫助、支持朋友；原諒錯(cuò)誤，信任朋友 你的觀點(diǎn) 什么是友誼？ A life without a friend is like a life without a sun. Friendship is one of the most important things in our life. _________________________ ? All of us may meet with difficulties in life。 ? If you share your success with your friends, it will add to your joy. 真正的友誼是建立在相互間的信任，友愛和尊敬的基礎(chǔ)上的。 6. 當(dāng)我們需要幫助時(shí)，能有朋友幫助我們克服困難，是很幸運(yùn)的事情。 2. 不是每個(gè)人都能認(rèn)識(shí)到建立友誼的重要性。 ? A friend in need is a friend indeed. ? 得朋友難，失朋友易。 摘抄學(xué)生作文中典型的錯(cuò)句或者不地道的表達(dá)，然后讓學(xué)生改正或者改進(jìn)。 讓學(xué)生之間學(xué)會(huì) 相互批改。 微型作文訓(xùn)練，并選取部分學(xué)生 面批 。開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。 ? What the picture conveys us is the message that it is our responsibility to make our society a good place to live in. 課文同題材仿寫 ? 在實(shí)際的考試中，寫作的形式有些完全是課本上相關(guān)的內(nèi)容，例如： M2 Unit 1 Task 中的 Step 3: Writing a report（所占的比例） 的圖表形式就是書面表達(dá)中經(jīng)常出現(xiàn)的考試形式，所以當(dāng)課堂上讓學(xué)生熟練掌握了如何寫這一類的文章后，課后的寫作就可以布置這樣的內(nèi)容： ? 2020年央視春晚的廣告收入創(chuàng)新高，但節(jié)目中的植入廣告引發(fā)了熱議。 簡(jiǎn)要描述事情的經(jīng)過(guò) 打籃球、碰撞、爭(zhēng)執(zhí) ,等等 分析發(fā)生沖突的原因 1. 遇事不夠冷靜 2. …… 談?wù)劚苊鉀_突的做法 (請(qǐng)考生根據(jù)自己的經(jīng)歷或感想 ,提出至少兩種做法 ) 參考范文 ? Conflicts with others are mon in everyday life. During the basketball game yesterday afternoon, Su Hua and Li Jiang bumped into each other, trying to catch the ball. Then they started shouting and yelling, which turned into a horrible quarrel. ? To be honest, it was Su’s fault but Li was also to blame—they were not calm enough and both said some really mean things. They cared too much about winning and losing. As a matter of fact, blocking, pushing and bumping are just part of a tough game. ? To avoid such conflicts, we should be kind to one another, which is essential to enjoy a harmonious life. It is also a virtue to five and fet, especially in such a petitive and stressful society. Instead of blaming each other, we should municate more and put ourselves in others’ place. Don’t be selfcentered and try to be considerate. We must learn to handle conflicts calmly and wisely. 四、我校高一、高二年級(jí)英語(yǔ)教學(xué)中關(guān)于書面表達(dá)的具體做法 ? 課文佳句仿寫 ? 課文同題材仿寫 ? 利用平時(shí)的教學(xué)教會(huì)學(xué)生一些寫作中的得分點(diǎn) 課文佳句仿寫 ? 如 M1 Unit 1 Reading 中有這樣一個(gè)句子： ? He also told us that the best way to earn respect was to devote ourselves to study and achieve high grades. ? 在課后布置的作業(yè)中就可以設(shè)計(jì)這樣的翻譯句： ? 英語(yǔ)老師告訴我們要提高英語(yǔ)水平的最好的方法是：花一些時(shí)間看英語(yǔ)電視節(jié)目或參加一些英語(yǔ)俱樂(lè)部。 ? 第三檔（ 1115分）： 基本完成規(guī)定任務(wù) ，整體達(dá)到預(yù)期寫作目的，有一些詞語(yǔ)和結(jié)構(gòu)的錯(cuò)誤，但不影響理解，應(yīng)用簡(jiǎn)單的詞語(yǔ)間的連接成分，是全文內(nèi)容連貫。 …… （其他方法） 注意 :，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮 ,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù) 100左右 . 4．參考詞匯：作弊 cheat 開頭 :It is known to us all that some students cheat in examination at school . Now let’s list some important points and discuss what plex structures we can use 考試偏多、偏難 不用功、懶惰 There are too many examinations. They are too difficult for us. Better: Sometimes we have too many examinations which are too difficult for us. We are lazy and don’t work hard . Better: Not only are some of the students lazy but they also don’t work hard at their lessons. Or: Some of the students don’t work hard because they are lazy. 取悅父母、老師 作弊不對(duì)、違反校規(guī) 要誠(chéng)實(shí)，努力學(xué)習(xí) They want to please their parents and teachers. Better:__________ please their parents and teachers, they sometimes cheat when _____ examinations. In order to taking Cheating in examinations is wrong. It breaks the rules of schools. Better :It is wrong to cheat in examinations because it breaks the rules of schools. We students should be honest and study hard. Better: _______________________is to be honest and try to get good results by ____________instead of _________ in examinations. What we students should do studying hard cheating 總結(jié) 2 ? 從范文入手，讓學(xué)生獲取好文章的信息 ? 好文章所具備的一些要點(diǎn) ? 從要點(diǎn)分析讓學(xué)生學(xué)會(huì)正確地表達(dá) ?