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并且一些連詞的使用,比如so, or, but等也使文章具有連貫性,是一篇不錯(cuò)的文章。時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。 象牙ivoryDear classmates_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I believe everyone39。3)應(yīng)如何保護(hù)它們(不少于三條)。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查,確保正確無(wú)誤。要求根據(jù)旅行社提供的信息將你的選擇用英文向同學(xué)們介紹。The summer holiday is ing. I think it’s a good idea to travel abroad. I hope I will have a good time there!【答案】The summer holiday is ing. I think it’s a good idea to travel abroad. I have read information about two countries——Britain and Australia. I like britain. So I think we can go to time is july 1 to july 14. Its activities include visiting the buckingham palace,visiting the british museum, and watching football first, I want us to visit the Buckingham Palace and the british museum, I think it is very helpful for us to understand the history and culture of Britain. Next I hope to watch football matches. I like football very much. It will be exciting.However, the weather in Britain is changeable, which will make our trip inconvenient. And it39。9.書面表達(dá)中考后暑假即將開始,你和一些同學(xué)準(zhǔn)備結(jié)伴出國(guó)旅行。提示詞語(yǔ):story, novel, knowledge, improve, important提示問(wèn)題:● What kind of books should we read? ● Why do we read?Dear students, the World Reading Day is ing. So I’m here again to call on all of us to read more books and read good books. Li Hua【答案】例文Dear students, the World Reading Day is ing. As a middle school student, everyone should read books. Firstly, reading increases our knowledge and we can learn the world affairs without going out. Secondly, reading is a good way to improve reading and writing skills. Finally, reading can broaden our knowledge and horizon, which is important to job hunting in the future. Therefore, start to reading, no matter how old you are and what you are doing. So I’m here again to call on all of us to read more books and read good books. Li Hua【解析】【詳解】題干解讀:該題目屬于應(yīng)用文寫作,但寫作時(shí)要按照應(yīng)用文格式寫,寫作時(shí)承接短文開頭,寫出對(duì)學(xué)生的倡議。句型:被動(dòng)句型,現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語(yǔ),主語(yǔ)從句。:該題要求寫作體裁為書信格式,所以例文用第一人稱I進(jìn)行寫作,在文章結(jié)尾也按照標(biāo)準(zhǔn)書信格式進(jìn)行了收尾。以及狀語(yǔ)從句等;然后緊扣要點(diǎn),動(dòng)筆寫作,在寫作過(guò)程中,要注意句與句、段與段之間的過(guò)渡,必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞,使文章過(guò)渡平穩(wěn),自然流暢;最后,要仔細(xì)檢查有無(wú)單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)誤用等,還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理,有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言,大小寫是否正確,詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。例文點(diǎn)評(píng):例文采用的是三段式;用第一人稱來(lái)敘述為改善環(huán)境我們能做什么;時(shí)態(tài)采用的是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),描述建議時(shí),描寫具體,條理清晰。6.環(huán)境保護(hù)人人有責(zé), 如果我們每一個(gè)人都能珍愛美麗地球 保護(hù)自然資源,相信我們的家園會(huì)越來(lái)越美好。全文敘述清晰,層次清楚,主次分明。但為提升文章檔次,也應(yīng)穿插一些并列句結(jié)構(gòu)或復(fù)合句,以及使用一些復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu),如非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞、被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)等。短文應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),注意謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的正確形式。5.書面表達(dá)假如你是華,你的英國(guó)筆友對(duì)中國(guó)文化很感興趣,想到中國(guó)旅行感受中國(guó)文化。句式結(jié)構(gòu)以簡(jiǎn)單句為主,敘述清晰、簡(jiǎn)潔。語(yǔ)句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分,使文意連貫。學(xué)生們可以從自身的經(jīng)歷和體會(huì)出發(fā),選取生活中常見的場(chǎng)景進(jìn)行介紹。 I