【正文】 最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無誤。Mother為主題寫一篇短文介紹你的母親和你之間的故事，參加某英語網(wǎng)站正在舉辦的征文活動(dòng)。ll save money and buy beautiful clothes that make her look still young．I39。ispersonneedMotherWebestmy參考詞匯：give第二部分：文章主體部分——具體介紹《游子吟》（Song of the parting son）這首詩。時(shí)態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。9．假如你是李華，你的美國朋友Jack熱愛中國的唐詩宋詞。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。優(yōu)點(diǎn)（advantage）；節(jié)約時(shí)間；避免擁擠、勞累，品種多缺點(diǎn)（disadvantage）， 看不到商品本身， 造成浪費(fèi)你的觀點(diǎn)……提示詞匯：網(wǎng)購shopping online。短文中還使用了較豐富的句型和短語，如They found that a young tree needed watering and it was going to ；再如So they decided to do something for the young tree這句話中使用了句型decided to do ；After that, they quickly got water and watered it carefully. Both of them were working hard. Their teacher, Miss Li, spoke highly of that, speak highly of等等。整篇文章按照事情發(fā)生的先后順序敘述，條理清晰。語句之間注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫。通過分析可知，這篇短文講述的是過去發(fā)生的事情，應(yīng)用一般過去時(shí)態(tài)，注意謂語動(dòng)詞形式的變化，尤其是不規(guī)則動(dòng)詞的過去式形式。要求：。亮點(diǎn)說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，主謂一致，在文中使用了時(shí)間狀語從句，定語從句，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如have fun，in order to，as for，in my opinion等。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。要求：1. 意思連貫，語句通順；2. 詞數(shù)80詞左右；短文的開頭已給出（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)） 3. 參考詞匯： at a fixed time 定時(shí)emergency 緊急情況 cpany sb. 陪伴某人Ladies and gentlemen,Thank you for attending our robot show. Now I’d like to introduce my new invention to all of you. 【答案】Ladies and gentlemen,Thank you for attending our robot show. Now I’d like to introduce my new invention to all of you.I invented the new robot mainly to help the elderly at home. It can cook meals and do some washing at a fixed time. When old people feel alone, it can also acpany them by having a chat, playing chess or doing exercise. What’s more, it can deal with some emergencies. For example, if an old man falls ill suddenly, the robot will call doctors immediately for help.I’m sure my new invention will be a great help to the elderly. I think in the future people will live a more fortable life with the help of new robots.【解析】亮點(diǎn)說明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢?！军c(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。如：…….（舉1例）要求：1）表達(dá)清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫； 2）必須包括表格中所有的相關(guān)信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮； 3）詞數(shù)：100詞左右（短文的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；4）不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名等?；厩闆r張陽，陽光中學(xué)九年級(jí)二班學(xué)生興趣愛好1. 喜歡閱讀。點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。Dear fellows, The Dragon Boat Festival, also called the Duanwu Festival, is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese calendar. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.【答案】Dear fellows, The Dragon Boat Festival, also called the Duanwu Festival, is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese celebrate the holiday on June18 this year . People hold the dragonboat races in memory of Qu Yuan,one of the greatest poets in China. We can watch the dragonboat races and eat a kind of Chinese food named Zongzi during the Dragon boat Festival. People always hang Calamus and Moxa on the wele to experience this traditional festival with friends from all over the world.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，向來自不同國家的同學(xué)介紹中國傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日——端午節(jié)?！军c(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢